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Reviews for Matchmaker, Matchmaker

By : sesshabattousai

From wyntermist70 on February 28, 2010
Great story though I have to admit I didn't like the ending I know there together and there happy I just feel kinda sad but great writing as always.......
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From butterflies1974 on June 25, 2009
Can we have a story with a happy ended without the main characters dying? I mean I really liked the story but gosh can't people just live. Thank you for a great story.
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From Achillona77 on June 03, 2009
I knew it! that bastard Danzo! his filthy scheming was all over this...and tsunade! ibiki had threatened them and and the council!

first they sanctioned Kashi, and then Ibiki... and for what!? a bioweapon breeding program?! they're breeding superweapons!? the clone must have been truly unstable. was it that which was used to eliminate its competition!?

kill kashi to take his place and ibiki cause he was getting to close and would certainly avenge his husband?

well they certainly have a lot to answer for and two very irate beings who will certainly let them have it. there was a reason they hadn't left to go to another realm, now we know what it is...

avenge your family ibikashi... send them straight to perdition!
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From butterflies1974 on May 19, 2009
Your killing everybody! How sad but I sort of guessed that this would happen. This a good story and I can't wait to read more.
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From Achillona77 on May 19, 2009
strange how Gai could retire when ibiki and 'kashi couldn't [weren't allowed to]...
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From solitare1 on May 18, 2009
Please give us more of this story. I gotta know what mission was so bad they had to call Ibiki out on it.
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From dragonwolf2001 on May 04, 2009
This is a great story and I've been watching the rest of them for a while. I like your character development and think your doing a great job. Keep up the good work and please keep updating.
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From cynaga on May 03, 2009
Oh no~! Sumi is too young to be a Jounin. I hope Ibiki doesn't die on his mission~! Love this story. Thanks!
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From arabuzumaki on May 03, 2009
why do i get a strange feeling about the upcoming chapter? i know you are a bit twisted but please don't do what i'm thinking.
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From HavocTellenoi on May 01, 2009
Awesome story. And the virgin Kakashi? Totally a new one on me. I like the Ibiki/Kakashi pairing and the Iruka/Gai is something rather different too, but it works. I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming!
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From cynaga on May 01, 2009
Really enjoying this piece. I love GaixIruka - you are making it work so nicely. Thanks~! :D
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From polaris on May 01, 2009
so sad story but I love your writing,please more!
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From arabuzumaki on April 15, 2009
oh wow iruka was really brave to do that, it sure must have hurt. and what's with ibiki at the end? did he figure out that it was iruka?
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From butterflies1974 on April 14, 2009
Wow,I am so glad that they got a little girl. But I can't wait to see how Ibiki and Iruka's relationship develop. Thank you for a good story and I can't wait to read more.
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From Achillona77 on April 05, 2009
you've done it again! i just cried and cried. poor ibiki... he misses and loves his kashi so much. [i miss him too] he really wants to do right by him, and i can see that he let the stupid council know that he is not above seeking revenge. good! let em sweat! and it's not to see he's that ruthless, because if it was me, i'd take the pack from iruka. but he is not above honoring his beloveds wishes. ~~I can't see there ever being a relationship between the two, ibiki and iruka other than that of friends... he loves kashi too much. iruka will serve as someone to help him stay on track and raise kashi's child. and if it's a boy, what name would he have? kashi would be too painful.

it's great that gai is gonna pitch in too. gai knows all about kashi, especially his fighting style. and the pack will go to the kid one day. i believe kashi would be pleased to know that ibiki is going to make sure this situation never happens again, and is raising his chibi. as stated. ibiki's a better person than me... i'd destroy any evidence ... and kill the woman. as a message to the council. and tsunade looking over her shoulder in fear for the rest of her life... priceless. kashi chose well when he chose him. it's so not fair how they were cheated... but at least he'll have a reminder of sorts. that comment ~All he could think of was how beautiful his husband would have looked with a baby in his arms, and how Iruka was a poor substitute. �I�m so, so sorry sweetheart,� he muttered, �It�s all so hard.� is so heart breaking... it has me bawling... ~ "...I could never love anyone else the way I loved �kashi, it would be foolish to even try.� he ended sadly. couldn't have stated it better myself...Truer words were never spoken.
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