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Reviews for Never Leave Me

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - rita_blue on March 10, 2009
    oh, this is going to be good.... :) waiting :)
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on March 09, 2009
    heylo!!


    this was an interesting start. i loved the fight scene! wow, you guys can really write action well!! *jealous* it was perfect. the tension between them was funny and hot.

    though can i ask one question? if they are so against (pretending to be at least, lol) going undercover as lovers, why aren't they just disobeying tsunade. like agreeing with her and then doing the opposite once they reach? the only reason that she gave them was so they got along better but neither she nor anyone from their department is going to be in that town.. so no body will know right? how come they haven't thought of that? or did i just miss something?

    hm, thats all. im sorry for bringing that up..*hides* update soon or i will hound both of you on y gall.. *be very afraid..lol*
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  • From Oneide on March 09, 2009
    Ooh, interesting... I like it :) Good lenght of the chapter, and good spelling, and such an interesting story. :) like it.
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  • From ANON - youji_yola on March 09, 2009
    Loved it!!! You got the tension between Sasuke and Naruto so perfect that I grinned the whole time and I could imagine them acting that way towards each other while still being partners. I loved Tsunade's insight and attitude, not too soft and all about tough love, but kinda disappointed that she's not covertly taking part on the drinking bet somehow. The little spar that Naruto and Sasuke had... for some reason I kept imagining some sort of erotic pose (down gutter down) I liked reading Sasuke's very detailed insight on Naruto's actions (really, that should be a give away to him that there's something there). The game in the rain, usually when that happens, I imagine some cute teenagers laughing all the way to the door but thinking about two policemen doing it... ouch. DX

    This quote made me smile so much - "She couldn’t tell her employees ‘because, although we know it’s not exactly ethical, we all just want you two to fuck and get it over with’." - cause seriously, with how much they do go after each other's throat, it'd be easy for everyone in the force to see how much they want to jump each other's bones. XD

    Waiting with anticipation to know more about the case they're working on (WTF ebil Asuma and Konohamaru?!) and who'd act first, and how you guys would handle them being "unwilling" lovers. Also... ahaha... Sasuke... your Naruto-sexuality is showing already. Xd

    Can't wait for Sasuke to describe Naruto's physique or vice-versa. Curious on what details he'd pick up. And I wanna know why Naruto doesn't want anything on his record... :

    Some corrections/suggestions:

    -of course, but not even one child was ever found.- This last part sounds so awkward for some reason. >_
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on March 08, 2009
    well this seems interesting!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 08, 2009
    Interesting start. Keep going!

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  • From dolphina23 on March 08, 2009
    Ah, it's here! Just when I was getting bored with ff.net too. Lucky! And thanks for the compliment and the fic rec.

    Whee, so a review. I love the Naruto/Sasuke banter. I especially loved the fight scene. It was spot on the best I've read in a fanfiction. There was no confusion as to what was happening when and the style was very realistic in their reactions to each other and their movements, but I've said that before. And, that ending, from the light, witty banter to that suspense, was classic horror tale greatness. I felt like I was watching a great noir film, or Hitcock, the only master of all things scary. I can't wait to see how this tale will develop, from an afficianado standpoint. I also love that the characters, Sasuke and Naruto, suddenly realize they may be way out of their depth in that they went in expecting to face a standard psycho and now may be dealing with something entirely different. And the factor of at least Sasuke's sexuality coming into question adds an aggrivating twist, for him, and a delightful mix of drama and horro for me. Can't wait for more.

    PS Now it's my turn to spoil YOU, it seems. ;P
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