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Reviews for Illuminating Heaven

By : subtextual
  • From ShinobiGoneWild on February 27, 2009
    XD I'm spamming you back! I promise oneofthesedays I'll go on LJ...it's the laziness, I swear it's like a plague. But I'm on ygallery as sycopowerranger and can find you if you're on there to REALLY spam you! ^^

    Ugh it's like 7:30 here too, but at least it's Friday~
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on February 27, 2009
    To be completely blunt: this is insane! And I love insane! ♥ I haven't read anything on here in a long time and your review made me all happy and want to indulge in whatever you have posted on here. Dear lord if only I had known SOONER! I swear with each chapter my lungs burned because I wasn't breathing properly because I was so on edge and DYING to know what happened next. You have me floored with Sasuke's bittersweet characterization. To get into the mind of an individual who feels things but is unable to describe them is no easy task, but you are doing it so perfectly. You cultivate the smallest seed of a narrative and develop it into this amazingly vivid description that never ceases to leave me awed.

    I live so much for sexual tension and you have dragged it on through several chapters perfectly, building it up so strongly in the both of them to the point where it can no longer be ignored. The entire bit about feeling "hunger" and how it lies in remission only to be triggered by the subtlest things really captured me. And as they finally kissed, the entire end of that chapter was so powerful and vulnerable at the same time--and I love the confliction of that!

    Whew...sorry for the novel I seem to have written here, summing up all the thoughts I've been having for the past hour or so is pretty difficult, but I tried.

    I'm not on LJ unfortunately...so I hope you keep updating on this site as well! ♥
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 20, 2009
    A real winner, I'm biting my nails.Characters are so realistic and the slip slide of sharingan has always fascinated me.
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  • From ANON - 7eventy7 on February 20, 2009
    You've got me hooked. Great story, great writing, great style, great pairing. More please!
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  • From happyalien on February 20, 2009
    I really enjoyed reading what you've written so far and it's nice reading a fanfiction where both parties are affected by each other :P Update soon! also I was wondering if there's anything alike story alert (on ff.net) that tells you when a story is updated?
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  • From ANON - bluegirl on February 20, 2009
    This story is wonderful! Your writing style is a joy to read. You give me shivers. Kakashi and Sasuke are just so great together, and I like that you're not rushing it. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you update soon!
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