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By : susanna
  • From ANON - Kaliu6-san on March 27, 2010
    Took you long enough! Apart from the last two chapters, I was beginning to think this would never happen! XD But the wait was worth it! Definately! It was really sweet, both of them so shy, and Naruto not sure what to do until the very last moment! Reading this chapter made me all mushy and ^^ ! Looking forward to next week of course!
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  • From ANON - Andi-chan on March 24, 2010
    It's taken me three days to finally get through all these chapters! I'm so glad that I decided to read this fic though. It's great! I love the pace you've set for Naruto and Sasuke's romance. Everything about this fic seems like it could be completely canon.
    I'm a pretty die-hard SasuNaru fan, and sometimes I find myself worried if this fic is going to end up being a SasuNaru or NaruSasu. I hope it will be SasuNaru.
    Anyway, even if it doesn't end up that way this story is still amazing!

    I was kind of hoping to read Sakura's response to Sasuke's last letter, but I guess I'll need to be patient for the next chapter. Something tells me that Sakura's going to deny that Sasuke is gay though. At least that's what it seems like from the way she ended her letter to Naruto.

    I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From serenagold on March 22, 2010
    Damn it Sakura. You just had to throw in that bit about the promise in the end. Evil! (Although she could be referring to something else, we all know how Naruto's gonna take it.)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2010
    Darn I was wanting to read the letter from Sakura to Sasuke....but I will be patient until the next one...keep writing I admire your determination to continue this story!
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  • From serenagold on March 13, 2010
    Aw.. such a cute moment at the end there. I think you're right. Naruto will have to get used to lots of casual touching and mental adjustment before he could ever feel comfortable in pursuing a relationship with Sasuke.

    Again, I loved how you ran the martial arts lesson. It was actually kind of unexpected to see Sasuke so good with kids while Naruto was so poor at relating to them, but it totally made sense. Naruto really has no concept of how an adult would relate to a child. Nor was he ever really instructed at the proper way to train or learn. Heck, despite his lofty goals and aspirations of being Hokage, Naruto probably would still have problems with basic academy kattas and forms.

    This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2010
    Sasuke was really good with the kids, and I'm glad that Naruto was able to encourage him and not let his "jelously or rivlary" get in the way this time. It shows that he is maturing, learning to appreciate their differences.

    I am also feeling very sorry for his difficulty in coming to terms with his desire for Sasuke in a physical way, I can't wait for him to let go and just let himself Love Sasuke.

    Poor Sasuke I hope he continues to be patient with the dobe.
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  • From ANON - Subaru on March 09, 2010
    I love your story! Keep going!!
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  • From serenagold on March 08, 2010
    Hahahahahaaaa Sasuke almost had what he wanted but he blew it! Bwahahahaha!!!

    Loser.


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Nami on March 07, 2010
    What I love about your story is that it makes me think a lot. It's really informative about Sasuke and Naruto learning these new things and their world expanding without being preachy at all. And I love that they get hurt by what the other says, but don't say anything about it. It's very realistic! Though sometimes I huff and want them to apologize right now. And Naruto's dreams... and his figuring out about Sasuke. I love how gradual it is. And how much more confident he's getting. He was and is so Sasuke focused, but thinking back to how he was before and now it's like he's bloomed. Sasuke too. They're both fumbling sometimes, but then they adjust and learn. And then when they think they know something, it changes subtly again like Naruto's remembrance of the men he met before. And I have to say I'm excited for the rock dancing. Naruto would own the property to that dance floor when he learned it. And Sasuke would just have to keep up, or maybe he'd blow people out of the water.

    Mrrg~! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next!
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  • From StellaMourir on March 03, 2010
    The more I read of your story the more I wish that this was the real plot and not the one in the manga.
    And I find myself looking more forward to your updates than the manga translations.
    And as soon as college or work dosn't take up to much time I read your story.
    Keep 'em chapters commin'! *does a thumps up*

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  • From ANON - Lady O on February 28, 2010
    This story is really something. I don't think I ever read a Naruto fanfic like this before and I have to say it
    really good. I really like your writing style and how you write the charaters. I love the idea of the Blessed Realm and the Ninja World.
    The way you show the differents between the two is interesting. Like how the parents feel about child soldiers. I'm suprise you don't have more reviews your story it really amazing. Keep up the good work.:)
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  • From serenagold on February 28, 2010
    Hmm... I thought they switched rolls in flamenco because Naruto was the more outgoing and flamboyant of the two in dancing and thats a dance where the "female" role really shines. lol

    Interesting chapter. I don't like your ominous comment that Naruto will realize he could be bi AFTER its too late! Don't tell me Sasuke will hook up with someone else?! Oh noes!~!!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on February 21, 2010
    Someone should inform Naruto of the existence of bisexuality. Maybe he might be more comfortable with that concept and then Sasuke can finally get his man. >:D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2010
    Oh geez I made a mistake. Some how I meant to review another story that had a sex scene in it and ended up leaving the review here. I guess it was obvious by the mentioning of the sex scene huh? Sorry about that...it must have been confusing for you.

    I am glad that Naruto has clued in that Sasuke is attracted to him. I wish that you would have Naruto get over his "I'm better than you" complex though, it would make him more likable.
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  • From ANON - ^^ on February 20, 2010
    i really like this story. it's well written, it flows and it's just, well, nice.
    There is something that has been bugging me though. It's fairly obvious that sasuke is your favourite character. Of course it's fine to have a favourite character, it's just that it creates an imbalance between naruto and sasuke. I can't really remember a chapter where naruto hasn't been humiliated and i can't remember a chapter where sasuke has been unless it was narutos fault. naruto is often portrayed in negative light, sasuke never is. Sasuke Sue gets a little dull and naruto becomes more of a joke... it's unbalanced.
    i hope that makes sense...?
    well, er, may you have much inspiration and motivation!
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