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Reviews for Sand in the Leaves

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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 07, 2010
    I decided to do one review for Chapters 16 and 17 since I wanted to see Sakura and Gaara's reactions after the big lemon. Loved the lemon by the way, although Sakura did hurt Gaara by calling Naruto's name during. Anyway, I'm actually starting to like Izanami now. I liked her interaction with Naruto and Hiro. She seems like a pretty good mother. I wonder what Shikamaru and Tsunade WERE talking about before Sakura albeit inadvertantly confessed that she had sex with Gaara. I wish the real Naruto wasn't dead but I can deal with it for this story. Moving on to chapter 18.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 05, 2010
    Chapter 15: Oh, Sakura x Gaara action, eh? Very nice. I wouldn't have thought of pairing them up. Moving on to chapter 16 and the lemon.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 04, 2010
    Chapter 14: So Kakashi and Yugao have infiltrated Suna and are working undercover. I don't know why I didn't figure that out earlier. Oh, man, Gaara can't hold his liquor. Yep, as Neji said, it's going to be an interesting party to say the least. Moving on to chapter 15.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 03, 2010
    Chapter 13: Apologies for the small hiatus. I had to read this chapter in intervals because of my suddenly hectic schedule these last few days. Anyway, so Sasuke has two twin daughters now. He's a surprisingly good father considering his wives are at each other's throats constantly. I really don't like either of them. But I'm biased. In my book, Sasuke either is with Sakura, Naruto, and sometimes: Itachi, Kakashi, or Gaara. See? I'm biased. Anyway, thank goodness someone is taking care of Kankuro and trying to help him escape. Moving on to Chapter 14 now.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 29, 2010
    Chapter 12: I loved the last line. I'm ashamed (not really) to admit that I would have liked to have caught a peek at Neji and Gaara's "show", too. I'm so bad.

    Thanks for your review (for "Broken Mirror"). It's cool. I'm just glad you've been keeping up with "Broken Mirror". And I'm glad you're enjoying my other story, "Tobi".

    Anyway, now I'm moving on to chapter 13.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 27, 2010
    Chapter 11: So Tsunade (the little girl) is Naruto and Sakura's child. That's awesome. Sasuke's wives, though...*rolls eyes*. He's going to have a cat-fight on his hands one of these days. I am so relieved that Kankuro is alive. I wonder who the guy with the Sharingan is. Moving on to chapter 12.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 26, 2010
    Chapter 10: Oh, no! What is Gaara going to do when he hears that people think he and Neji were doing more than just swimming in the bath? I bet the ANBU in the tree was Sai again but then I could be wrong. Moving on to chapter 11.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 26, 2010
    Chapter 9: Gaara definitely sank in this chapter. But what can you expect from someone who grew up in a desert? Moving on to chapter 10.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 25, 2010
    Chapter 8: I would not have figured that that was Sai under the mask. Naruto and Hiro are a real pair. Sasuke has two wives?! I mean, I can understand the necessity but I wonder who the other wife is? Apparently, Sakura isn't too thrilled with Izanami. And what was up with her getting all friendly with Gaara, hmm? Interesting. Moving on to chapter 9.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 25, 2010
    Chapter 7: Man, Gaara REALLY beat the crap out of Neji. I mean, he had a broken arm with the bone sticking out and everything and he was still delivering the punches. All I can say is: Wow! Yeah, better stop those "let's research Jinchuriki" medics before you have two new Orochimarus in the village. Not good. Moving on to chapter 8.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 25, 2010
    Chapter 6: Man, Neji not only are you out of line but you are a total jerk to boot. He wouldn't have said that, I'm sure, if Gaara still had the Shukaku inside of him. Those words would have been Neji's last if that was the case. And the ending...what a shocker. I am quickly moving on to the next chapter.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 24, 2010
    Chapter 5: I didn't find this chapter awkward at all. Gaara's completely red all over. Those horrible genin have struck again. Worse, they got Neji, too. Naturally, he would blame Gaara. Moving on to Chapter 6.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 24, 2010
    Chapter 4: Ouch! Gaara should have known that mud isn't as pliable (I think that's the right word) as sand. Sand is loose and granular. While mud is wet, thick, heavy earth. Mud isn't going to move much. It's just going to lump together and be extremely gooey and generally goopy and oozy. (I think I'm making up words now. Sorry.) Shikamaru misses Temari. Sasuke's actually a good dad. I wonder what calmed Mister Avenger down? His kids are adorable. Moving on to Chapter 5.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 24, 2010
    Chapter 3: You can't trust genin to give you legitimate directions. Worse, they're Anko's genin so I doubt she has very high limits on "how far is too far". Her sensei was Orochimaru, after all. At least Team Asuma helped Gaara out. Neji definitely wasn't going to go easy on Gaara; I mean, this is Neji, after all. Moving on to Chapter 4.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 23, 2010
    Chapter 2: I can't imagine how Neji and Gaara will get along in the same team. Romance in the making, I hope. So the kids Shikamaru were talking to were Sasuke's kids. I wonder who the mother is then if Sasuke is the father. Moving on to chapter 3.
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