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Reviews for Thin Lines and The Shinobi Who Walk Them

By : LadyKyou
  • From cynaga on January 29, 2009
    Good fun and great tension.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on January 28, 2009
    Oooh! Really intriguing story! The whole concept of a homosexual mission and the fact that Neji didn't think Naruto was competent enough was brilliant! Not to mention the kiss was majorly hott.

    Can't wait to see what happens next. Naruto, dump Hinata already! ;P
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  • From cynaga on January 28, 2009
    Great story ideas and pairings. Nice read too. Thanks - can't wait for more~! :)
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  • From Twiggies on January 28, 2009
    Great chapter!
    Hah, wow! That kiss was hot!
    Who knew Naruto could kiss like that? XD

    And I have to say, you are excellent with words.
    ''Choji showed more passion towards his chips than the two showed each other.''
    Hilarious, once again. xD You write really well.

    Can't wait to read more. I'm already too interested about the mission. xD
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on January 27, 2009
    Damn woman! You really did leave it with a cliffhanger didn't you? That's cold-blooded, especially where you left it. Ah well. The wait makes the read better and I know yours will be awesome.

    Thanks for the tribute too! Maybe people will remember I still exist that way ne?
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  • From LadyLaran on January 27, 2009
    I love it! Great tension so far...and yeah, maybe the reason why it hadn't worked so far between him and Hinata isn't only due to inexperience but the fact he isn't as attracted to them as he thinks? lol...I'll be waiting for update!
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  • From cynaga on January 27, 2009
    Oh, too good, too good. I can't wait for more! (The cliffy was evil! ;) )
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  • From ANON - Tyra on January 27, 2009
    Heh, nice fic.
    I like it. Heh, they have a really lovely mission. XD
    I wonder if Naruto is going to kiss Neji.. 8D ..Well, of course he is, if he wants to go to that mission!
    And could it be that Naruto even has some kind of feelings for Neji too?
    It did bother him a little to hear that Neji has actually been with a man! 8DD

    ..And really, Lee and Neji? I like them, though in this, I'm glad Sakura asked Lee out. XD

    ''Gaara shifted in the large chair, sure that his bottom would never be the same''
    Hilarious line by the way. XD Oh and, Kankuro and Ino, hehe, well not for long! >XD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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