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Reviews for Never Leave Me

By : Ljiljana
  • From ArieRose on April 03, 2010
    Did you ever finish 'Never Leave Me'?(Please say you did) I really loved the first two chapters. ;a;
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  • From Eremi22 on May 28, 2009
    This story deserves an update. It sounds rather intriguing.
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  • From ANON - youji_yola on April 25, 2009
    I was wondering why you ended the first chapter with "Naruto instinctively reached behind to grab Sasuke’s wrist, only a breath away from panicking as the door opened, letting out a puff of warm air and a high-pitched scream." Now I understand why. I didn't expect Naruto to be the one able to see considering Sasuke's the one with special sight in the manga. But, since Naruto's a sympathetic character, it kinda fits more. He'd try to help everyone that he sees, try to do everything he can to help without thinking how the deeds would help him. And I wonder how freaked out he'd be once someone finally tells him about it. :

    LOL, I liked how Naruto was the one who was mostly talking despite Sasuke being the one who checked into the inn. Makes him seem more docile...uke~~ *shot* And holding hands without any discomfort... I'm pretty sure that it should be (hell I'm uncomfortable when people are in my personal bubble) so just points out that they're already into each other. XD

    Sasuke's a cuddler. XD And, despite being scared out of his mind, I love how Naruto's still doing his job, looking around the inn like it's an investigation. So serious about his job. :F

    Surprised that the first person, other than Tsunade and Kiba, that you used was Chiyo and Sasori. Can't wait until you reveal their back story. :)
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  • From ANON - Annie on April 20, 2009
    I'm so excited to read the new chapter!

    It was excellent, btw. I totally enjoyed reading it. The first chapter was so amazing, I checked back every couple of days to see if it had been updated >D

    I absolutely love the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. And I think it's wicked adorable that Naruto's got a wee crush :D


    And I love that Naruto has special abilities :o


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  • From ANON - ranni on April 19, 2009
    Interesting fic, hope to see more.
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  • From LadyWolf on April 19, 2009
    Very interesting..."I see dead people"

    I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Post soon
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  • From ANON - Mulle on April 19, 2009
    I like, I like!
    I really love this, it captures me.
    It's like "Ghost Whispere" or "The Mentalist" or whatever those shows are called.
    10 bucks that the kid is dead..
    Continue right away, I'm curious and is sadly not a person with much patience :D
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  • From cynaga on April 19, 2009
    Deicious - great writing. Can't wait for more. Love the AU setting and characterizations.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on April 19, 2009
    ohhh, very nice, I love that everyone is waiting for them to sleep together!
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  • From Ikippiki on April 19, 2009
    Ahh this is so intriguing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From dolphina23 on April 18, 2009
    Awww, no praise necessary. But that doesn't mean I'll refuse it. ;))

    Lovely continuation of the complicated nature of Sasuke and Naruto's partnership. I love how Sasuke inevitably protected Naruto from the skepticism and ridicule should he have been found out with that extra power. I love that Naruto is seemingly oblivious to its true nature. It seems so like his character, both from the manga nad in this story. I love how you pulled in Chiyo and in such understated almost desperation. I felt sorry for her despite what she may very well have done to Sasori, well, before his presumed death, and despite the fact that she seems to mistrust strangers so much given her reaction to finding Naruto out and about at night. I happen to think there may be more to it, perhaps that she has some idea of what may be living in her Inn besides her.
    I really enjoyed that there was still some understated suspense, so indicative of all great suspense/horror writers/directors. 'You shouldn't be here.' thuogh so simple a warning, is so chilling. And the fact that Naruto doesn't fully understand the meaning because he doesn't fully understand his gift is a grand foreshadowing effect. I also enjoyed Sasuke's refusal to believe in the full impact of what Naruto could do, even when faced with it in his own house adn with his own mother, instead choosing to think of Naruto as some untrustworthy snoop. heh heh
    One last thing before I end my evaluation. I have every confidence in you both in being able to continue with the light-hearted ribbing between them and the growing arousal of Naruto and his burgeoning discovery fo his feelings. I am interested, more than interested considering how I feel about this story and your prowess with supernatural/suspense/horror, to see if Sasuke recognizes the growth and either answers in kind or even just seeing how he reacts. So, without further flounces, ribbons or bells, I'll leave you two to write, and write fast. Please?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on April 18, 2009
    aww sasuke and naruto are so cute! so i take it naruto can see ghosts
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  • From ANON - Annie on March 30, 2009
    Cupricanka, I'm dying for an update @_____@

    *bows to you*
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  • From ANON - blisblop on March 19, 2009
    Liiked the sparring.tempoès slow;y building.Leans towards hyperbole a bit.
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  • From ANON - Ellie on March 16, 2009
    ;____; noooooo
    I need moreee!! This is such a good story! I'll admit that I was skeptical at first, but you totally won me over.
    I really wanna read more. 9-9
    Update?
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