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By : gingermaya
  • From mizukiruhoh on March 03, 2009
    a well crafted story. :D
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  • From satterb on February 28, 2009
    Nice tie-in to the present! I enjoyed reading this recent update, and it seems as if Pein-samas rise to glory was a little reminiscent to the French Revolution, ne? Great job...such realism. wasn't expecting an update this soon, I thought the muses were still recuping...LOL. Glad to see they are quite resilient! I look forward to the next installment, I can't wait to see what you come up with for all of us...

    Later,
    Beth
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  • From polaris on February 25, 2009
    I enjoy reading your work,as always,but I wandering...Pain is a very busy man!kakashi ,itachi, kisame!?kisame???Why not deidara or hidan?I'm joking,I really really love your writing and I can't wait the next update
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  • From satterb on February 24, 2009
    That was perfect. I've never read such a sexy Kisame before. To have him make Pein prepare himself was mouthwatering! I like the idea of his much larger body dominating Peins smaller one. I can't wait to see Itachi being taken by him. (HeeHee) I also liked the reference to Peins less than pleasant past/upbringing affecting his stature now. I don't think I mentioned this before, but it might be interesting to delve into what your perception on his past might be. Excellent job on this update, and I'm looking forward to the next. Later...
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  • From ANON - Yuka on February 22, 2009
    I love Nagato, and I love this story *o*
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  • From ANON - muji on February 22, 2009
    I really love this fiction,it's new and interesting,please Ican't wait the next update,I need more
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  • From ANON - muraki on February 22, 2009
    I loved it!pain-kakashi pain-itachi,whetever pain is hot!I love him!
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  • From polaris on February 22, 2009
    I am so completly addicted to your writing,I love your character's problems and your lemons are SO hot!great work as always!Pain is a mysterious man,but so interesting!
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  • From satterb on February 21, 2009
    You absolutely make Pein so damned sexy in this fic! Just Hotness on a stick! Thanks for the juicy lemon. I can't wait for Kakashi to come around. I know it's going to be good. Thanks for the wonderful update, and all your hard work. Looking forward to more.
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  • From satterb on February 20, 2009
    Yeah, I know what you mean about new info coming to light. But I liked this chapter, and I really don't think, in my humble opininon, that you should change direction so suddenly regarding Pein. I would think that nine tenths of the readers aren't aware of the revelations anyway. I hope that you keep the story in it's original direction and maybe the next story can portray any changes that have taken place in the series. Oh, and I was a little confused when you jumped from present tense to past, but I'm not saying that you should "announce" when the tense changes like so many people do. It just seems kinda cheesy. Thanks for your hard work, and I look forward to the next update...and you shedding light on the mysteries you've just presented. Hee!
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  • From polaris on February 17, 2009
    Indeed it's interesting how Nagato became Pain we know,I also wonder what's happened!All the same I'm very sorry for Jiraiya and Shizune (Kakashi isn't dead)and...now Kakashi will not injure Iruka,right?SORRY for english!I can't wait the next update
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  • From ANON - Muji on February 17, 2009
    only a word:bravissimo!
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  • From ANON - muraki on February 17, 2009
    your style of writing is wonderful,I love love love this story
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  • From satterb on February 15, 2009
    LOL...I wasn't freaked out, I was suprised that you made something like that so hot. I did like the oneshot very much, it was very tastefully done! I'm glad to see that you've updated this fic and once again you've left me wanting more, more, more. I also agree with you about the dynamics of Pein's character. I don't see him as evil like Orochimaru, I just see him as having a skewed sense of morals. Besides, the members of the Akatsuki are fun to read about when someone is able to flesh them out as I'm sure you are going to be able to with as much as I've see of Kisame so far. Keep up the great work, and I have alot of fun communicating with you on these reviews as well...take care!
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  • From Ainsel on February 15, 2009
    Kakashi/Pain? ** strange couple, but interesting
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