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By : gingermaya
  • From jordash00 on July 10, 2009
    Ok so, my stomach is less gittery! However, you always have a twist somewhere or drop a ball, so I am not going to rest yet!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on July 09, 2009
    Wow. This story keeps getting better and better... =) I don't mean the violence, of course, but the way you dilligently keep the story alive and a certain way... is impressive.

    I also want to point out that you do a good ob in keeping other characters seemingly like themselves. Gai, in particular, as well as Tsunade. There are very few fanfics that I have read where she is either not evil, overprotectivemotherlike, so badly drunk she's barely able to speak clearly, etc. =D You've done a nice job so far. Or ones where Gai is all "THE POWER OF YOUTH!!!" 24/7 and it get's rather annoying. I like that you make Gai seem more human-like than he's actually given credit for. ^_^

    Keep writing! I keep checking every single day, even when I know you probably haven't updates... XD
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  • From satterb on July 09, 2009
    I loved that last line...He's my lover...Hah! Peins wrath is delicious! It's turning out wonderfully. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Iruka is able to see beyond his own feelings, if he ever loved Kakashi at all, then he would have to understand Peins feelings even just a little. Thanks for all your hard work. Looking forward to more. Yay you!
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  • From sesshabattousai on July 07, 2009
    I'm not surprised Kakshi's broken . . . but the way it's written still hurts my heart (and that's in the good way). I love the conflicted Iruka too . . . I couldn't have believed it if he hadn't wavered and had doubts. All in all another excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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  • From suzannecmc on July 07, 2009
    how wonderfully evil Madara is, (yes you captured him well:)

    thanks.
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  • From suzannecmc on July 05, 2009
    mmmm - not put off, just surprised you used a "normal"
    kind of torture on Kakashi:) but then again it was revenge
    for those guys.

    First thought was Madara sent the DVD/Tape too, also extremely
    happy you had Naruto involved in the "sting" operation.

    interesting, very interesting.
    thanks.


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  • From ANON - Seigo on July 05, 2009
    wow, Kakashi! nooo! I hope nagato comes and it wasn't him that told, please tell me it wasn't him! or itachi or kisame, please hurry nagato, i never thought someone would tip them off but i guess storys all have Murphy's law. Kashi better make it out alive and happy to the very end with nagato, okay!
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  • From ANON - yuki on July 04, 2009
    If this was a hard chapter for you to write, it's nearly as hard for me to critique.

    First off, I want to say that I'm still hooked to your story. ^_^ your latest chapter has in no way affected that (except I'm now REALLY bouncing on the balls of my feet for the next chapter).

    I also want to point out that your chapter is exactly what you said it was: not cheap angst, but an all-too real depiction of what being a Shinobi does to people and their sense of humanity, mercy, and perception of right and wrong. It was a very good chapter, even if what happened made me cry for Kakashi, and curse Madara to hell, and all of that.

    Don't worry, this is just a part of your story. ^_^ It was necessary, even if slightly... well, a little more than evil. *hugs* Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!

    =D
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  • From sesshabattousai on July 03, 2009
    I applaud you on what had to be a difficult chapter. It's never fun to write realistic abuse, but you did it well without turning it into a pity party. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Ryu Earth on July 03, 2009
    Really, I think that Kakashi deserves so much more cause you made me hate him (and made me hate Nagato and all them even more) >_>
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  • From satterb on July 03, 2009
    Aaauuuuggghhhh! That was soooo painful to read. But I'm proud of the prospective you put on this chapter. There was nothing erotic about this torture at all. It was as it should have been. Graphic but realistic. Thank you for putting such effort into the update. It has kept the story real and faithful to the original feeling. Love you girl. Looking forward to Kakashi's rescue. There better be one!
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  • From ANON - AnimeFanatic4197 on June 30, 2009
    I just LOVE your story! It's amazing how you can incoporate smut (awesomely written) with such an intricate, fantastic plot. And I admire how you give such long, quick updates! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From jordash00 on June 30, 2009
    I've said it before... Your stories make me very nervous and my stomach clenches everytime I click to open a new chapter. I never know where you are going which indicates that your plots are unpredictable!

    I am glad that Kakashi got caught but what will happen now??????
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  • From ANON - tepee712 on June 30, 2009
    I can't believe you just left me there....it is official in my books chapter 55 is the biggest cliffhanger EVER!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on June 29, 2009
    Glad you liked the fanart. =D I'll probably make more.

    I was waiting for a new chapter all week, kept checking back and then when I saw TWO new chapters had been posted, I was like "Oh YEAH! JACKPOT!"

    I had to reread both chapters three times in order for me to figure out where Iruka had figured out Kakashi had betrayed him. I suspect he found the note, and then went to Lady Tsunade, and then kept up a charade of still being his 'lover'. XD Briliant. If that's not what happened, then- even more brilliant, because even I couldn't figure it out.

    Such a cliffhanger! When I saw the end of chapter 55, I thought I was going to keel over- hurry up and post the next chapter, because that cliffhanger is slowly choking me. =D

    Good job! This story is awesomesauceness X 55.

    =D
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