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By : gingermaya
  • From satterb on April 15, 2009
    Dammit Kakashi!!! It was very difficult to remind myself that these two do end up together. I guess Pein will have to use a little aggression! I loved this chapter until Kakashi stuck his head up his own ass...LOL. Thanks for upadating. I was beginning to jones for it. Love ya girl...Beth
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  • From RyuEarth on April 15, 2009
    I'm curious about what you are going to do about the recent manga developments in 'pein's' body not being a real person? or will kakashi actually met nagato? ^^;
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  • From ANON - yuki on April 15, 2009
    Oooh, excellent! You caught me by surprise there, near the end, with that kiss. =D This was a great chapter- I don't think I need to tell you "keep it up!" but I'm gonna say it anyways, because I finished this chapter and am already dying for the next one. ^_^ So- keep up the good work, your writing is beyond awesome.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 12, 2009
    Great chapter as always! =D Although I was hoping for something between Kakashi and Pain. *pouts* Can't wait for the next chapter, though. ^^
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  • From suzannecmc on April 11, 2009
    kitten...I think shark-bait!
    hehe..thanks for the tender kisame, I will never look at him the same way:)
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  • From satterb on April 11, 2009
    Ok, you were right...that was hot. I'm glad you wrote this. I tried to imagine the look of concentration on Itachi's face as he worked Kisame. It's alot of work to be the top. It was also funny to know that Itachi is keeping an eye on Pein-Sama and takes an interest in who he is attracted to. It's good that they all seem to accept Kakashi. At first I thought that Itachi didn't like Kakashi at all. I'm very excited about the possiblities of this and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for all your hard work. I'll talk to you soon...Beth
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 11, 2009
    lol i was thinking of the same thing lmao. trying to picture them, kisame is so big guy and tachi is really delicate looking. lmao
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  • From ANON - yuki on April 10, 2009
    *is bouncing on heels for next chapter, biting fingernails, and constantly checking everyday, sometimes three times a day* Thats how much I like your story.

    -waits for next chapter-
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 07, 2009
    I have a quick question, however- in chapter 3, at the very end, it mentioned Konan. Is she dead, or is she simply off doing his work as his "Angel"? (I'm really hoping she's not dead, but either way, I'm a bit confused). Could you clarify?
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  • From suzannecmc on April 06, 2009
    a really different Kisame, profound and cryptic and caring.
    nice dynamics between everyone:0
    thank you.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 06, 2009
    I liked this chapter a lot. =D Your writing keeps me captivated... you write with a sense of purpose thats often hard to find in other AFF stories I read. Please update soon! (I know you've been updating nearly every day, but I still ask you to update soon just to let you know you have avid readers checking every day for another chapter. ;D)
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  • From satterb on April 06, 2009
    What a sad and sobering thought to know what Kisame meant about his and Itachi's futures. I thought it was funny when Kisame gave Kakahi payback for stealing his food though...LOL. Thanks for updating so quickly considering how busy you are. You're the best! Love ya - Beth
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  • From suzannecmc on April 05, 2009
    oh dear, we often fall for those who need us most
    and show a little kindness and gratefulness;)

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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 05, 2009
    I really like the way the plot for this story is unfolding. I think chapter 28 was a bit short for my liking, but I'm completely hooked to your story. =D keep up the good work, you have a lot of fans waiting for each installment, and I love how you poke fun at Pain; it's hilarious, but what's even better is that you keep them both IC as much as possible.

    Can't wait for more lemons between Kakashi and Pain. =O
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  • From satterb on April 05, 2009
    Hmmm...Pein's gonna be "hot for teacher" lol. I liked this. I like the way Kakashi picks at and teases Pein. You know what they say about teasing your crush. They are attracted to each other, they just don't know it yet. Loved the update, Thanks for your hard work - Beth
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