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By : WhiteWhiskey

From Takai153 on June 01, 2010
Oh, I forgot to say I hope you do add some futanari, it can make for some really hot threesome/moresomes. Also, with Naruto's transformation actually turning him into a real girl you should have him use it for some lesbian play. Oh, oh, you should combine those ideas and have the girls use a futanari no jutsu to gangbang Naruko, that would be soooo HOT!
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From Takai153 on June 01, 2010
Whoa this is an awesome story! I love this idea of Kyuubi getting free and Naruto and all his girls becoming hanyous. I especially like that their not all going to be kitsune hanyous. I can't wait to see how your going to execute the rest and what powers Naruto will gain from becoming a hanyou and what reprecussions this will have.

I'm gald to see Hinata is going to be a Yuki Onna, I think it totally fits her and ice would make a great addition to her Jyuuken, though I see it causing her oponents' bodies to freeze solid rather than give them frost bite. Something like Seiryu's ability from Yu Yu Hakusho. The human body is 70% water and she'd be injecting INSIDE their bodies, so thats what I see happening. Anko being gorgon is also very fitting and I like the idea of Isaribi being a Vaporeon-esque kitsune. I could totally see Tenten being a Jor?gumo (uh, what is the question mark supposed to be?), as the extra arms would really suit her. I see her as looking something like Noir from Snegoku Rance, only with all her arms being multi-jointed like her four spider arms and but ending in normal hands. If you don't know what Noir looks like heres a link: http://alicesoft.wikia.com/wiki/File:Sengoku_Rance_-_Nowaaru.jpg

As for Tayuya, she should be a succubus or a siren. Her curse seal 2 form just screams succubus to me, but a siren could definately work with her powers. I'm also glad to see that this isn't a 'Naruto gets all the girls' fic. While I love harem fics, some people go a little overboard and forget that having every woman on the planet bare the child of one man will create genetic problems with all the inbreading that would result. Granted in PWP fics thats not important as their not supposed to have a plot, but its good not to do that when your going for porn WITH plot like in this fic.

Speaking of porn, when are you getting to the sex!? I WANT SEX!!!! ;P Say, you should totally have Naruto use the kage bunshin to gangbang his girls. Ever since I saw the harem no jutsu I thought Naruto should use it to gangbang girls, but their is a SERIOUS lack of that in fanfiction (I mean he's trained by Jiraiya, a self proclaimed super pervert; how can the idea NOT of crossed his mind?!)

You mentioned the possibility of including Ayame into the harem and I really want to see that. For one, she's hot and not done enough. Two, so far she's the only girl mentioned that isn't suited for combat and when forming a harem you want to try for diversity. Also I prefer the idea of Choji being with Ino than Ayame. And Sakura seems to really like ramen now and Naruto will be getting more kitsune hanyou mates. Plus, who says liking ramen is a fox thing, why couldn't it be a demon thing? Also, if you include Tsunade, don't make her too young. Keep her at a good mature MILF age, like late 30s to early 40s. I also think Tsunade would make a good oni, as she's rediculously strong and she has a short temper.

Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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From shadowfiredragon on May 15, 2010
good story so far, can't wait to read more
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From flamehead23a on April 13, 2010
absolutely FANTASTIC writing so far. normally harem fics skimp out on the prose, but everything you've submitted so far is quality. keep it up, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From Kdragonfire on April 12, 2010
What if Tsuande after extensive research finds out that Sakura had fox demon DNA with in her. This could be confirm by Kyuubi.Kyuubi could by saying that at one time one man started to appear they started to kill the demons. The Demons decide to preserve themselves by seducing young men and women. Or by granting young men and women special powers when they helped demons. That way Sakura could be related to Shippo and the Inuzumaki clan could be related to Kagome and Inuyasha.
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From ANON - dragonman on December 29, 2009
For Ino, a demon that influences the mind would be perfect. A siren, for example. I remember a creature that could hypnotize, but i cannot recall its name.
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From ANON - Unknown-nin345 on December 19, 2009
Hi there, I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. The only clear suggestion I can make for the girl's demon form is for Tayuya, I would like to see her become a succubus and possibly seduce Hinata or one of the other (I think that might be funny).

