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Reviews for Saviors

By : Kurokit
  • From NarutoVixin on January 21, 2010
    damn that is some fire you started there im glad i found Life Anew over on ygallery im hopeing its even half as good as this one was even so im going to beg for a second chapter or sequel
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  • From sesshyfreak on November 30, 2009
    Hello, my sweet, sweet, lovely one. I adore this story. Usually, I'll admit, I don't review. But I had to for this one. It was simply amazing. I was actually wondering if I could USE this story to make another one like it. It takes something truly fantastic to get me motivated, but I just want to write another one like this 'Midoriko's way'. Onegai? :3 (sesshy_is_hot@hotmail.com)
    I really hope there's more where this one came from, because I'm starving for more.
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  • From ANON - DemonicKitsune-chan on June 12, 2009
    I think that Saviors is an AWESOME FIC!
    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE ItaSasuNaru but (lol) It's very hard (lol) to come (lol) by.
    I think you should add more chapters to this though. It would be better as a multi-chapter fic. ^^
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  • From ANON - yaoihime22 on April 14, 2009
    best 3some oneshot that i have read a sequel to it will be so delicious
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on April 07, 2009
    I really enjoyed this. I love the three together and must wonder, like the others before me, if perhaps there might be a sequel??
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2009
    That was SO HOT!!! You should write more!!
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  • From ANON - Kirai on March 29, 2009
    That story was Hot I loved it!!! I enjoyed how Sasuke had to be held back and that Itachi was glareing so hard to Sasyke about Naruto's 'too long' of a nap.
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  • From ANON - RedGummies on March 25, 2009
    *Squeals* that was so hot! I loved it. I'm not sure if I could actually give you constructive criticism so the best I can do is tell you how much I loved the story; please right more!
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  • From demona013 on March 24, 2009
    so far so good.
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  • From Mija on March 24, 2009
    omg HOT, thats all I can say...whew!
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  • From ANON - V on March 24, 2009
    great story i hope it will be continued, l'd like to know what is Akastuki's new goal, if nNaruto will end up pregnant and how all three will deal, raised the child or children.

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  • From ANON - t-chan on March 23, 2009
    It's not bad. The porn was decent and it's a neat concept, but it was a little short (and as such it felt a little rushed) and there were a few things that were jarring. I get that you don't want to get too deeply into Naruto's conflicted feelings about leaving since this is a PWP, but if you're going to introduce the element at all you should expand on it a bit. Also, that one line of Sakura hate was totally out of place and really threw me. There are places in which it's proper to express your dislike for a character, but a fanfic isn't really one of those places. Even if you don't like her character (which is understandable since she can be extremely irritating), you should just not mention it unless it's actually relevant to the plot. Seeing that mention of her was bizarre - I was getting into the minds of your characters and all of a sudden you injected yourself in there and it really took me out. And even if you're going to say that the characters dislike Sakura as well, it wasn't important to what was going on at the time and so it was probably better left out.

    That said, it's a decent story. I hope you keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on March 23, 2009
    Wow, that was hot!! Really great story, it's too bad it's only a oneshot, I'd love to read more!
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  • From ANON - kanaro on March 23, 2009
    wow, that was hot! Good job.
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