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Reviews for Delusional

By : arabuzumaki
  • From suzannecmc on May 04, 2009
    this is really interesting. I like it, will you do Neji pov
    if you continue?

    you should just write all the things you think related to this
    and sort through it, pulling the workable parts for your story.
    I write out of sequence all the time;) look up actual cases of
    relationship with abuse like this, or whatever mental illness
    you wish sasuke to have and look for the predictable patterns.
    this might help you lace the story together.

    good luck with whatever you do and thanks for what you have written:)
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  • From tawanawelch on March 11, 2009
    That was really good i just liked how believeable Naruto is in convincing himself that Sasuke's right and everyone else is wrong. Poor Naruto just like u said there are ppl like that in the same situation and they r so delusional. That was great!! msuzumaki!!XDD

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