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Reviews for Thin Lines and The Shinobi Who Walk Them

By : LadyKyou
  • From ANON - anonymus on December 24, 2013
    It isn't 'Konkuro'... Its 'Kankurou'
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  • From Twiggies on February 09, 2009
    So, let the game begin huh? xD
    They have to act like a couple from now on? Cool.

    Ooh! Haku! ..I think.
    Awww, leaving flowers to Zabuza's.. grave. So sad.
    Or that's what I assume. xD
    Zabuza was one hot man...

    But focusing on the fic; I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ExposedDesires on February 07, 2009
    Moar! Moar!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on February 06, 2009
    Poor Naruto. I really just want to hug him when he's all confused like that.

    Lovely chapter, as always. Hopefully, now that kicked your room's ass, you can write more. :P
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  • From LadyWolf on February 01, 2009
    **sighs heavily*** I can't wait until you post again....

    I swear to the Goddess.....I have to re arrange my pairings that I love!! Lets see...I think Naru/Neji are almost my #3 couple....XD

    Post soon!!!

    BTW....Neji is SO freakin' HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - wyn on February 01, 2009
    great update *squeal.* thank you! look forward to more. and good luck with the painting and tiling.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on February 01, 2009
    Wow. Now that was hot. I just love those two together! I like how you're moving things along too. I know of your penchant for angst but I can see this story going without a lot of it.

    Lovely chapter m'dear.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on February 01, 2009
    Hot hot hot!

    Ugh I just wish they'd stop dancing around each other and get to the smexy lovin'!

    Well I guess the plot has to develop and so on :P

    Very nice chapter, can't wait for the next!
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  • From narugal101 on February 01, 2009
    I do so love a well-written NaruNeji...I hardly every write reviews, but this time I felt the need to commend on a fic well-done.
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  • From Twiggies on February 01, 2009
    Wohoo!
    Naruto's the man. XD
    The kiss was hot, once again.
    And they definitely seem really comfortable with touching.
    They just tend to go too far! XD Not that I mind.

    Can't wait to read more!
    I hope you keep writing and udpate soon again!
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  • From Twiggies on January 30, 2009
    Hahaha! Naruto tripped while looking at Neji's ass! 8'D
    Oh poor him. XD Though he did have a nice view..

    Ehh, poor Kiba. ;D
    His travelling was pain.
    I'm suprised that Hinata would actually ask for an advice, but it does make sense. XD

    Can't wait to read more! I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on January 29, 2009
    Ooh the excitement is just getting started. I really want Kiba and Gaara to finally meet!

    Ino describing hetero sex to Hinata was hilarious! But..no more hetero, it's on to the yaoi!...Please?

    Lmao Naruto's hung! Smexyyy ^^

    Please update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - wyn on January 29, 2009
    i am really loving this story! i look forward to seeing where it goes. great job so far! will be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. thanks
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  • From DarkRainFiend on January 29, 2009
    Oh I've got plenty of suggestions on how they can proceed and none of them involve much in the way of clothes.

    Excellent chapter m'dear! So glad to see you writing in this fandom now.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on January 29, 2009
    Yay! I think Naruto rocked Neji's world with that kiss. Nicely done as always :)
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