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Reviews for Those Mistakes We Make

By : ranmouri
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 12, 2010
    I really like this story and I hope you come back to it, especially since the next chappie was going to be Naruto's point of view. I hope I'll be able to read the rest of this story in the future.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From bloodshound on September 01, 2010
    wow awesome... loved to see what happens when Madara spots Naruto
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  • From ANON - Rumi on July 23, 2009
    I find this story interesting and refreshing. I also dig that Sai's a clone, wicked. So I know this is a Narusasu fic, but since Sai is another Sasuke (probably cooler, less of a jerk), I hope Naruto ends up with him.

    I wish it could have been Itachi, but ur story works. Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - CassandraD on March 24, 2009
    Sai is a clone. Haven't read that before.
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  • From Dreamfool on March 20, 2009
    I love it. I love it. I love, love, love it. Sai as Sasuke's clone is sooooo cool. I have never ever seen it before. My only grievance is Tsunade would never let Danjo get away with what he did. And she certainly wouldn't authorize Sasuke's assasination. At least not that early in the game. Maybe after he left Orochimaru, joined hebi (don't know if it's spelled that way as I'm only on chapter 339), and almost killed Naruto, again.
    I also agree that Kaka/Naru is weird. Although I must confess I've read some and they were really good stories, but I still found it weird. Besides that would not have worked in this story as it's the sharingan that makes the Uchihas so obsessed with Uzimakis. Oh, and thank you for explaining that. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on March 20, 2009
    Sai!!! Sai Sai Sai is an Uchiha now! At first I was so bewildered- is this 001 an OC? But as their was talk of 001 having the same face as Sasuke I realized 'OMG! It must be Sai!'

    What a totally awesome idea! It's a penis-obsessed Sasuke!!

    I bet that girl, 003, was supposed to be Mikoto. 001 and 002 thought of her as a mother. It's so sad the three of them weren't able to be together for long...

    I really love this story. The concept gets me excited- all the Uchihas going ga-ga over the Uzumakis. The first and second chapters were especially exciting. I loved seeing Madara go ga-ga over that Uzumaki lady, and Mikoto crushing on Kushina. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Naruto!
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  • From guitarmania2007 on March 20, 2009
    That was a nice twist on Sai, I have to admit I wasn't sure who you were talking about but then I got it near the end and it made me smile hehe awesomeness
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  • From ANON - gadez on March 20, 2009
    wow. wow. wow.
    PURE GENIUS
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  • From mrk33 on March 20, 2009
    That was brilliant. Bringing Sai into the fold of Naruto admires......we all know
    and must accept truthfully: Sai is from the Uchiha Clan. I loved the way Sasuke
    found Naruto, discovering 0001, or Shino-kun within the water drain. I guess 0002 met his
    end at the hand of Itachi. Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 20, 2009
    dude, that was just CREEPY!!! you're good! ;-) i didn't guess sai until the end, although you gave excellent clues. i'm just slow. LOL!
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  • From ANON - cinnamin911 on March 12, 2009
    Im so excited for this fanfic! *squueee* please update soon, the uchiha dynamics are just WOW and
    I cant wait to see what will happen later on! :3
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  • From Tensai on March 12, 2009
    Aw, protective Kakashi's so cute))
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  • From ANON - RasenganGirl on March 10, 2009
    I absolutely love this story! Your doing great and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - gigi on March 05, 2009
    Hi there! I just wanted to write that I have enjoyed reading your story! The emotions that each Uchiha have felt from Madara's father to Sasuke was conveyed in a smooth transition that actually made me tear and in some instances smirked when it was appropriate. I have nothing bad to critique, just that I actually teared up. How embarrassing! Hatake Kakashi, eh? Hmm.... Well, thank you for sharing your story and I look forward to the rest it!
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  • From Dreamfool on March 04, 2009
    Wait a minute, I thought Madara was the first Uchiha. The son of a Hyuuga and a demon. I'm very confused here.
    Anyway, I like the story but you might want to explain what it is than make Uchiha go into rut when they see an Uzamaki. And that scene where Sasuke realizes Naruto is a boy is totally funny. I would pay to see that put into animation. Or even comic form.
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