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Reviews for The Fox's Truth

By : WhiteWhiskey
  • From ANON - ChrystalRobby on April 25, 2009
    I like it please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2009
    This is a great story line and can't wait for more chapters.
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  • From Pinkney on April 21, 2009
    Great story! I hope you update soon!!

    BTW: Thank you for reviewing my stories, I appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
    I really hope that you will update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
    Sorry for the short review. Had to start breafest. Frist off moegi & hanabi add on to list is a good idea. With them being alot older but still 2 or 3 years younger. The inuzuka women and princess yuki to the list would be good to. Trashing sasuke is always good with me. Now that is out of the way. Remaber that this is your story your work your time to shine. We are only giving you are ideas and thougts of what to do. But it is your choice not ours. The haters be dane. They say how they hate dead end stories. Butt they are the raeson that the writers stop in the frist place. Because of all the hate, bad revivws and prasure to put what others want in the stories NOT WHAT THE WRITERS WANT. That is just wrong, it is your work not ours! we read it not write it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2009
    This is a wickly awsome story. I hope the other chap's will be this good.
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  • From ANON - You Dont Know Me on March 21, 2009
    Wow!This isnt even mindless smut,and Its good!Cant wait for an update!!!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on March 14, 2009
    Oh I almost forgot!!! About Sasuke? FEEL FREE TO BASH THAT PEDOPHILE SNAKE LOVING FREAK INTO MUSH AND THEN DEEP FRY IT THEN BURY IT!!! If one thing that drives me crazy is when people defend that emo bastard. His freaking Sharingan superiority smug power craving insanity is rediculious... Sorry about the rant, but what ever you do to him PLEASE LET HIM SUFFER!!!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on March 14, 2009
    First off I like the way this story is going and just wanted to bring up a few ideas and comments; first Sakura, Hinata, Isaribi and Tayuya all together in the harem? (LOVE IT WITH NAUGHTY GLEE), Moegi err... well she's a little too young I think that Konohamaru could end up taking after his sensei (Naruto not Ebisu) with Moegi and Hanabi you know?
    Second I don't mind a few of the girls gaining hanyou form but some I think (Isaribi and Tayuya) would end up gaining either enhanced forms or fix a curse seal or two (beside it'll be kinky)?
    Third and finally (what relief ehh?) Tsunade and Shizune too, I LOVE IT!!! Tsunade always wanted a family and Shizune you know wants to get in Tsunade's bra and panties... (image of Shizune in sexy revealing nurse outfit) you know having someone old enough to raise a few little Uzamaki's would be a good idea? Any who keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter and alot of us can't wait for more.
    ENCORE, ENCORE, ENCORE
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  • From jfitzgerald236 on March 13, 2009
    I really like the way that you started this story. Please update again soon. Thanks.
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  • From REM1985 on March 12, 2009
    Well, I think it is a good start to fluff story about the girls making him happy by being willing to share. Good luck and I will look for the update.
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  • From Mangafreak on March 11, 2009
    i would highly support Moegi being in this story, i find it hard to believe that it hasn't been done before. As for Tsunade and Anko i also would like to see that as well as Tayuya (Tayuya x Naruto is a fav pairing of mine) as for ino i would love to see sakura convince her to join. i do have one request though. any way you can somehow include Hanabi, Hinata's little sister, i find her to be almost as cute as Hinata.
    Descendant of the shadows,
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From on March 10, 2009
    Well I do like Naruto/Sakura stuff, and where the story is going mostly. But honestly the whole Kyubi is a female and appears as a woman and gaining fox traits (Sakura's tail) has been done to death. It's totally unoriginal and I really wish to god people would stop using that idea over, and over, and over, and over, and over again. Most fics I read with that usually end up unfinished or turn lame so I've since associated a story with either of them as having gotten the 'kiss of death' for stories.

    I like Sakura's new outlook but was giving her a tail really necessary for the plot of the story? Couldn't you have just not done something like that? I mean honestly someone suddenly shows up with a tail and you think everyone will be fine with it? What if you suddenly woke up with a tail how would that effect your life, that's why I hate this kind of stuff because no one actually takes the time to think about that or show in a realistic manner how something like that would effect the characters. Also we know the Kyubi is male and hates Naruto (and everything) or is even aware what goes on outside of the cage (as stated in canon) and I never understood why people end up with a DEMON being all nice and fluffy and suddenly female.

    Okay maybe a certain were-cat female character from Bleach pulled it off but she wasn't evil.

    I'm not sure if I can read on even though it looks like its a harem fic with Sakura in it (FINALLY!) and she's not being totally bashed by the authors like I've seen many times. There's just a few things that are really hard for me to swallow. But if I do how about Sasume Fuma from one of my fav filler arcs? Although isn't Moegi kind of too young? I mean it feels kind of deviant for someone that young to be in this with a boy that old. Anko I like but she's a bit too old and Shizune and Tsuande are more like family so don't you feel it would be a bit like incest for them?

    Well sorry for the long winded thing but I honestly just needed to get that off my chest. I can take if you want to totally ignore it I just felt that someone had to say a few things but it is your story after all and I'm not telling you to do anything, just stating my opinions on it.
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  • From skeeve on March 10, 2009
    Excellent beginning!The logic your using so far seems to fit into the Naruto Universe. Your selection of Possible companions is well rounded out. One request though, please leave bondage and S/M out of this story. There are (in my opinion) allot of good Naruto fics have been ruined by the inclusion of these.
    If I had a vote on whom should be included in the list of definite, I would add Tsunade. I think her past has been as hard on her as Naruto's on him. The perfect time would be when the Pervy Sage has those problems in the Rain country. (obscure reference so as not to be a spoiler.)
    Thanks for sharing your Talents with us!
    Skeeve
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  • From CryoBlaze on March 10, 2009
    Well a nice story so far and I'm sorry to hear about the no dead people (otherwise I'd say Haku). A couple of ladies I'd like if you could add to Naruto's harem would be Uzuki Yugao and Nii Yugito (when your story starts she isn't dead, so if you could and just think of how holding Nibi would affect her becoming a hanyou).

    Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
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