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Reviews for Just Dance (It'll Be Ok)

By : emochickenbutt
  • From ANON - LadyPerv on April 23, 2014
    i must be a sick twisted individual because i really liked it... wait its in my name for i am the Lady Perv...
    No seriously i loved every word of this. From Itachi's helpless thirst for bodily contact in the little contest on the dance floor to the threesome with Kabuto and even the beast and ws in it.. it takes an acquired taste for these things and oh myy did i find it hot. And highly convincing. not realistic but it had all the realism that literature will surely ever need.

    And i also enjoyed the second chap. Gore is also my cup of tea. I did think that searing of the bodily parts was smart, in torture it would stop the bleeding though i'm sure the shock itself and pain alone would cause heartfailure lol. karma poor orchi... good for u itachi!!

    thanks for writing!! although the chances of you the author posting a new story again after a 3 year hiatus are slim to none i do hope u keep writing stories... with lots of the same type of kinky fetish sex that we all love and secretly hold dear
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  • From ANON - sherry on August 02, 2010
    You could right saw movies...this was absolutely sick, in the best possible way. Very interesting.
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  • From Prism0467 on April 05, 2010
    Wow.

    ECB, you are a bona fide sadist. I don't think I've ever read anything like this.

    Yay for Orochi-chan torture! And I adore the bickering between Naruto, Sasuke and Sai. So charming!

    I wouldn't know where to go from chapter two if I had written something like that.
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  • From misswarchan on March 05, 2010
    ...it's most likely because I a complete perv and love sub/bottom!Itachi; but I really, really like this story. Please update soon! 8D
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  • From GoddessMU1313 on November 21, 2009
    Ooh, very hot! I like it! Didn't mind the bestiality, and though the watersports was kinda off-putting, I didn't really mind either. Revenge chapter coming soon, you say? Will be GORY, you say? YES, I say! Plz to be updating nao kthx.
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  • From HavocTellenoi on March 15, 2009
    Well written....but totally the weirdest thing ever. And I've read the imfamous Trowa and the lion fanfic (Gundam Wing Fanfiction). It was good, but waaaaayyy creepy. So I think I liked it, but I'm not sure.....
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  • From ANON - japanese pro on March 13, 2009
    I think you're a talented author that should write less disturbing fics...
    The pee was way over the top....and Itachi was way too OOC...
    except that, it was ok...
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  • From beatngufan on March 13, 2009
    The only parts I did not like was the part about Itachi fucking a dog and Orochimaru saying that he was going to pee in Itachi's mouth (reminds me of a bad porno that R.Kelly would make). Other than that, it was a good story
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  • From Yblue on March 12, 2009
    Alright well, I have to say, I am totally not into bestiality or watersports,
    but this was still an incredible story, and you are a great writer!
    Itachi is my favourite character though,
    and usually I like seeing him as topping not bottoming but this was still a great piece!
    Plus the part where Itachi's humping Orochimaru's leg on the dance floor was great ;D
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