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Reviews for Rough Beginnings

By : ShadowReaver
  • From ScereyahaDreamweaver on October 04, 2009
    Seems great so far. I'll have to check the date on it.. I hope you are still writing. I'm not certain why everyone seems to place Dei as having used drugs... But the way yoou have fleshed out th echaracters is very interesting regardless.
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  • From gaara89 on July 05, 2009
    Are you planning on continuing this? Because I really like it. It's been a while since you updated.



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  • From gaara89 on May 18, 2009
    I think this was a very good chapter. I, as always, will be waiting for the next one. You did write Pein very well in this chapter.




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  • From gaara89 on April 30, 2009
    Very sweet. But the chapter saved with no spaces between the paragraphs again, so it was a little hard to read. Update soon! I'm really enjoying it so far!
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  • From gaara89 on April 19, 2009
    Aw! Itachi's so confused and cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!


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  • From gaara89 on April 09, 2009
    Tween Itachi is absolutely adorable. I can't wait to see more of him, and how he gets accustomed to the Akatsuki. I will be waiting for the next installment. I'm glad to hear that your finger is better!


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  • From gaara89 on April 05, 2009
    Aieee!!! Itachi's so cute with the way he cuddles up to Kisame! Good job again, though I will point out that you should put some spaces between the paragraphs in this second chapter. It was a little difficult to ready. I'm sorry about your finger, hopefully it gets better soon. I'll be waiting for an update!


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  • From gaara89 on April 03, 2009
    Will you be continuing this? I hope so...I'm still not quite sure if you're going for KisaIta here, but if you are...I'd like to see more. It's hard to find good ones. I'll be looking out for an update if you ever do.


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