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Reviews for True Directions

By : anlaaria
  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on March 06, 2009
    So deep. So profound.

    This story is absolutely amazing so far. The depth and meaning you manage to portray through this story are nothing short of awe-inspiring. I haven't read a story that has made me FEEL in such a long time. It's real. It's beautiful.

    I'll be looking foreward to your next update ^^
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  • From Stacy on March 06, 2009
    Oh my gosh! Have you seen the movie "BUT I'M A CHEERLEADER"? Your story kind-of reminds me of that movie!
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  • From dolphina23 on March 06, 2009
    An amazing chapter here. You had a querky, funny, cynical beginning and then that emotional, overpowering end. It was stellar. I enjoyed the internal confusion and rage and pain that Naruto first tried to fight and then gave up aginst, as if it were a true tsunami bearing down and he had nowhere to go but the palce that had him so confused to begin with. And, in my head, as I was readsing the first chapter, I thought to myself the very things that came to Naruto's mind later in the chapter. 'I'm never going to see my family again.'

    The only bits I could try to offer concrit on are the bit at the end of the pickle excursion, since there was apperently broken glass and a fight that was all a bit confusing. And then, the bit at the end with Gai apparently reaching for a phone, calling Naruto's Dad and Naruto somehow wrestling away from Gai and still keeping the phone, even though most of that picture came through inference and not the actual writing. I mean, I pieced it together but the writing wasn't there and I'm not sure if that was intended, in order to drive home the confusion and utter hopelessness of the moment, or not.

    But otherwise, a great chapter with just the right amount of emotion and a couple of grand metaphors thrown in. I am waiting breathlessly for more, so do hurry if you can!
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  • From ANON - vulgarai on March 06, 2009
    I'm really happy for the update and I look forward to another! The plot is great and unlike anything I've read before. I really like it. And the comebacks are hysterical! I could have never though of any of them.
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  • From ANON - kiayu on March 04, 2009
    i love this story a lot great job
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  • From ANON - Brandi on March 03, 2009
    Oh God! This is so...so...so PERFECT. I actually did get to see the movie, by chance, and I just felt an instant connection the second it started. Same thing with your story. It really hits close to home. Please keep writing this. I love how utterly real this feels.
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  • From on March 03, 2009
    Just great!! I love your plot and all the characters! I hope you update soon I´m looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - DivaQueen52 on March 02, 2009
    Damn you had me crying with this one. People should be able to love anyone they want. Except pedophiles cause I might be discriminating but that's just gross.
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  • From ANON - vulgarai on March 01, 2009
    I LOVE this story! It's a great plot, really. I cannot WAIT for an update!
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  • From SecretNekoCAKE on March 01, 2009
    I like the plot... update soon... ;)
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  • From dolphina23 on March 01, 2009
    I agree with Itanarulover's review, ansd as my feelings are much the same on the idea of 'curing' homosexuality as if it were an addiction or cancer, I'll keep this short. The way you introduced Naruto's friends and and family and the way they see his particular quirks as obvious homosexuality was interesting. The way you chose to use this particular, and growing, obstacle for acceptance that some gays, unfortunately, go through adds a sense of realism and reliability to the story. And though I dislike stereotyping and bigoted language, it is in the context of the characters and not the story, so I'm able to see the need for it.

    I like Sasuke's character in this as well, he's very much a dislikable person, yet so raw and powerful and beautiful that I like him despite it all. And Naruto is clueless, quirky, and confused, much like he is the manga, but different, asd this is an AU, I was expecting that, and find it all to be verfy endearing and worthy of a further read, so continue please!!
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  • From ANON - nnie on March 01, 2009
    So good, and interesting! I haven't ever seen But I'm a Cheerleader, so this is very original to me. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From electrostatic on March 01, 2009
    It so hard finding a good ongoing Sasunaru fic nowdays.
    I found your today.

    Thank you. Update soon please.
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  • From ItaNarulover on March 01, 2009
    This is an interesting story you've got here, I'm looking forward to read the continuation.
    I really liked how you portrayed Naruto's parents at the beginning, because in several countries, especially those were homosexuality isn't accepted, parents react like that and I thought you described it well. They love their child of course but they are too obsessed with getting him "cured" thinking homosexuality is a disease to actually see that they are hurting him. I really hate those kind of parents, but they do exist.
    I also liked that even though this is an AU, you manage to make the characters stay somewhat in their character, if you know what I mean.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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