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Reviews for Twice Shy - A continuation

By : eternalshiva
  • From ANON - Alison on June 18, 2014
    It's so sad to see that this fic was abandoned. It was the only continuation of DameWren's work that equaled the original. I powered through this in a few days only to broken heartedly discover it had not updated in five years, and ended on a cliffhanger. I doubt you are still writing or monitoring this account but please consider adding a summary of the final events even if you never intend to finish writing it.
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  • From ANON - phil on March 22, 2013
    Please finish this fic its one of the better reads ive come across thnx Phil
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  • From ANON - Lillyopal on November 08, 2011
    And you are updating when exactly?!

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  • From DaBerrila on November 10, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I'm dying with out your genius.
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  • From Angelus03618 on July 10, 2009
    Friggin AWESOME. I love it!!!
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  • From serenagold on July 09, 2009
    oH SHiT!!
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  • From ANON - charliette on July 06, 2009
    iv'e waited for someone to pick up what Dame Wren has left off. the story is so beautiful and may i just commend you that you did a wonderful job continuing it. thanks and more power.
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  • From statnin on July 05, 2009
    HAHA!!!
    "not the sharpest kuneai in the tool bag"
    awesome :P
    Leaf > Out
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  • From eternalshiva on June 04, 2009
    o.O No I'm not published and thank you for the compliment but I'm far a long ways off from being that good ^^; There are far better writers out there (perpetual159 comes to mind and Rasengan22) I'm glad you're impressed :D I will continue to improve I'm sure and once I'm comfortable with my writing skills I may publish the original stories collecting dust on my laptop ha ha :P

    Thank you so much for all the reviews, everyone.
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  • From statnin on June 03, 2009
    Great Chap
    worth the wait
    Damn long scene tho haha
    keep it up ;)
    Leaf > Out
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  • From Perpetual159 on June 02, 2009
    Very impressive. I really loved this :) It was fantastic, and just as I like it: realistic. Something I'm not used to seeing, you were very descriptive when it came to the actual intercourse (usually people tend to wrap that up in two sentences and then make them orgasm... how boring). Additionally, another thing I appreciated was that you also placed a lot of emphasis on what Naruto, in particular, was feeling. Usually people tend to focus on the female side of the party, and I assume this has to do with most females being the ones writing lemons, therefore they naturally have more knowledge about the female anatomy, psychology, and reactions while in the midst of sex. It was very nice to see a story that equally balanced the descriptions between both Hinata and Naruto; not just Hinata.

    I have been planning for a long time to do something like that with my own story; only that I would balance it between chapters; one chapter for Hinata (which I already did in chapter six), and I had planned something for Naruto in chapter seven (which I decided to omit from the story, but that I am writing anyway as a side story to Clones).

    Anyway, you certainly needed and deserved the break before writing this chapter. I think it did you a lot of good! And that's what I always say... never rush a good thing... it will always come to you when the time is right.

    As always, thanks for sharing, and great job!

    ^_^
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  • From serenagold on June 02, 2009
    Hellz yeah for sexy first times.

    That was incredible. I loved it.
    If I were a smoker, I'd be lighting up after reading that. lol
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From statnin on April 28, 2009
    Cha-mon! next chapter next chapter!
    i like the shadres of red idea ;)
    Leaf > Out
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  • From ANON - Cueil on April 12, 2009
    You have a very interesting way of dealing with their sexual relationship. You do a very outstanding job with the story as a whole and I love the way you delt with Hiashi and the Hyuga clan elders.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2009
    This is just getting better and better with each chapter. I am glad you are one of the few that havn't stop dead in their tracks on their stories.
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