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Reviews for The Blessed Realm

By : susanna
  • From Dragon7 on October 09, 2012
    Sakura such I bitch I wish she will just go home, I can't wait to read what happens at the party.
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 26, 2012
    WOW! I just find your fic and almost jump of my chair when i saw how many chapters have you writen!!!!
    Nuts!!! But congrats! You got a lot of imagination!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 03, 2011
    "Our strategy is to get him into a situation where surrender is his best option."

    How nice for them. So they're going to persuade the crazy ninja space-time master that he should surrender... how, exactly? That's not a strategy, that's wishful thinking.

    The thing is, you're writing this NaruSasu fic about the effect living somewhere more like the modern world would have on their characters... but then you've got this sort of political thread about how Naruto still wants to defeat Akatsuki and become Hokage. And he can't do that from Music Town. So it seems like he's behaving selfishly, because there are people in Konoha depending on him, and he says he wants to help them, but he's not really doing anything about it. (Okay, he gave an interview and he's trying to get a book reprinted. So how does that help him influence the Daimyo? How does that help him build relationships with foreign leaders? How does that help him make contacts with resistance to Danzou inside Konoha? These are all things he should be thinking about, and he's not.) I know in this chapter you're sort of suggesting it's not Naruto's problem - and I'd agree it's not up to him to establish world peace for everyone - but I'm Alright So Screw Everyone Else isn't an attitude I can /ever/ see Naruto adopting.
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  • From Dragon7 on March 16, 2011
    Great chapter I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to have a child of their own.
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  • From ANON - A Big Fan on February 07, 2011
    I have to say that I loved your first story The Canalized River., even if it didn't have a single lemon in it. I liked it very much and the way you wrote it, Ireland need a lemon. As for this story, the lemons are there and they are good. ............. However, I have read every chapter of this story, stuck with it from the beginning. But I find myself less and less likely click on it when you update. Not because you writing has changed because it hasn't, but due to the fact that it feels this story is never going to end. It has gotten far to long with a plot that seems to be going no where. It appears that you yourself don't know how the story will end, that is why you keep adding chapters that has nothing to do with the plot of the story at all. I wonder if you have written yourself into a corner and don't know how to get out of it. Personally all this random stuff with Sasuke, him wanting to go to the police and him wanting to be punished is not needed. The original plot was for them to bring down danzo and you have strayed so far from it, which again begs the question do you even know how the story will end if at all. It seems you are more concerned about them experiencing new things then actually continuing the plot. I'm not trying to flame you as i do like your stories it is just this story has gotten way, way to long and I have noticed you are losing readers and you hardly get any reviews anymore which is very likely directly related to the length and endless plot. It is your story and you can write how you want, but you should probably start wrapping this story up soon before it goes so long that nobody will be reading it because there will never be an ending.

    Again I'm not trying to flame you, I like the way you write, and I'm sorry if seem harsh, that isn't my intention. In fact I have put off writing this review for several chapters, hoping things would start changing, but they haven't so I broke down and wrote this review. I'm sorry if you take this as a flame, but all I am doing is just offering you my concerns for the story.



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  • From ANON - the horseman of death on January 30, 2011
    sasuke you dolt can't leave well enough alone can ya ya like a dog licking stitches not smart, oh well, we'll see susanna how things go.

    you know where to find me if you want to talk *stern fatherly look at the authoress*
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  • From cynaga on November 07, 2010
    I admire the way you have stuck with this story, expanding the details and exploring moral issues.
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  • From ANON - Nivell on October 31, 2010
    Sasuke and Naruto bonding with the baby...too cute. But the mood was ruined when Sasuke talked about his little cousin..*sniffles*
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  • From ANON - Zellez on October 03, 2010
    Aw, this had a somewhat cute atmosphere to it. Naruto and sasuke being so comfortably around one another was just so cute. I like how you mention Narutos true grinning smile from when he was young of which had made even Sasuke smile a bit. Thanks for writing this! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Zellez on October 03, 2010
    Haha, sasuke was freaking out and utterly shocked when two males began dancing for gay pride day. I laughed when he asked what they had to be proud of. Anyways, thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Zellez on October 03, 2010
    Heh, I really like how sasuke is following naruto around and feels uneasy in the crowds. I also like how team tala decided to stay with naruto even though sasuke had just said they'd be leaving soon. Still liking the story so thanks!
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  • From ANON - Zellez on October 03, 2010
    Woohoo! Getting interesting, very interesting indeed. At first when I read the summary I had assumed that there would be a portal to the modern world that we live in. I was wrong, obviously, but this town in the west still seems interesting. Yay! Sasuke and naruto meet all so suddenly! Thanks for writing, I'm liking the story so far!
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  • From ANON - Colette on September 05, 2010
    It's a complete cultural shock every time between them and the locals. Really funny some times and sad others. I like it a lot. It always reminds me something I througth after the chunning exams: "If they had a psycologic test to be accepted as trainners like the police in the real world, half of them wouldn't even start the Academy". They are so messed up. But they are at the same time, interesting for that.
    See youn in the next one!
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  • From serenagold on August 31, 2010
    The legal system doesn't always work when you need it. I love Naruto's confusion at the law.

    Also, I keep feeling like "OMG the police took down their information!! Word of this is going to get back to Konoha!!" lol

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on August 23, 2010
    Sasuke is so conflicted.
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