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By : gingermaya
  • From suzannecmc on April 05, 2009
    I like how you build the story. Detail makes it and yours are not tedious,
    but move the story with a nice flow.

    I can almost see a little paralle in his getting to know Pein and
    how he is getting to know Iruka.
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  • From suzannecmc on April 05, 2009
    I would think that because his emotions are so mixed up
    and technically he dosen't truley want to have sex with anyone other than Pein
    that he would be very submissive his first time with Iruka.
    I think you got it right:)
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  • From suzannecmc on April 04, 2009
    Hopefully, Kakashi wouldn’t share the rest of his former lover’s penchants – like treason, for example.
    nice:)

    I haven't been able to be online for a while and gah, all the new chapters!!!
    I am catching up now.

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  • From arabuzumaki on April 03, 2009
    this cahpter was nice and really believable too. because i can so see pein not being able to write properly because of the situation in his village and what not ^_^ after all he really is just a stunted kid who wants peace for the world
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  • From satterb on April 01, 2009
    Damn woman! You are on a roll lately! I love Pakkun!!! He is so funny. I thought it was sweet that he crawled in Kakashi's lap and helped him relax. I also loved it that he took it upon himself to check Pein out. I'm thankful he passed the test. Had he not, Kakashi wouldn't have even been involved. Loved this update, and keep them coming! Love ya! - Beth
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 01, 2009
    lol@ pakkun that sure does seem like something he would do. thanks for including pakkun in this fic ^_^

    oh i'm still not wanting iru-chan to get hurt in this fic. so don't forget ok don't hurt him too much ok ^_^
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  • From satterb on March 31, 2009
    You are so damned brilliant. I swear I rarely see a story woven so tightly, no loose ends, everything tied so neatly together. I love your work and I'm ready to see how Pein and Kakashi finally get together. Love ya! - Beth
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  • From jordash00 on March 30, 2009
    I must admit that your stories make me nervous. After having read the one with Naruto, Kakashi, and Pein I don't know what to expect. I love Kakashi, and he is always so tormented in your stories.

    By no means is this a criticism. It's a magnificent compliment. As much as I don't want to know whay happens, I do want to know because of the amazing story lines you create. But why poor Kakashi? I guess that even in the manga, he is tortured menatally - the death of all those he loved, teaching the chidori to a maniac, seeing his father committ suicide... Yea, I'd be tormented too!

    You have me on pins and needles and I hope that Kakashi does get some reprieve by the end as in the other story. Oh, and poor Iruka. I love Kakashi and Iruka together.
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  • From satterb on March 30, 2009
    OMG! Girl you ROCK!!!!! That was tender and hot all at the same time. I'm glad you kept Kakashi's emotional torment over this in there! We can't forget whom he truly loves. And thank you for the dirty talk, you know I love it! Keep at it, and you will get more comfortable with it. You did great girl! Talk to you later. - Beth
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  • From satterb on March 28, 2009
    EEEE! I didn't think that Kakashi was going to take this route! I think it's because he's not been having thoughts about Iruka in that way at all. I hate that he had to lie to Iruka about Pein. Kakashi loves Pein and it was a little weird to see him do that. I can't wait for the next update! - Beth
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 27, 2009
    oh wow kasi is a good actor lol. poor iru-chan he is just lonely he wants some company. would you please not break his heart to pieces, please be gentle when the time comes. make him understand. i love ruka alot, he is too sweet to get his heart broken.
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  • From RyuEarth on March 27, 2009
    I don't really feel bad for Kakashi when he lied like that, cause he's using Iruka now when Iruka's feelings are realy T_T
    but I do enjoy a drunk Iruka ^^;
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  • From satterb on March 26, 2009
    Oh! So polite, you could almost cut the air with a knife! The sexual tension coming from Iruka, and the tension in general Kakashi has been suffering through is so palpable! I like the introspection you're giving us. I am really anxious to see what's going to come next. Love ya! - Beth
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  • From satterb on March 25, 2009
    Oh how little you know, Iruka. Short but sweet, still it was a good update. Poor Kakashi. He's in such turmoil. Thanks for the update. I can't wait till the next. - Beth
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  • From Chrysler on March 23, 2009
    Very interesting. Love the complexity and the couples and can't wait for more.
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