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By : gingermaya
  • From satterb on April 21, 2009
    I'll have to check out that "honey & cheese" pancake thing. It sounds more like a crepe recipe! Haha, I just got home, and had to read this update. I was very excited when you told me about it. I feel really bad for Kakashi. He's so much happier in Ame, but you never cheat your readers by making the characters lives easy. They all have to go through their personal hells. Although many characters in this fic will be torn apart, I just pity Kakashi the most because he's the only one that doesn't have the good fortune to believe everything is black and white. Pein is firmly grounded in his ideas as are the citizens of Konoha, just as Kakashi once was. But that's all over for him now and you captured it perfectly in the way you had him wishing he was struck down by lightening. Thanks for all your hard work on this fic, and take care, and stop falling down and hurting yourself! XD Love ya, Beth
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  • From suzannecmc on April 21, 2009
    My my, but Kakashi is the actor.

    "said arm was still attached" hehe, I love Guy.

    have to admit, tad upset with Kakashi (understand completely why he's doing this and torn)
    still...but this will bring soooo much conflict for his emotions. good, looking forward to it:)

    thank you.

    And welcome Yuki, congrats on the account:)
    Pein's versital, he bottomed for Kisame in one of the earlier chapters;)

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  • From JackalNinja on April 20, 2009
    Ahahah! I finally got a AFF account! (I couldn't figure out how to, at first. =/) Now I can review ANY story I come accross! WOOT WOOT! -does the happy riceball victory dance-

    Now if I can only convince myself to start writing those fantasies in my head and to remember the password/username combo. ^^

    And now I don't have to keep on typing my name and email (and have it hidden) whenever I give you a review! (it does become a pain in the neck after awhile.)
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 20, 2009
    of course, Lividangel, Kakashi makes the perfect uke. =O how can I imagine him otherwise? I mean, when I'm not reading Kakairu and finding him on top every time... ^_^

    But yeah, I can really imagine Kakashi wanting to relinquish (Relinquish. I love that word. Re-lin-quish. Ahahah.) the sort of responsibility that comes with being himself. Copy-nin, Sharingan Kakashi, Hatake Kakashi the man who copied over a 1000 jutsus and blah blah blah... I mean, even he needs to sit back and relax. Let someone else be in charge for once.

    Ironically, this time it doesn't look like he has a choice (I doubt Pein wants to bottom, does he? I can't imagine him as anything but Seme. =/)
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  • From ANON - satterb on April 20, 2009
    Hey! I was surprised at another helping of Pein/Kakashi goodness! Have I told you how much I love this fic lately. It is turning out to be your best one yet! I'm so thrilled to be a part of this. Haha, I had to wait till Monday to read this little gem, because I'm still having internet problems at home. I was extrememly upset that our little conversation got cut off Friday! I look forward to talking to you soon. Thanks for the wonderful update! I look foward to more of your brilliant mind! Take care darlin! Beth
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  • From suzannecmc on April 19, 2009
    I knew I saw parallels in the way this relationship and Iruka/Kakashi's
    are going. It's an interesting background your setting so to bring
    us to the present.
    It's also very true that many powerful men want to bottom, they want
    to give up that reponsability in bed and be taken care of. So your
    Kakashi would absolutely be a natural bottom:)

    thank you.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 18, 2009
    Ah, I finally realize it now.

    Every chapter brings something new to the table, initiates some new sort of progress or another big step being made. Unlike other writers, your chapters do not rely on drabbling and useless fluff to keep the story alive. Impressive, since many writers have difficulty otherwise.

    Kakashi has never given a blowjob before, has never been this intimate or close to anyone throughout adulthood... and now you're showing his progress from Sharingan-Emotionally-and-Socially-stunted Kakashi to a more open, relaxed, and willingly expressive Kakashi when he's with Pein. Not only is your writing impressive, but the way you keep showing the PROGRESS he goes through is... amazing.

    And how on earth did you know I'm a girl? I thought I did a good enough job hiding that. =O

    XD

    Anyways, keep writing! =D
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 18, 2009
    "Prince Albert Piercing." We never did learn about that in Sex Ed. in middle school. =O They never teach us the really REALLY important stuff...
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 18, 2009
    kakashi is emotionally stunted and when you opened his flood gates
    ... boy you broke his dam.
    ---
    Are you implying more than one thing? =O

    And yeah, this chapter was TOTALLY worth waiting for. I'm still rereading it over and over again, because I can't help but try to memorize it. It's that good. =D
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  • From polaris on April 17, 2009
    now I love kakashi-pein ,it's your fault !
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  • From suzannecmc on April 16, 2009
    kakashi is emotionally stunted and when you opened his flood gates
    ... boy you broke his dam.

    cool:)
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  • From satterb on April 16, 2009
    Holy shit! That was worth waiting for...you outdid yourself this time! There's nothing more I can say...Thanks for updating. And I can't wait for the next update! Love ya...Later Beth
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 16, 2009
    Another thing I especially like is that you find ways to descirbe the attraction to Pein beyond the simple "he's good looking" area that most writers use. When you mention Kakashi feeling a sense of security and safety around him, you give us, the readers, a window into understanding Kakashi's reasons for relenting and willing to be intimate with Pein. I like that.

    Another good bit you did was the fact that you translated situations Kakashi normally would have felt anger (Pein's presumptiousness, for example) into ones that he RECOGNIZED that he would have been angry, but finds out himself that his reaction is, instead, arousal. Most writers don't go through the extra time to describe the transition between anger and arousal- they just simply jump to the latter. And the ways you had Kakashi show little bits of trust at time- that was another good thing about this chapter. If Kakashi had simply allowed Pein to do as he wanted, and act as though he had not been in any position to reject him previously, it would have been to fairy-tale-ish, too unrealistic, to cliche.

    And, of course, your creativity with the location of certain piercings was interesting. XD
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 16, 2009
    "Like this chapter"? I LOVE this chapter! Thanks for clearing up the thing with Konan- I look forward to reading about what happened. =D The way you made the jump from Kakashi simply being Pein's subordinate to his 'teacher', and then 'date' (the restrant), and then making it so that Kakashi could understand exactly WHY Pein was having sex with Itachi, and then finally reaching that point where Kakashi actually accepts Pein... brilliant. You are an amazing writer, with an amazing muse. I've rarely seen any other writers who have come anywhere near of ability on Either FF.net or AFF.net- only three others, actually, (J-pop princess, Sumi Hatake, and sessha battousai.)

    The other thing I love is that you actually update regularly, which is something many other writers don't actually do...

    I love your work. Keep it up! ^^
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  • From suzannecmc on April 16, 2009
    oh my:)

    what a natural progression, and our poor Kakashi is so confused.
    so...what did you do with Konan?
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