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Reviews for Kyuubi

By : ElfenDream
  • From glow-in-the-dark on December 01, 2012
    Oh sweet baby Jesus this is good. Like, not just a little bit good, but amazingly good. Even though the characters have been written into an AU you've written them in such a way that they still adhere to their originals so wonderfully. And the little back stories you give here and there makes everything just that more believable, like this is actually happening right now. And Kyuubi! What an evil fucker you've made him! It's absolutely perfect! But poor Kiba, his recovery won't be easy. And Gaara, Ooooooooooo everything about how you wrote him makes menlove him that much more!!
    Needless to say, I am a new and now loyal fan of yours and await the next chapter update on this one. Eagerly.

    And thank you so much for letting Minato live, although it's gunna be awkward as fuck when Naruto gets back and.... Yeah.
    XD
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  • From ANON - Just_me on February 13, 2011
    I’ll be very honest with you when I thought this was going to be one of those ‘Kyuubi takes over Naruto and wreaks havoc’ fics I read waaaay to many times to find amusing anymore.
    I’m actually glad I listened to the voice in the back of my head to give this one a chance (because there should be a good one between the thousands that suck). Reading this monster in one go I never thought I’d be happy, laughing (come on, a duck tattoo on your ass deserves a laugh), curious, nervous, angsting my little heart out, feel angry, feel beyond pissed, cry and have my imagination fuck me over with either gore or lovely perverted images. You write the emotions of the characters so well, that it leaves (and left) me in an emotional rolercoaster.
    At the end of chapter 11 I was growling. Really growling, because you piqued my interest and now you leave me with such a cliffhanger. (Lol at Kankuro, thinking Kurenai could go zombie on him. XD)
    Kyuubi is, in a very twisted way, exactly what I expect from a demon. The taunting, the evil. Absolutely briljant. You portrayed every character wonderfully. Even the formerly possessed Gaara, a character that appeared later and had a quick introduction… he fits so great. Your story is my new exorcist movie.
    I hope you don’t mind me copying this story to Word so I can read it over and over and over and over. I’m pretty sure I won’t tire of it pretty soon. It’s blasphemy that you had such few reviews on this.
    Even though your muse had dwindled, please, please, please continue this fic.

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  • From ANON - seximonki on July 09, 2010
    Oh my fucking god. This story has got me so on edge, its ridiculous. My heart is just pounding away like crazy and im all tensed up. Seriously, one of THE best fiction plotlines i think ive EVER read.

    Absolutely amazing.

    Normally, Im not a fan of overly evil Kyuubi (not that I like him being Naruto's BFF either; thats a little too weird), but the way you depict Kyuubi in this is so unbelievably amazing I just cant get over it. He's cruel, ruthless, sick, and perverted. Just the way I like him.

    I'm also definitely liking that Orochimaru is one of the good guys (as good as he can be at least). He's my number one fav character in Naruto. I love him so much I had to go out and buy a bunch of Orochi-plushies.

    It's really too bad about Minato though. Poor guy never manages to live through any fanfiction I read with him. But the whole chapter with his death and the way Kyuubi goes about just absolutely breaking his spirit and demoralizing him had tears in my eyes. I was actually at night school while reading that chapter and ended up causing a bit of commotion when I suddenly started bawling in the middle of class lol.

    I cant help but wonder how Naruto will behave when (if) he ever breaks free of Kyuubi. The amount of guilt he'll feel is horrible.

    Anyway, Im totally looking for the next chapter and the eventual conclusion of this fic. Id really love to see how it all plays out.

    Btw, Gaara is SUCH a sexy beast
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  • From ANON - Oni on July 10, 2009
    This story is amazing! I have not been this horrified by a fanfic since ... don't know when. I was actually too afraid to walk through my house in the dark after reading all 8 chapters.
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  • From GudenMulle on July 09, 2009
    Oh my god..
    This is so freaky!!! so scary!
    And so incredibly sad!
    Thank yyou so so much for continuing this, I've been checking on it a few times,
    and I was thrilled when I saw these two new chapters!
    Scary scary!
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  • From serenagold on June 18, 2009
    Oh my. What will they do next?? O_O
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  • From arabuzumaki on June 15, 2009
    OMG I pictured him setting the house on fire not roasting kiba like that!!! OMG that was some truly gruesome s***. hmm. i hope kiba will recover with the least scars possible. kyuu really is a demon!
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  • From butterflies1974 on May 19, 2009
    Wow, this story is intentse. I can't wait to read the rest.
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  • From Kingcobra on April 26, 2009
    Aw, no. Aw. no.

    I KNEW something like this was gonna happen when Kiba got cuffed to the bed!

    Really, really hoping now that someone will come and help Kiba. He really doesn't deserve to die here.
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  • From serenagold on April 25, 2009
    Yikes!! Thats pretty dark! (And, of course, entirely awesome!) heheheh

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Mulle on April 25, 2009
    Holy fuck.. i'm so glad i didn't finish this last night, i proberly would have had trouble sleeping!
    this is so.. eerily good. good isn't really sufficient, it's freaking fantastic.
    i really REALLY like this. it's scary but not ridiculously so. it has the smut, but not too much.
    i'm impressed! like, big time!
    while reading the first chapter i was skeptic because, i don't know, there was something missing, and it just kept getting better!
    i was so sad at the minato scene. so sad. i had hoped that he would find some other way around it, he is supposed to be a genius, yes?
    but i had had hopes that kibas animalistic senses would save him. please don't kill kiba in that fire, i love him.
    please continue this soon, it made that little knot of fear in my stomach that i get when reading/watching a good horror story/film.
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 24, 2009
    oh kyuubi you evil bastard!!! who will save poor kiba lol.
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  • From serenagold on April 14, 2009
    Damn it Iruka! You're giving the devil nothing but opportunity! Sasuke and Kiba are doomed!! lol

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 13, 2009
    oh wow it's getting so intense. i hope kiba believes sasuke. oh that kyuubi really is a confident one lol.
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  • From SheaButter on April 03, 2009
    amazing amazing; as per usual. I didn't know you were here at AFF as well as y! but now I know and I plan on totally raping your stories; again. :)
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