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By : susanna
  • From ladygizarme on August 23, 2009
    I'm really, really enjoying this story. Your interpretations of the things that have happened, and things that could happen, and how these characters feel about/react to them is always very insightful to me. This latest chapter (21) is my favorite so far, with Sasuke telling Naruto about Itachi (without calculating it properly), Sasuke showing more emotion about it in front of Naruto (even if Naruto couldn't see his tears), and the way they both comforted each other. And, of course, Naruto's promise. It made my heart ache, but also made me happy.

    I wonder what Sasuke's reaction will be to reading The Gutsy Ninja.
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  • From serenagold on August 17, 2009
    Aw... I felt so sad when Naruto flashed through the fear of loosing his house guests. Also, Sasuke wants to ask Naruto to join his team? lol Good luck. I hope they all stay in town with Naruto. ^^


    Also, I loved Karin's self consciousness over her scars.
    Keep up the great work
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  • From kinai26 on August 09, 2009
    Oh now we´re getting somewhere #smirks# I can hardly wait for next weeks update.
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  • From kinai26 on August 02, 2009
    Thank you for yet a great chapter. I as am fellow writer know how tough it is to update fics, so don´t overwork yourself, we, your fans will be here, waiting somewhat patiently heh heh.

    I like the new development of this story, they are getting closer and more open...and Sasuke, so cute, is interested in gay couples heh heh, i wonder how long it´ll take before he begins to seriously hit on Naruto and kiss him X3
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  • From ANON - CR on August 02, 2009
    you have excellent writing skills. However, Sasuke and Naruto feel very OOC, more so in this chapter than anyother. I think the reason is they're way of speaking. both are very skillful, and well worded. they don't use contractions or slang. They are too elegant. I think if you reread, you'd notice that no teenager, much less a teenage boy would speak like that. not even Sasuke.

    I would pick up some of the manga and read some of their dialog. get a feel for their individual ways of speaking- in this chapter it could have been a single person talking, there was no difference between the feel of the two.

    otherwise, it's an interesting chapter.
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2009
    I found myself enjoying your presentation of Sakura. She's one of those characters that had a lot of potential, but just failed at proving her worth. Now, after the time skip, she's this mature individual who has fully realized her potential as a ninja... but aside from her sensitive nature towards other, she's pretty much a stranger. I'm a little behind in the manga, so things could have changed, but overall, I think Sakura is what she is and you just got to take her with a grain of salt. Not everyone should have some crazy history and perhaps you need characters with a little stability in their lives, you know. I actually have no idea where I'm going with this, so I will just stop rambling now. lol.


    Your whole opening sequence with Naruto rejoicing that Hawk is staying was touching and delightful.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From kinai26 on July 26, 2009
    Cool XD I loved the letter. Naruto gets some info about his home and about Danzou´s madness. I personally hope that he´ll end up helping Sasuke in one way or the other when my favorite raven sets out to kill the old fucker heh heh.

    I love long chapters, and I must admit that I am addicted to your story. It is very well written and entertaining.

    I agree with your prediction of the canon, I don´t think that Naruto will return to Konoha any time soon XD
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  • From ANON - kinai26 on July 24, 2009
    Yay they are staying with Naruto a little while longer.

    Does anyone also wonder where the manga is heading? I am kinda confused and I hope that this weeks update will shed some light on the events up ahead X3

    Nice update, as always, though a little short, sadly.
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  • From serenagold on July 19, 2009
    Haha...adorable Sasuke!! ^^

    I always find something extremely enjoyable about each chapter. You've got such a good handle on the characters and the rapport between them flows so naturally.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - kinai26 on July 18, 2009
    Yay, a new chapter XD I love this one. It is nice to see how natural they act around each other.


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  • From serenagold on July 13, 2009
    I find it endlessly amusing that Sasuke likes the idea that Naruto finds him pretty. ^^ lol
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Morlana on July 12, 2009
    It's too bad they didn't look at the frameless glasses. Some of those look invisible until you are right up on the person to see they are wearing glasses. Sasu should also get contacts for battle. Naru can sell the idea as a form of battle eyewear.
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 12, 2009
    my freind and i went through this same thing to get my glasses lol. this old lady tried to make me get these large 1940's plastic frames. i almost fell over laughing lol.
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  • From serenagold on July 10, 2009
    haha.. sasuke passed out in the ophthalmology chair. ^^

    keep up the good work!
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  • From kinai26 on July 06, 2009
    LOL ok, I liked this chapter a lot. I know how uncomfortable these seeing tests are since I have glasses. I adore the fact that Sasuke swallows his pride and accepts Naruto´s help. Sasuke will look hot with glasses, of that I´m sure after reading quit a few doushiji and I hope that Sasuke figures out that revenge is a futile effort, and that staying with Naruto is much healthier for him.

    Affection in blooming between them, which is sweet though I wish for more romance, but i guess that´ll come in due time XD

    Thank you for yet another lovable chapter,


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