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Reviews for The Grim Reaper

By : KeelarChan
  • From TheWidow on March 29, 2009
    I still like where this is going, you haven't dissapointed me ^.^ And don't worry about the lemon.... no need to ruch the anticipation ;) And may I add a thought about the lemon? is it NaruSasu? or SasuNaru? Personally I'm a fan of NaruSasu but either way works.


    My babbles and guesses for The Gods of Death: They're either the Last Hokages and Naruto's dad is on it and like theres a big commotion of his son being with Death? Or Itachi's on it with Orochimaru and Orochimaru says no to Sasuke's idea because he wants him for himself? Or Kakashi and Iruka? ......I could go on for days but I'll leave you with that though this time, I think I'm way off on my guesses. I write nothing but drama/angst/romance. Lol, sorry about rambling.

    Anyways I like it and wait for the next update!
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  • From Mija on March 28, 2009
    Obvious??? omg I am so clueless...Gods of death...hmmm Itachi? Pein and Orochimaru? They seem creepy enough to be Gods of death lol, anyhow oooh my gosh, the punishment is here, and what is Sasuke thinking??? And if Naruto stays in his body it will rot while he lives in it??? but why?? and how did Naru die anyway?? He just went to sleep, was he supposed to have a heart attack or something??? soo many questions and I cant wait to find out more...oh oh the council will be the Gods of death huh?? lol I'm just guessing, they seem to always be the judging kind...stupid council lol, anyhow thanks for the wonderful read, cant wait for the next chapter, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From TheWidow on March 27, 2009
    I generally liked the idea of the fates. the Photo album represented to the pictures of the past. The Phone means you can connect with all the latest (present) news. And the book is the not knowing the end (future).


    I like where this is going and if my discription is wrong on your potrayal of the Fates, sorry about that but that's what I see.
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  • From Mija on March 27, 2009
    hehe I like it, I think the fates was such a GREAT idea and omg having Ino be a fate was soo good, I can just pictuere her, I can see Tsunade and Hinata, they seem to fit, but Ino?? bold choice and a good one, loving this so far, but if the fates can only show him someones life, how can they help him with the WHOEVER it is that hes in trouble with??? ooh I cant wait to see who that is and what he will do hehe, ty for the read, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From Vesca on March 27, 2009
    Very interesting!! I look forward to seeing this story develop.
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  • From butterflies1974 on March 26, 2009
    Wow, I really liked it! And putting the "Fates" in the story was brilliant. Sasuke the 'angel of death' perfect! I really liked your way of describing the things that we as a reader need to know, and thank you for not going over board. I think that any more detail would have made the pace too slow and would bogged down the story. Your pace for the story is just right (not too fast but not too slow). Thank you for a great story and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Munez on March 26, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this so far. It's original and intriguing. Update soon, yeah?
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  • From Prism0467 on March 26, 2009
    Coolness.
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  • From guitarmania2007 on March 26, 2009
    Nice, I can't wait to see where you take this, I'm anxious!
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  • From ItaNarulover on March 24, 2009
    Wow, this is a great start for an, what I believe to be, amazing fic.
    It's quite original and I really like your writing, it's descriptive and easy to understand.
    Can't wait to see how you'll develop this.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From Mija on March 24, 2009
    hmmm nice, I like it so far, but from what Naruto stated about his life, he doesnt seem to be some superhero or possesor of majic, is Sasuke dissappointed??? I must know more, cant wait for your next update I hope it is soon..ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From MichiyoInue on March 23, 2009
    WHAT? WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT? *spaz* I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Munez on March 23, 2009
    This is off to such a good start, you have no idea!
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