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Reviews for The Running Free

By : yolotengo
  • From butterflies1974 on April 10, 2009
    I liked this chapter. Sasuke and Itachi mom is getting a divorce, that works perfectly in this chapter. A lot of revelations in this chapter but I think that it worked perfectly. Thank you for a great chapter.
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  • From Gwyllion on April 04, 2009
    Hi there! It's Gwyllion over at YG! I'm so glad to have found your fic here.

    That last chapter seriously killed me. I hope Fugaku will come to terms and realize the mistake he's made. Good for Mikoto to take action. It shows that she still loves her sons no matter what. It's so horrible to see Sasuke, Naruto and Itachi to suffer like this. But at least they have each other for support and love. Once again, great story. Can't wait to read more! :D
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  • From LadyWolf on April 02, 2009
    BEAT'EM LIKE HE STOLE SOMETHIN'!!!!!!!! I hope she beat the shit out of that bastard!!! Geez!! no compassion for your son who has cancer...!

    All I gotta say is , "Karma is a bitch and what goes around come's around..."

    Post soon!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on April 02, 2009
    OMG I acan't wait to read more!!!
    And how will they readct to knowing that naru is pregnant?? I can't wait to find out!
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 02, 2009
    lol wow mikoto was really brave to slap fugaku lol. he is such an uncaring bastard. poor naru and his hormones. hmm when will they break the news of the pregnancy? hmm will more drama unfold?
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  • From missbri88 on April 02, 2009
    Go Makoto!!! Thats how a mother does it! Im so proud of her...
    And they skipped the pregnancy... I wonder how they'll take that later on...
    Another great chappie
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  • From butterflies1974 on April 02, 2009
    WOW!!! Sasuke and Itachi's father is an ass. But I loved it when their mom smacked the crap out of him. Great chapter can't wait to read more.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on March 30, 2009
    Chapter 14: Loved the lemon scene at the end. Naruto and Itachi together is so hot. I hope Sasuke cools down soon. I can't wait to see what's going to happen when the three of them head to Itachi and Sasuke's parents' house. Update soon, please.
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  • From LadyWolf on March 29, 2009
    I'm so glad you're not killing Sasuke off! I swear If this turned into a death Fic I just wouldn't forgive you!!!

    I feel so bad for the lovers :O( But at least the cancer didn't spread!

    I love reading this!! Post soon!
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  • From ANON - Kirai on March 29, 2009
    Hey there Just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed the new chapter and can not wait for more. I a really looking forward to how the 'family' responds to the idea of Naruto being with their heir.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on March 28, 2009
    My mom was given a central line after her last surgery. It helped because the veins in her arms were getting abused by all the needle sticks. And because she was taking chemo, her arms were just black and blue from the bruising due to the needles. Anyway, on to the story. This is for chapter 13. God, I feel so sorry for all of them. Naruto staying nauseated all the time. Sasuke for having to go through chemo and worrying about Naruto on top of it. And Itachi's really in a jam because he's got to be strong for his little brother and Naruto. I can't imagine Madara as a doctor. But I could see how he wouldn't get along with Itachi. I can't wait to see how Sasuke's parents are going to deal with their youngest son having cancer and fixing to be a father simultaneously. Update soon, please. Oh, and keep up the awesome work.
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  • From Jan on March 26, 2009
    Gods, poor Sasuke, not to mention all three of them, it seems as though everything around them is coming down and quickly.

    I can't wait for chapter 14 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From solitare1 on March 25, 2009
    I am eating this story alive!!! This story has so much angst, I think i have gotten an ulcer! Love the research you did on cancer, it's treatments, and their side effects. Great story!
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  • From butterflies1974 on March 24, 2009
    The suspense of Sasuke's parnets finding out is killing me... I can't wait to read more. And thank you for not killing Sasuke. :)
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  • From ANON - Kirai on March 22, 2009
    Hey there, great chapters, Sasuke having cancer was a new idea, but it could work out well. Sakura being Sasuke's doctor was mad funny though. If you want a challenge bring in Sasuke and Itachi's parents. That the father let his sons do as they pleased and live out life for themselves. But taking reputation seriously and due to their high class have gay children would not be permitted. And with Naruto being pregnant that causes all sorts of issues. While Itachi has bad eyes and Sasuke is sick that leaves a scared and pregnant Naruto to cope and fend for himself between the inner-clan battles. Don't know just a thought? It just came to mind and could extend the story to a never-ending-story. tehe ^-^
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