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Reviews for The First Born

By : LadyKyou
  • From ANON - chocmilkchan on January 27, 2009
    thanks for updating! though the chapter was short in terms of action and explanation, i like your setup. :)
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  • From serenagold on January 26, 2009
    Hachi makes me laugh. ^^

    I like that Gaara is still caught up with what happened to him with Hinata. It would be cute for the two of them to get together. ;)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - chocmilkchan on January 25, 2009
    interesting setup. i'll be checking back for more updates. :)
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  • From KdaAnimefan on January 25, 2009
    very interesting, feels unique, i look forward to the next chapter ^^
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