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Reviews for Questionable Loyalty

By : gingermaya
  • From suzannecmc on March 23, 2009
    poor Kakashi:(
    his way of life seems twisted and vulgar to him now.
    the man is brainwashed, but there is a valaid point too.
    almost seemed like he saw Iruka as a nurturing monster.
    ahhh...a thinking chapter.
    thanks for that.
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  • From polaris on March 22, 2009
    wonderful work as always
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  • From satterb on March 21, 2009
    Whoa! I did not see that coming! I'm now wondering what you are up to. Besides twisting and turning the plot as you usually do, to completely ensnare your readers. It's what keeps us all coming back for more you know. Also, call me a pervert if you will, but isn't it time someone...anyone...got a little? Please? Loved the update, and seriously can't wait to see where you go from here! - Beth
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  • From suzannecmc on March 21, 2009
    ahhh...knew he'd use the kids to get to Iruka:)
    nice.
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  • From suzannecmc on March 18, 2009
    very well done.
    thank you

    ps - could you email me updates?
    mwahhhahhaha - just kidding;P
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  • From satterb on March 18, 2009
    Kakashi's not playing is he? It felt like Pein wanted Kakashi to accept his offer a little more whole heartedly. But Kakashi's entire belief system has been turned inside out and while the quips about the Akatsuki "uniform" were enjoyable, I'm trying to imagine the thoughts he must have been having that would have led him to make such blunt statements about his feelings on the matter. It seemed almost an after thought, you know? I feel certain that it would have been even more comical realizing, that with all the emotional issues he had to deal with and all the intospection he had been doing that during that time he had a moment to even consider what he might have to wear. Now, THATS funny! Too bad too, Kakashi would have looked "bitchin" in a mesh shirt....(wipes drool off keyboard). Maybe later he can "secretly" try on one of the, (now what was that word again?) oh yeah, Gaudy Atatsuki Cloaks and then get caught by Pein when he has it on. Teehee. I will see you soon! Loved the work by the way! - Beth
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  • From hsosborne on March 16, 2009
    I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this and any of your other fics, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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  • From satterb on March 15, 2009
    Poor Itachi. And poor Kakashi, it's hard when what you think is right is turned around on you. It sort of felt that way when the truth was revealed about why Itachi killed his clan in the manga. Kakashi's going to realize that had Obito not died in battle protecting his village, then that same village would have sentenced him to death mearly because he was an Uchiha. This was a very intense chapter. But a pivotal one none the less. Marvelous work as always. I can't wait to see what happens next. Beth
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  • From suzannecmc on March 14, 2009
    very intelligent and original.
    kudos!
    I had wanted to read this for a while (title caught my attention)
    and read it over the last two days.
    really well thought out characterizations.
    thanks:)
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  • From satterb on March 12, 2009
    HOTNESS-ON-A-STICK!!!!! I didn't expect to get so lucky as to see a lemon between these two before Itachi spoke to Kakashi. That was so sweet and loving. You've outdone yourself once again! I am looking forward to the upcoming conversation between Kakashi and Itachi. I know it's going to be a tear-jerker. Thanks so much for the wonderful update. beth
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  • From satterb on March 10, 2009
    Awww! Kisame is so protective of Itachi. I love his character in this fic. He's so real, sweet, tough, and funny. He's the perfect compliment to the fragil Itachi. You've done such a great job so far. I am loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Squeeee! Later, Beth
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 10, 2009
    wow kisame really has is bad for itachi lol.
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  • From satterb on March 09, 2009
    I just love "pissy" Kakashi. Although he did get a little too close to stepping on Kisame's toes when he got snarky about Itachi. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And I absolutely agree that Iruka is too smart to be played by Kakashi unless he was emotionally involved somehow. Pein is not going to like this one bit. Catch ya later...Great, Outstanding, Brilliant update by the way. Cheers, Beth
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  • From satterb on March 04, 2009
    Wow! I hit the jackpot!!! I go out of town, and come back to three new chapters! Things are getting interesting. I was afraid for a moment that Kakashi wasn't going to forgive Pein. It suprised me that Pein didn't seem to feel very remorseful about the drug trafficking and it also didn't seem like he was going to have it stopped. But it looks like he would do anything for Kakashi. Another thing that stands out, is that Iruka seems to think very lowly of Kakashi ever since he saw both Kakashi and Pein in the alley. Iruka seems to feel his morals are superior to Kakashi's. But in reality, Iruka might be the one to participate in a physical relationship without being deeply emotionally tied to the other person. I don't think that your Kakashi would or could do that. Pein loves Kakashi so much he's reluctant to allow Kakashi to approach Iruka in that manner even though it would be the easiest way to get the information he's looking for. I may be way off base too, and if I am, just let me know. I can't help but try to predict where this story is taking me. I'm usually glad that I never can do a very good job...LOL. Talk to you later.

    Beth
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  • From polaris on March 04, 2009
    your fiction is so interesting and different,not the same old kakashi-iruka but kakashi-pein versus iruka!it's intriguing!please,update soon!
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