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By : gingermaya
  • From ANON - Vénia on April 30, 2012
    seems like AFF don't really like that I wanna comment this way so I continue it on Y!Gallery, I hope you don't mind!
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  • From ANON - Vénia on April 22, 2012
    ch. 5.

    uhh this really will be ugly... I wonder what Kakashi will do.
    and I hope later we'll see the continuation of the flashback!
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  • From ANON - Vénia on April 22, 2012
    ch. 4.
    hmm it's even more interesing! poor Kakashi is sure confused a lot!
    and Pein is just a little cutei ;)
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  • From ANON - Vénia on April 22, 2012
    I thought I can leave a comment after each chapter but now I see that they're listed belov each other. I don't know the site, may I did something wrong? or is it it's way in here? anyway, if you don't mind I'll leave my comments by chapter. so it's for 3rd.

    it seems to be interesting! I can't wait to see how they become lovers! Kisame is cute to worry for Itachi :)
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  • From ANON - Vénia on April 22, 2012
    uhh this sure will be ugly! Kakashi, you're just so stupid sometimes! you're just too much in your own world and it's pretty dangerous!
    I mean, Iruka is a nice person and was very much embarrassed from the start, so Kakashi shuld've just shown him the face he always shows, offer some perverse jokes and when poor Iruka is red like a tomato twice, ha should've asked him to keep his little secret and leave. okay, he was rough with Iruka back then apropos of the chunnin exam, but after that he mostly made fun of him so he don't have to return to this rough mode. Iruka's already saw one face under the mask yesterday and now he showed him one more. stupid mistake. Iruka is kind and easy to embarras but he isn't stupid!
    I just love the way you wrote them! they're two big fav for me and I just love when they're sweet-cute-fluffy lovers, but sometimes it's so good to see they show this face of their for each other (cause I think both way is "under the manga's skin" if you know what I mean) especially with a good plot- and this seems to be that for me :D

    (sorry for haphazard mistakes, english is not my native. let me know if something is less understandable!)
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  • From ANON - Vénia on April 22, 2012
    hi!
    I've been read about this story on y!Gallery on Daydreamer79's recommend-list. firs I saw that it's a Pein/Kakashi fic I thought it's not my thing but when I read her comment on it I thought I should give it a chance, so I'm here.
    and WOW!!!
    really seems to be an interesting story! I wonder how Kakashi and Pein become lovers. and poor Iruka. he sure stepped in the middle of something he shouldn't. he sure'll have awkward moments with Kakashi later. at the other hand, if Kakashi really wanna give Naruto to the Akatsuki and he'll realize it... uhh this will be ugly XP
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  • From ANON - Mrs. UminoHatake on October 18, 2010
    This is one of the best fanfics that I have ever read. It incredibly imaginative and detailed. The smut is awesome. I felt as if these characters were part of my life. I even cried during the last few chapters. You are a VERY good writer. I cant wait to see what happens in Part 2. Keep up the good work. P.S. I wouldn't mind being in the middle of the four of those guys.
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  • From cynaga on January 14, 2010
    AMAZING story - fast paced and exciting. INCREDIBLE sensuality and emotion. ***** (5 stars)
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  • From polaris on July 15, 2009
    I really loved your story,thanks
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  • From satterb on July 14, 2009
    I just can't believe this is finished. I am simply in awe at how seamlessly you've put it all together. No loose ends, no contradictions. It was beautiful and emotionally charged. I was also thrilled to see how brilliantly you brought the 4th back as well. I cannot wait to see the beginning of the sequel. You did a beautiful job on this and I really miss you! I can't wait to hear from you. Love you lots! Beth
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  • From Tesp71283 on July 14, 2009
    haha, I will be honest to say that a part of me is very sad to see the iruka/kakashi part over as never meant to be, I think that part of the reason why they weren't meant to be, is because they never had enough time to develop, and iruka did too little too late. good story! I wonder what your ideas are for the sequel.
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  • From suzannecmc on July 14, 2009
    fun ending,
    thanks for the story
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  • From ANON - Yuki on July 14, 2009
    Awww... it ends... ;_;

    But there will be a sequel? Well and truely? If so I CANNOT WAIT! -is jumping up and down like a bouncy ball-

    I hope Kakashi heals a bit... and I wonder what the future holds in store for them...
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  • From ANON - googledi on July 14, 2009
    Please, please, please tell me this will be end with YonKaka...I know that this is peinKaka but can it also be YonKaka! I really love this pairing!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on July 11, 2009
    Now I cannot positively cannot wait to see the next chapter. I'm so hyper, so on edge, I've even put my own book on hold because I can't concentrate. XD

    I hope you have Naruto explain all of this to Tsunade and have her heal Kakashi- and more importantly (yeah, I have mixed-up priorities)- give Kakashi back his Sharingan (because lets face it, Great Copy-Nin Kakashi isn't The Copy-Nin without his sharingan. Doesn't stop him from being Kakashi, though) and I'm hoping that the story goes beyond just this rescue and recuperation. What about crushing Madara and making him pay for all he's done? Naruto asking Sasuke? I'm so on edge, my mind whirling with so many ideas...

    I think you did a good job in keeping Iruka and Naruto IC for this chapter, which must have been hard considering the circumstances. Can't wait for the rescue part. =D

    Anyways, great chapter =) and I can't wait to see the next one.
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