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Reviews for Unforgiven Sin

By : Kagenoshi
  • From LadyLaran on April 30, 2013
    Incredible..I really enjoyed this. I somewhat forgot about it and am glad I rediscovered it!
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  • From ANON - unknown_user on April 29, 2013
    I read this in like a few hours and I enjoyed it a lot! One thing I really enjoyed was how Naruto, despite the pain being in the underworld caused him (the torture and rape) he was still willing to spend eternity there in order to make sure his friends were able to escape. That, I thought, was really in character for him and I liked how he was rewarded for his selflessness. You guys wrote an awesome story and I enjoyed reading it!
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  • From Witchwere on May 05, 2009
    I love this fic. I like how you have incorporated the Greek Gods into the Naruto universe. I really hope you don't let the lack of reviews put you off posting the next bit. Thank you both for sharing your talents with us.

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  • From MadaraSama on April 16, 2009
    This is so great! I read all the chapters in one go aand I reaaaaaaaaallyyyyyyy hope you'll update it soon! I'm dying to know what will happen! Please please update!
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  • From hsosborne on March 21, 2009
    interesting story. I love how you stirred in both the Naruto-verse and the Greek gods and legends. I can't wait to see what you have in store next. Do you think that when you do add to this, that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?
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  • From CrossLeggedSpider on February 02, 2009
    The more I read of this the more it captivates me. First I had some trouble accepting that Naruto was with someone other than Kakashi but now I understand his need for comfort. I feel sad for Sakumo, hes been in that aweful place much longer than Naruto. Its a wonder he can function at all. This story is fantastic in plot descriptions and how its written. I wish the next chapter will be uploaded soon. I long for it.
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  • From riotfox311 on January 30, 2009
    UWAAAAAAH. I'll admit, I was a little skeptical at first, because the style didn't immediately reel me in, but I really loved the concept, so I kept reading. And now I'm totally fucking hooked. XOMG. SO GOOD. For serious. Even though it can be a bit clunky at times, your easy portrayal of such strong emotions is so powerful it made me ache physically. Sakura's devotion to Naruto is amazing, and Sasuke's (what looks to be) path to redemption are heartwrenching. Not to mention the torture of Naruto's situation. At first I didn't like the idea of Naruto turning to someone aside from Kakashi for comfort, but I do understand what it's like to be in constant agony and to want nothing more than a kind touch. It's hard to ignore someone willing to give it to you, and even harder not to love them for it. Overall, I'm really liking this so far, and I can't wait until you have time to post the rest of the chapters. Delicious'd for sure. =D

    (PS- this is riot_fox311 from livejournal. XD. I'm SO glad I came over here to read this instead of studying for my midterm today >_>, and I'm glad you're not feeling quite so discouraged anymore. This is an awesome story. You might want to try putting it out there are some other Naruto fic comms with more traffic. It is a hard sell, but if even one person gets interested, that's good, right? =D)

    Anyways, great work! I can't wait to read the rest. ^_^
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  • From LadyLaran on January 29, 2009
    Way to go, Persephone! Btw, I thought it was Charon, not Chiron. I could be wrong. Otherwise, way to go Sakura for all the research and stiff backbone. Dang, I LOVE this story!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 29, 2009
    wow this is one hell of a story....its so deep....it paints a picture and makes youfeel it i really like it please continue your very talented writers.
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  • From solitare1 on January 28, 2009
    I really like this story, regardless of who is doing who. I like the story, the sex is just icing on the cake!! I do wish there were some way to get instant notification of updates here like on ff.net though. Don't be discouraged because people don't review, some just don't know what to say.
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on January 28, 2009
    oh boy...that's not good.... i feel for naruto cause kyuubi is gonna enjoy getting his revenge on him... jeeze.. so what's gonna happen to sasuke and what happened to itachi's soul? did it go to heaven or is it in tatanos?
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  • From Gwenn on January 28, 2009
    Hi, you gave me the link to this story on the kakanaru community.
    I think this story is interesting... I like the writing, and you describe the emotions well. The only thing bothering me is the love between Sakumo and Kakashi, not because it's an unusual pairing but because I feel like Naruto is replacing Kakashi... But that's only my opinion.
    I think this story has great potential and I'm curious to see where this is going.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 28, 2009
    Omg...Kyuubi in on it too?! Oh man..Naruto is in such trouble.

    Honestly, wonderful scene with Sakura, Iruka, and Sasuke. So touching, it made tears come to my eyes.
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  • From CrossLeggedSpider on January 27, 2009
    This fic is fabulous! All the characters are so well described and Narutos fate make the readers soul hurt. Plz tell me that Kakashi will remember Naruto and save him from Tartaos. Plz plz update soon!
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  • From Sylvia on January 22, 2009
    Roman numerals for chapter titles... how appropriate? XD lol *hugs* :3 ~
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