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Reviews for Illuminating Heaven

By : subtextual
  • From ANON - RedefiningAndrogyny on December 22, 2011
    Wow. I must say, this is not a story to be read in one day. By the end I was all but in tears, my core shaken from this fanfiction. It's rare that I find something that touches me this way, and it was all accomplished without the three cliché words. This story has a very special place in my heart now. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - ficfanatic on May 09, 2011
    Love this story of them coming together. I was suprised by this because I usually only want Kak with Iruka. I think this story written any other way would not give it the impact it has here.
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  • From ghostraven on February 22, 2011
    i can do nothing else but stand and clap, breathlessly. i haven't read or watched naruto since ep. 150, roughly. it's no use. its real story can sadly be never as good as the fanfictions written of it, of which yours is one absolutely breathtaking example.
    thank you!
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  • From ANON - sassynu on December 31, 2009
    Wow your last words were so deep the whole thing was really deep and I love that stuff not the depressing kind of deep but a joyous deep I'm tired of depressing and you really put something else in the undertones of the whole thing it was just awesome a great read I could barely stop reading it because it held me in a place of woah and awe and cool stuff like that I've never heard the song you used but I did have my own soundtrack, use somebody the paramore cover and a song wide awake from kitchie nadal no real reason just that that was what I was listening to but it did inhance the pure pleasure of just reading this story wrapped up in my own little bubble of this world of emotions I was brought into so, great story I also love the pairing and you do a great job of Sasuke/Kakashi bonding, and I'm glad I found the story. And yes it did help me open my eyes to better possibilities in life.
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  • From cynaga on June 25, 2009
    chapter 10 poetry

    luv the POV you wrote bravo
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  • From on April 19, 2009
    amazing

    the way everything fit together was brilliant

    keep writing, your work is worth reading a million times over
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on April 17, 2009
    Awww thanks for the shout-out. It really was unnecessary cuz all I did was say "I love this" the entire time, but hey if that helped, GOOD! XD

    I love Illuminating Heaven and will love reading your future oneshots!!!! ♥
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on April 16, 2009
    I LOVE this! And I LOVE you!

    Short and simple, no? XD

    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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  • From ANON - jaq on March 15, 2009
    Oh, crap, I hope I didn't just spoil you with that review. Uh, if you aren't reading the manga scanlations online, DO NOT READ THE REVIEW I JUST LEFT. Sorry, it just now occured to me that you might be a Shonen Jump reader only. >_
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  • From ANON - jaq on March 15, 2009
    I really have been enjoying this story - you're probably one of the more talented people writing fanfiction for this fandom, and particularlu this pairing. But may I ask - what sort of post-canon universe are you envisioning here? I mean, does Kakashi know about the whole thing with Itachi being ordered to kill the clan? Does Sasuke? How close to canon are you staying?

    Just something that's been at the back of my mind.
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on March 12, 2009
    Well...I'm too lazy to go on LJ, so you get my review here! ^^

    You wanna know what the best thing was? Having read the whole chapter except for the end because rereading the whole thing had the ANTICIPATION rollin'! I LIVED for the ending because more than ever I could literally feel Kakashi. How his thoughts were becoming broken and jumbled and purely emotional, while almost overriding the physical aspect. AHHHHH! My heart was beating so fast it's ridiculous *nods*. Even if you're not completely satisfied with it, I hope all the positive feedback you get will indefinitely change your mind. Personally, if I had written something this aofjheiofa (yes, that's a word...somewhere...) I would print it off and frame it on my wall for the WORLD to see! XD

    I loved the intensity provided by the italics and the little offhand comments in parentheses. The repetition absolutely KILLED me at some points "curl, curl, curl" "slam, slam, slam" ...Oh my lorrrrrd! With everything from Kakashi's point of view, the sex was amazing. Despite being a female who only "recives" (XD) I think you totally channeled the sensations a man would feel while...um...engaged. XD

    Aside from that, there were some sentences that really stood out to me (well, more like the WHOLE thing).

    "And then you realize it was this you've been fighting against since the moment you slipped into that bedroll and pressed your hearts together; since the moment you woke and first caught the scent of his arousal; since you tried to break him down by reteaching him all the lessons he never properly learned because you never properly taught them." Every time I read this, it hits me so hard because it shows Kakashi is beginning to break himself down, as well! Ahhh ♥!!!!

    "You break the kiss slowly and shift your hips off of his so he doesn't notice that your erection has slightly waned, tempered down by those strange stabs of heat through your chest. The fire's burned awry, you think, and not in the right direction." This sentence is pure genius! Probably my favorite out of the entire chapter, believe it or not ^^;

    I could spend all day picking through this and saying "I liked this" or "I loved that" but that would just get old after a while. You already know how obsessed I am with this story XD (And the art that comes with it!) I hope the next chapter comes easier for you, like I said, the uncharted territory has now been...charted! The onnnnnnnnnnnly thing I have to question you about (and you're going to laugh because I noticed something THIS ridiculous) is how their balls can swing together from that position...? XD

    'Kay I'm done now =P
    ♥♥♥

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  • From ANON - CalypsoAntigone on March 12, 2009
    Good god. That was...Perfection. Pure pure awesomeness. Oh my.

    I need to go...Clean or lie down or something now. Golly.
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  • From ANON - kris on March 03, 2009
    OMG! this story is great cant wait for the next chapter! xxx
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on February 27, 2009
    Alright I'm working on it now, I don't have a life to attend to today anyway XD

    Might take a while though...^^

    This should be the last spam message too XD sorry about that!
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on February 27, 2009
    Awww I heard LJ is confusing...but I'm so tempted! I'll probably end up doing it because I'm so easily persuaded XD

    ...and cuz you're so nice! *hugs* ♥
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