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Reviews for The Weight of the Heart

By : Daydreamer79
  • From blueh on August 01, 2009
    Oh no!! Is Madara gonna torture Naruto?? NuUuuuu~~

    ~Dee
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  • From Gingitsune32 on July 31, 2009
    I had been reading this story since the beginning & I have to say that you have utterly captivated my interest! This plot is totally unlike any other story I have read & I have read quite a number of fanfiction. I can't wait to see where you continue to take us on this story!
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  • From dhur on July 30, 2009
    Ahhh cliffy!!! i always look forward to reading your new chappies and this one is no disappoint. I liked the conversation between naruto and ita. it kinda broke into a beginning of itachi's humanity. Definitely loved it!!! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on July 20, 2009
    Ohhh, what a horrible place to leave it. That was an amazing chapter and my motto is that if sex doesn't change you or your relationship it isn't worth having... or in this case writing about. You did amazing! Thank you and I love you're other story as Well. kisses
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  • From dhur on July 20, 2009
    yay new chappie!!! thanks for updating!!! sorry about the lack of comment lately! FInally Itachi gets naruto but he's such a butt.......I wonder if naruto comes to his rescue!! I definitely like where this story is going! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From serenagold on July 20, 2009
    Oh shit!~ Insense! Itachi made a huge error trying to distance himself from Naruto. He should know better by now that that's an impossibility.

    The sex scene... perfection. I loved their struggle for dominance and additionally I always love a feral Naruto in the bedroom. =^^=


    Although I'm really wondering now what role Naruto plans to play in the upcoming war. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ItaNarulover on July 20, 2009
    OMG.... *lies twitching on the floor in a puddle of blood*

    I can't believe I missed a chapter! But I'm so glad I got to read it now along with another one. You see that twitching body over there in the puddle of blood, yeah her over there, that's me, no kidding, I mean it. That's how I ended up after reading these chapters. The new one caused the most of it but the previous one contributed a lot. Why you might ask? Well, let me tell you...
    You're one heck of an authoress, those two chapter were as amazing as the rest, if not more. And not just because of the smut, I'm not that perverted XD. The plot thickens and I'm enjoying every second of it. I liked how Naruto finally gave in to Itachi, but it tore at my heart to read that Itachi still treats Naruto as a slave and a possession and nothing more, especially since Naruto became so saddened by it. Though, who wouldn't be?
    Madara seems to play a big part in this story as the antagonist, and I'm curious to see whether he'll become as fascinated with Naruto as the Uchihas are. Perhaps only because of Naruto's powers and heritage, but I got an inkling that Madara just might steal Naruto out of Itachi's hands. I don't know what will happen really, that's for me to find out when the next chapter will show up, but a girl can hope can't she? Now that Naruto's turning into a more Kyuubi-looking state and war is upon them, the excitement grows. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat here. Eh, yeah, I just crawled up from the floor a while ago, typing with bloodied hands is difficult, too slippery for my tastes.
    Anyway, try to suppress that horrible mental image and keep up with the good work.
    Good luck with the writing and take care.
    Hugs =^_^=
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  • From Ikippiki on July 07, 2009
    Man, Naru better watch out! You made an error in the chapter you said "He watched as Naruto placed the blonde on the bed and smoothed the clean linen sheets across his body" didn't you mean "He watched as Itachi placed the blonde... blabla" instead?
    Anyway I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
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  • From bloodhill on June 27, 2009
    Truly fantastic story.
    I love it and can't wait for more. ^_^
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on June 24, 2009
    loving it so far keep it up!!!1
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  • From DemonicKitsunechan on June 15, 2009
    This is, AWESOME! xD YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! xD This fic is so COOL! xD With Naruto being a guard the Fields of Hetep and Iaru and Itachi a pharaoh in Ancient Egypt! That spells FREAKING AWESOME! xD
    Please UPDATE NOW! xD
    D.K.-chan
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  • From serenagold on June 15, 2009
    Wow. I think knowing the truth has only made Itachi want him more. ^^

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 13, 2009
    Yay, another chapter! *desperately trying to cover her bleeding nose as she's typing* XD
    Thank you for updating so quickly, that totally made my day, I'm so happy right now.
    And what made me even happier is that fact that Naruto didn't die, I was worried for a while but by the end of the chapter I could sigh with relief because he pulled it through. The Kyuubi-thing was well thought out, that it would appear each time he would find himself close to dying. I wondered how you would put Kyuubi in the mix and you did so brilliantly.
    The last part was my favorite one, go figures XD, it was so incredibly deliciously hot....just wow. They haven't even gotten to the foreplay yet and I'm already suffering from blood loss... you'll probably kill me by the end of this fic. XD And like I said before, the description of their reactions, surroundings and actions was amazingly written, it was very dreamlike and I really, really liked it a lot.
    I could probably write several pages of what I love about this story and its chapters, but that would be too time consuming and I'm pretty sure you'd find it annoying. XD Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the continuation.
    I'm curious about what Madara will do next, how Naruto and Itachi's relationship will develop further and if Sasuke will change his approach to Naruto after the incident.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing, but remember not to overexert yourself. An exhausted authoress won't do! ;P
    See you later. Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From Ikippiki on June 13, 2009
    Hehe I wonder what Itachi will do when he realises that Naru came on the sheets... mmmh Naruto better run.. But I sure as hell hope he won'.. hehe. Will Sasuke find someone in this fic?
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good work!
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  • From on June 13, 2009
    More please! God, I can't wait to see Madara's face when he get's a look at cutie Naruto. He'll probably be like:
    "Damn! I also killed that hottie!!!" XDDDDDD
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