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Reviews for The Blessed Realm

By : susanna
  • From ANON - isotonlok on August 23, 2010
    love your work and i am realy loving the way that the story is developing insofar as the differinces between kohna and music, it makes for an interesting contrast as well as pointing out just how.... well.........silly (insane, odd??) the Naruto Universe can get at times. Any way sorry for the quick review but iv got to get back to work. stupid late hours!!!! :(
    anyway your great, love you! Keep wrighting!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on August 15, 2010
    Welcome back!

    The end of this chapter was touching as hell. :)
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  • From serenagold on July 13, 2010
    There’s just no pleasing some people. LoL
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  • From serenagold on July 05, 2010
    Re: last chapter - Excellent Chapter. I loved their long awaited coupling, and it was really heart wrenching to see Naruto cry afterwards. Keep up the great work!

    This chapter: I found it greatly amusing how the political debates of Music town centered around Music Labels and popularity of music. Keep up the awesome work!

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  • From nivell on July 04, 2010
    The part where Sasuke was helping Naruto with his makeup was pretty funny. Usually, men have an eye for makeup but orange lipstick? Lol, hope the pics turned out great.
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  • From ANON - Andi-chan on June 24, 2010
    I leave for a few months and I come back to find new chapters! Yay!
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  • From nivell on June 22, 2010
    Love the part where they were getting down and dirty on the bed but then stupid kyuubi had to ruin it all. Poor Naruto...no orgasm means no nookie? *is sad*
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on June 22, 2010
    that was lovely!!!

    probably my favorite chapter.
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  • From ANON - Zay on June 21, 2010
    I really enjoyed your story. You mentioned that english wasn't your first language, but I personally thought your writing was very good; everything made sense, though a couple of sentences were a little on the awkward side. One obstical to Naruto becoming Hokage that I'm suprised you haven't mentioned is the fact that he's still a genin. I personally think that is a huge problem; even if he is the most powerful shinobi in the village I can't imagine that he would be permited to be Hokage at that rank (I only watch the anime, if this is not true in the manga sorry to waste your time). I would also like to put in my vote that if you decide to re-write this that you keep the cutting out to a minimium. I feel that if most of the non-plot related scenes were removed, the personal change and growth both Naruto and Sasuke are undergoing would be a lot less believable. As it was, I had a really tough time buying that Sasuke had opened up enough to cry at his birthday party. Please keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on June 14, 2010
    Great chapter!
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  • From nivell on June 13, 2010
    Loving this soo much! Die, Danzou you bitch, die!!!
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  • From serenagold on June 07, 2010
    haha... library fail. ^^
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  • From serenagold on June 02, 2010
    Ahhh! Defensive mechanisms! Always raising their nasty little heads at inopportune moments.
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  • From serenagold on May 27, 2010
    Naruto's so overprotective and jealous over Sasuke. Its cute. Although people constantly questioning his way of the Ninja so negatively might not make him as keen over Music town as Sasuke is. ^^
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  • From serenagold on May 21, 2010
    Sasuke's found his home. Although I don't see Naruto signing up.
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