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Reviews for Ash and Maelstrom

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From kiera on February 19, 2015
    COntinuation pleaseeeee! I love both universes too, though its slightly strange to have them put together, its still so intriguing.
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  • From Dorkchic on April 14, 2010
    More? Please? *makes chibi face*
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  • From MadaraSama on April 16, 2009
    PFFTTHJJBOIUGTI :sputters: What can possibly be better than Naruto and the Dark Hunters together? Plz tell me that you'll continue this! :)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 19, 2009
    So cool. Please keep writing its really freakin' hard to fin Dark-Hunter fanfiction. Especially decent ones. If you know if any, especially slash ones please let me know.
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  • From JeanMPat on February 19, 2009
    Interesting. But the first sentence did nothing for the intro of Ash. Spot on in personality of both Ash and Simi. Please update soon!
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  • From airamsan on February 16, 2009
    I love this story .....I bow down and worship at the temple of wicked


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  • From Zeenath on February 15, 2009
    Men this is Interesting. Like A LOT!!!!!! can't wait for the rest of this and the rest of "I'd know you anywhere" ^-^
    ^-^ Keep up the good work ^-^
    See ya -Moiira-
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  • From ANON - kinkou on February 15, 2009
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!n This is going to be hilarious. I'm just wondering if you'll be using post Nicky or Pre Nicky. ^___^ That and to see what other Hunters will show. *snicker* Please don't hold back.

    -Tryst
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  • From Daydreamer79 on February 15, 2009
    First off, WOW. Second, I am so stoked to see a crossover of Dark hunters with naruto. I love Ash, I wouldn't kick him out of my bed unless he wanted to do it on the floor. I don't usually start reading a story until at least 4 or 5 chapters are posted but when I saw that it had Ash I couldn't resist. I almost had an orgasm in the book store when I bought her Acheron book. I look forward to what you will do with this story. I will keep my eyes open for the next update. Take care and happy writing.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 15, 2009
    i see you are starting out with a bang this story is really captivating and using the characters from the dark series is genius (but that's what you are) so take a clap and cookies from me i think this is going to be one blazin story can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From TheSimi on February 15, 2009
    OMG OMG OMG I told you yesterday that you are my Goddess and after reading this I multiply that with a thousand…this was so frikking awesome sweetie! Everything from the writing style to the descriptions was pure amazingness!!

    Ash when he walks through the streets of Konoha was so cool and I could totally see him before me. Sakura kicked ass and oh yeah…Sasuke deserved it, why does he keep hurting Naruto? He will regret it later and I only hope that he will find his own redemption one day.

    I loved the meeting between Ash and Naruto, Naruto has an aura anyone would be drawn too and of anyone could befriend the great Acheron it would be Naruto. Despite their obvious differences they have similar pasts filled with hate and scorn. I felt so sorry for our blond beating his knuckles against the log like that and it almost made me wish that Sakura had broken more than Sasuke’s jaw…maybe made good on the threat to have him shake his hands in his stomach…very visual and wicked threat….made me laugh.

    The Simi…Wonderful! With both her and Naruto Ichiraku’s must have made more than a bundle…And it must be interesting for Naruto to meet someone who can out eat him.

    It’s good to know that Sakura and Itachi cares for Naruto, he deserves good friends and I think that Sakura is one of the few people Naruto really considers family.

    This was more than fantastic sweetie, I don’t have the words to tell you how much I LOVED this chapter, absolutely everything about it was dazzling and wonderful, amazing and brilliant!

    Thank you so much for this and for the dedication, it really did make me smile (rather goofily at that) all the time I was reading this wonderfulness. I really look forward to find out what will happen next and how Ash will train Naruto and the blonds’ meetings with other characters from the DH universe…Again thank you and I can’t wait to read more!!!!

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  • From ANON - Neji's Soulmate on February 15, 2009
    If you complete this story you will become my most favourite author in the universe. I love Sherrilyn Kenyon and the Dark Hunter universe. I like the way this is shaping up with Ash deciding to take Naruto under his wing. So will we get to see jealous Sasuke when he realised what he lost? I'm waiting with bated breat for the next chapter and I'd bribe you with cookies and chocolate if it would help.
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