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Reviews for The Fox's Truth

By : WhiteWhiskey
  • From ANON - silverserenity on November 17, 2009
    I really love your story so far. It has good background story and it's really credible. As for the Naruto future mate, I really like Sakura and Hinata since, I like them both with Naruto and I can choose one for Naruto. Ino and Temari, I don't really mind (Even if I really like Temari with Shikamaru), Tsunade...O.O, she's like a second mother to Naruto but, if you have a good idea, I don't really mind ether (As long as it's after Jiraya's death). As for the other, I really don't know them that much so, I can't really put my opinion on them.

    Also, I like that the other are include...What I hate in most adult fanfiction is when there is no background story behind the sexual intercourse and that only the main characters of the story or in it. Continue to make all the character realistic like you did...I laugh really hard about Kiba's comment of the Kyuubi attack because of PMS problem.

    Continue you're wonderful work, I'm eager to read the rest!!

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  • From ANON - firedragonboy on November 17, 2009
    nice story.
    Tayuya I think should be a Succubus. Give here curse seal level two pale skin and wings and there you go. Plus it fits with her illusion attacks.

    Temari uses kamaitachi-inspired techniques including the summoning of a kamaitachi named Kamatari. So kamaitachi fits her well.

    Tenten I lke the idea of her being a Jorôgumo/spider-woman.


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  • From Snake_King on November 16, 2009
    Awesome chapter! I hope that you do another one soon, and I think I have a pretty good idea what will happen with Sakura's mom if you choose to indulge that further. They'll probably try to explain the situation to her but she won't listen and just think it's another one of "The Demon Brat's" lies. Well, that's what I think might happen, but it's your story so do what you will with it.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on November 16, 2009
    Awesome chapter.


    Ch.03
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  • From YoukoTaichou on November 16, 2009
    I'd like it if you could add the 5th Mizukage, Yakumo, Koyuki, Yugito, Nibi(with Yoruichi's body preferably(with the usual cat ears and tail, for a good look of what she'd look like go to "http://doujinland.com/g/?level=picture&id=16540") also Fu the holder of the Shichibi, and Fuka(the woman from the anime Shippuden the has a killer kiss(who was actually Naruto's first 'real' kiss).
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  • From ANON - chm01 on November 15, 2009
    could you include Guren and Sasame?
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  • From VFSNAKE on November 15, 2009
    Nice! Naruto is going to get his revenge and get laid soon. Hinata's dream will come true. Pun intended. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Blazin_Atsuma on November 03, 2009
    Hey I like the story and plot of it so far. Hope to see your update for it soon. I hope you get the next chapter up and this story becomes a great hit
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2009
    I hopr live is good for you and that you havn't given up on this story. With just 2 chap's it is still a great read that could become even better with time and chap's.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2009
    i would include tayuya
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  • From ANON - RexBlazer1 on August 09, 2009
    A very interesting story you have here. Too bad Sakura's mom was a slave to her grudge. Now, I have a suggestion should you decide to bring Anko into the harem. This does not come from Japanese mythology I'm afraid, as I don't know if they had anything like it, but its from Hindu and Buddhist mythology (which got highly involved in Asian mythology). If you put Anko in, I would suggest you make her into a Naga, a being with a human-like upper half and a snake tail for a lower half. This form is not unheard of, and Echidna (the mother of all monsters from Greek Mythology) was said to have a similar form, a beautiful maiden-like upper half and serpent tail for a lower half. As I said this is all a suggestion, you are the author so you decide what to do with it, I'm just offering.
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  • From BahamutZero on August 09, 2009
    An interesting concept that promises a lot of freedom with character development. What I mean is that a hanyou change in a girl could also result in some personality changes as well which leaves you open for many different possibilities with each girl. One example of this would be that with Hinata you could have her lose her self deprecating side and gain more confidence which would hopefully lessen the fainting and stuttering. I also liked your idea of having the girls have various transformations when they become a hanyou (instead of all of them being a fox type). I am quite interested in where you plan to move Naruto and Sakura (and whoever else eventually joins them) since I have to assume they will try to get a place where they aren't likely to be bothered by villagers or demon hating ninja. I don't know if you have had any suggestions for this but thought I'd throw a couple at you just so you'd have some input. They could relocate to somewhere in the Forest of Death seeing that villagers would most likely be killed if they tried to wander around in there. My other location is kind of vague but maybe have an underground compound inside the village. Of course the door to get in might either have to be hidden or have seal on it so only certain people can get inside (you could have to swipe your blood on it or something). Anyway I really enjoyed the story so far and it is obvious you have put a lot of thought behind this (it is noticeable by the depth of the story). I look forward to reading more on your next update.
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  • From ANON - Hanna on August 08, 2009
    Am still waiting on the next chapter and I just love the story
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  • From ANON - Hanna on July 17, 2009
    I really like your idé's and I can't wait for the next chapter to be up!!! I would like Hinata to be the yuki kind of demon then kitsune!
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  • From ANON - Annonymous on June 30, 2009
    the main reason no one mentions the pre time skip ages is that it is usually someone either the same age or in the case of hanabi still young enough to be about the same age, in this case with moegi you would have someone signifigantly more mature than her at 12 if you hadnt been planning on ageing her up it would just be wrong unless this had been pre time-skip when they would all still be kids, which in todays society isnt encouraged but isnt looked down upon, rather than the adult - child relationship this could have turned into.
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