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By : Usha
  • From daughterofvirgo on April 18, 2009
    I was choking alongside Naruto there for a second. Thankfully Gaara was able to stop Itachi from killing him. I'm sure it was hard for Naruto to face Itachi after what happened but Naruto just isn't the type to hold a grudge. And it wasn't like Itachi meant to do it. He did lose a whole night's sleep over it. It makes sense that Itachi's concerns and frustrations about Sasuke are causing his condition. I wonder how he's going to overcome that. He can't avoid Sasuke for the rest of his life--they're brothers--but then maybe Naruto will be able to help him out. Awesome chapter.
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  • From miski32 on April 16, 2009
    Awesome story!!! I started clapping, but then stopped when I realized I was looking crazy. Please update soon. Your story flows so smoothly that I end up at the last chapter without realizing it. I enjoy reading the developing relationship between Naruto and Itachi while at the same time reading about Naruto's antics. I do hope Sasuke will forgive Itachi (never liked their parents anyway).
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  • From trystkinkou on April 12, 2009
    Awwwwww! This was a really good chapter. It's setup in a way that shows plainly how much Itachi likes Naruto so that when he attacks him it'll show his trigger for his "problem" all the more. Which my hunch will be to protect and defend Sasuke and since NAruto managed to land a hit makes him a threat. So I'm guessing the shadow is Itachi's and we'll have an angsty one after this attack and he sees who's his next "victim". And Naruto's ever "forgiving and understanding " nayture will only make him feel worse. MWHAHAHHA!! *cough* SOrry. That was just such a great setup chapter.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on April 11, 2009
    Loved chapter 6. I think you did a good job writing it. I have the same problem most of the time. Itachi and Naruto are so cute together. Sasuke was acting like a total jerk. I love him but I was kind of happy when Naruto let him have it. But then Sasuke did get him back. I bet Itachi is going to come into Naruto's room while Gaara's gone. Can't wait for chapter 7.
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  • From ItaNarulover on April 11, 2009
    Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!! *O.O* (picture of me being stuck to the screen in awe :P).
    I loved this chapter, honestly, it was one of the best ItaNaru chapters I've ever read. How dare you call it a bad one? *chibi glare* Because it had about all the ingredients for me to practically worship it. The flirting scene at the beginning with Itachi ogling Naruto's ass, the fluffy scenes between the two of them like the car ride, the part where Naruto punched Sasuke in the jaw (I was like "hell yeah" at that point *blushes*) and when Naruto ended up being the winner of their argument, the sad moments where Sasuke was an ass to Itachi and it affected him (*directs an evil deathglare at Sasuke and shoves Naruto into Itachi's arms to comfort him*), the adorable Gaara and the part where Shikamaru and Itachi played shougi. I could pretty much sit here all day pointing out the amazing parts about this chapter and entire story, you'd probably end up killing me because I'd never shut up ;P.
    So be proud of this chapter, it was great and I enjoyed every second of it. You rock, and don't try to make me think otherwise, because you will never succeed. *insert evil chibi laugh here* XD
    Anyway.... I totally agree with you, there should be an ItaNaru link like all the others at this page, I mean come on, Gaara/Sasuke is not as popular as ItaNaru...*grumbles*
    Anyway....sorry about the hyperactive and weird parts of this review, but I just ate some cake and ItaNaru-fluff tend to make me like this...*blushes and coughs*
    Can't wait for the next chapter, I'd like to see who the hiding shadow is, you've got me really excited. I'm looking forward to your update, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From daughterofvirgo on April 05, 2009
    I love this story. Anything with Itachi I usually love but this story really stands out from all the other Itachi/Naruto stories I've read here and elsewhere. I love how Itachi and the others are patients at the clinic, each suffering from their own problems, and Kakashi is their doctor. Still reading his book the whole time Itachi's in therapy. *laughs* I also like learning about all the different conditions; I thought the Sexomnia chapter was just a joke for Itachi and Naruto finally "getting it on" but I was amazed to find out it was an actual condition. Please update soon.
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  • From yolotengo on April 02, 2009
    Great story. I love the original Concept.
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  • From ItaNarulover on March 31, 2009
    Eh....hehe....ignore what I wrote about whether this was a ItaNaru-fic or not...I just noticed that you'd written it in the first chapter. *smacks herself on the forehead for being so stupid and blind* Maybe I really should use my glasses a bit more....*cough*
    And yay, by the way to the pairing! ItaNaru! *cheers*
    .....Anyway....I'm so sorry for taking your time by making such a stupid mistake.....don't hit me...*puppy dog eyes* XD
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From ItaNarulover on March 31, 2009
    Awwwww....this chapter was so cute, oh the ItaNaru fluff! *drift off to her personal ItaNaru dreamland*
    At first when I read this I didn't expect it to be cute but rather more angst filled or very "lemonish", but this didn't disappoint me in the least, I love cute moments between those two, and there was some angst as well, so to sum it up, I loved it!
    And also, how quickly do you write?! You posted the fourth chapter not too long ago, and then you posted this and you've got the sixth chapter done already? *in awe* It takes forever for me to write a chapter, at least a couple of weeks and sometimes months, well that might have something to do with being so busy, but I'm sure you're pretty busy as well. Anyway, I totally admire that about you, I've heard you're someone's Beta as well, how do you manage? *admires*
    Anyway....onto the chapter itself...I felt so sorry for Itachi, Naruto and Gaara. Itachi kills people without wanting to or being able to control it, Naruto could rape people and Gaara can't sleep, that's so sad, poor babies. And I also believe that Sasuke's a jerk, sure I would probably have been angry at my sibling if he were to kill my family while sleeping, but since it's something he can't control nor help than Sasuke should at least try to forgive him.
    I really like how this is going so far and I can't wait to read the next chapters, I would love to see the development of Naruto and Itachi's relationship (this is an ItaNaru-fic right? If not then bye bye, no I'm just kidding ;P, you could probably pair Naruto with Orochimaru right now and I would read it anyway...because it's awesome!).
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From ItaNarulover on March 30, 2009
    OMG, I must have missed this on the page, I didn't know you had posted another chapter until know.
    Why didn't I see it? *broods*
    Anyway...I'm glad I searched through the pages and spotted this because the chapter was great.
    It was fun, entertaining and exciting.
    I really like how you portray Itachi, you've managed to make him stay in character in such a credible way, I envy you. ;) And the last part of this chapter, holy Itachi's pure soul, that made my nerves wrack, I desperately want to read the continuation. Why is Naruto molesting Itachi in the middle of the night? Not that my pervert minded, but I'm really curious.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Noonespecial on February 14, 2009
    This is really interesting. The idea, the way the plot develops, the characters. I'll patiently wait for you to update.
    Best regards.))
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  • From Sessygirl on January 26, 2009
    w00t, first review... I really thought you would never post anything here.

    Anyways, I really like this fic... so you better update soon... or else... muh hahaha... lol.

    I know where you live... xD

    -Akiru-
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