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Reviews for Rival Swingers

By : Raholea
  • From Blackwidina on December 23, 2009
    O_O

    Whoa . . .

    You, my dear, are a pervert.

    And the world is better for your presence.
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  • From YojiKato on November 05, 2009
    Holy crap that was hot!! Yay for both gettin' nailed. Heheh. I do have to be honest, I kinda skim the het parts and focus on the yuri and yaoi. Very good chapter and I look forward to the next. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Djargo on November 02, 2009
    WOW! Great story. I wasn't sure about the pairings, at first, but your writing took care of those doubts. This is one hot story.^_^ I hope you put out another chapter because I'd loved to read about the morning after. Can you imagine some of the things going through their heads!?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2009
    OOOOhhhhh I love when Naruto is aggressive like that
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  • From Leeana69 on October 21, 2009
    :snickers:

    Good chapter, exactly the right amount of smut between everyone. Though Naruto and Sasuke's portion reminded me of a Harlequin romance with the somewhat cheesy dialogue. :D

    Though I can say nothing, at least you're updating you're work on a regular basis. ^-^;;

    :hangs head in shame:

    There, story read and reviewed, now I'm off to go watch Leverage and smoosh men together in compromising positions and watch them wiggle and try to get away. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. >:D
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  • From serenagold on October 21, 2009
    *=O_O=*

    Goddamn!! That was the hottest goddamn thing EVER!! You even slipped some feral Naruto action in there for me. Its like some sort of dirty version of christmas!! =^^= hehehe

    Keep up the awesome work! *nosebleed
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on October 21, 2009
    .....
    Dear Yaoi God,
    My dearest Fluffy needs to be inducted into the smutty-angel ranks. She has gained her wings with this fic. I tasteful blend of het, yuri and yaoi. I applaude thee. I loved it; our plot baby is now a grown ass sexy man. Brillant job, wifey.
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  • From ANON - Kay on September 30, 2009
    You still have the talent for writing that I remember. I'm not a fan of the particular style you have but you do it oh so well. I'm sincerely interested to see more. Nice job.
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  • From Aini on August 15, 2009
    Nice chapter, Beth. I have to say that I'm really not used to reading Het. ^_^; Sad, isn't it? Anyway, it was enjoyable and I have to admit that the first part was my favorite. If only you had gone into more detail with the kiss! XD j/k
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  • From YojiKato on August 14, 2009
    I don't like readin' het, but I saw the yaoi warnin' and thought I'd give it a chance. I hope to see some male on male smut soon. ^_^ Either way, very well written, so, keep up the good work. ^_^
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  • From Leeana69 on August 11, 2009
    Kukuku.

    What an excellent read. I'm not sure if I got the review cherry for this chapter, but maybe I'll just poke Feion in the eye and steal it from her. >:D

    Awesome chapter, as I usually get from you, darling Fluffy that you are. ^3^
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on August 11, 2009
    YES YES!

    You know what I had to do to get this chapter! *Boogies*
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  • From fruittart on February 27, 2009
    lol, nice. I really liked how you played the characters out and I hope you get a chance to write more (*coughsmut*) soon.
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  • From Gwenn on February 12, 2009
    Interesting begining ^^ Although I'm not a fan of these pairings I'd like to read more !
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  • From PnKnG on February 12, 2009
    Actually it's not the first Naruto Swinger fic, Feion Phylar.
    There is a stroy called "Swingers in Konoha" by Ero-Writer over at FF.net. Really worth to check out. Unfortunately he has giving up on the story but he says anyone who wants can adopt it as long as you send him a PM first.
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