Just a little question: When the Kyuubi came out of the seal, was she naked?
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From avatoa on December 17, 2009
Since you seem to be using girls from filler arcs and movies, how about Koyuki of Snow Country, Yakumo of the Kurama clan, Tsubaki(Mizuki's ex-girlfriend), Haruna of Vegetable country, Hokuto from the Hidden Star Village, Toki of Bird Country, and Tsunami of Wave Country? Oh, and is Yugito Nii, jinchuriki of Nibi, still alive? Cause if she is, vote for her as well. And that other female jinchuriki, Fuu? If she's still alive, put her in to.
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From ANON - Tayuya Fangirl on December 05, 2009
Hi, me again. Just read chapter two and had to let you know that I think it was really well written. I like the parts with Sakura and Hinata the best but there are plenty of other parts that made me happy too so great job. Can't say Sakura's mom's reaction was a surprise, but it was still harsh. Very convincing.

As for some of your ideas, I'd like to say a few things.

Tayuya - HELLS YES!!!

Ino and Temari - I'm likin' Ino for this fic but Temari might be a stretch. Don't get me wrong. She's awesome and works so much better with Naruto than Lazymaru, but I wouldn't put too many with Naruto too soon. Mabye latter on....

Tsume - They did have a pretty funny relationship n the filler arcs so yeah, go for it. But remember, her husband didn't die on her - HE LEFT HER. She might not be so easy to convince. And Hana has a better relationship with Naruto than Tsume as far as I know, but I could be wrong. I'll have to watch the arc again to be sure.

Tenten - Don't have a problem with this one, but you are shorting Neji and Lee on romantic interests(unless they're gay -_^).

Tsunade - Only if he stops calling her 'granny'. That's just TOO creapy(@_@)!

Yugito - GO FOR IT!!

Sasame - Eh, maybe. Orange haired girls ARE kinda hot...(thinks of Orihime from Bleach).

Kurenai - No. Please no. Asuma may be annoying but I like they're couple.

Hanabi - Honestly, I'm bias with her and Konohamaru. I don't really like him and I love her. Konohamaru is like the Naruto that eveyone else saw when they looked at him(Naruto) and he fits the 'dobe' role much better than Naruto does. But If you like him than please don't make Hanabi girly over him. I like her being the strong proud Hyuuga heir the one would expect her to be and I think he should Work for it if he wants to prove he's worthy of her. It will make their love all the more convincing. Though, if you don't put Moegi with Naruto then DON'T put her in a threesome with Ko and Hanabi. No harem for him!!!

Hana - Sucks that you pulled her from the running but I can live with it.

And as for Hinata's hanyou form I'm definitely for the Yuki Onna. That sounds great.

All in all, this story is shaping up to be a very good story and I look forward to reading the next installment.

Til next time!
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From ANON - The Lame Guy on December 05, 2009
Hells Yes Tayuya, Anko, Ayame, and Shion should be in the harem!! Tayuya was HOT!!!!!! and CS2 was even HOTTER!!!!!!!!!! and Anko is like another Tayuya only five years older(she looks 19 in the first half of the series, not 24) so the two of them together would milk him dry and he would LOVE IT!!
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From ANON - Tayuya Fangirl on December 05, 2009
I like the story so far. It's so original and fun. Like the pairings, too. One pleading request is for Tayuya to be in the harem. Tayuya Rules! And NO ONE who is male works with her other than Naruto. Plus there's the whole Minato/Kushina feel to that couple. You know, goofy blond liking strong red-heads(hehehe)! Please consider this one for me.

Sincerely,
Tayuya Fangirl
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From ANON - a true fan on November 26, 2009
good story. more please when u get a chance thanks
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From Coldstone on November 20, 2009
Nice.

Long time no see, pal. ^^ Finaly the story progresses and it was worth the waiting. I would include at least ino as well. Maybe as something catlike (she has some traits of a cat in my opinion, namely her short temper, but i can imagine her also as the playful type).

Personally I don't know about Ten Ten. In my opinion she resides better with Neji. As for Temari, well she works well with Shikamaru I think, but could also be a good match with Naruto. Kamaitachi is a good Idea for this variant. But in that case, Shikamaru will need a new girl ^^ (I don't think he and Ino would work well, so ijno is better with Naruto then Temari in my book).

For Tayua I suggest that you take a variant of her Cursed Seal 2 form. Mabe without the horns (or smaller ones, like Lum in Urusei yatsura).

I think you will make the right decisions. I will wait patiently for the next update.
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From DragonMan220 on November 20, 2009
Very nice. I agree with Tenten the spider girl, Tayuya the succubus, and Anko the gorgon. Though Anko should be able to turn her lower body into a giant snake body to give a full body hug to someone.
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From ANON - Helk on November 19, 2009
tenten could use the magnetic ability. with her knack for weapons
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