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Reviews for Lord of All He Surveys

By : Mrriddler
  • From Mango2508 on January 23, 2009
    Excellent story.... no really, i mean it.

    I'm not really disgusted by the pairing as much as i am that i enjoy it.... don't know why, i blame the same people you do.

    But really, i like the story, i like the pairing and i like the themes. (i'm screwed up, i know)

    Looking forward to the next from you.

    Kaminokaze

    p.s. Considering your stories, both here and on ff.net, i seriously hope you won't die.
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  • From animefan29 on January 10, 2009
    You should change the vixen reference at the end. A vixen is a female fox. A more appropriate term would be a kitsune or spirit fox which are known throughout Japanese myth as tricksters, plotters, illusionists, and other such deceptive terms.
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  • From SilverGriff on January 08, 2009
    i love it, a really great way for a smart bastard naruto, being the mastermind behind everything, it would be cool a little lemon and i hope this continue with a real bastard naruto who dominates his slaves all the time and not the other way around.
    keep with the good work
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  • From serhoth on January 08, 2009
    Yes I'm a little disturbed by this story.... Not because of the femSasuke but because I really what to read more of this femSasuke. Look forward to reading more.
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  • From Spaz666 on January 08, 2009
    you had better not die I want more of the story. I think it is cool to have a smart bastard Naruto for a change. too many people make him the stupid bumbling idiot and I'm tired of it. Also, for being unbeta-ed I didn't see any horrifiying mistakes. This story definatly keep us hooked!
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  • From ShouraiChan on January 07, 2009
    OMG....I thought I'd never read a story where Sasuke was a female. PLEASE continue this--This is different and edgy and I am already falling in love with the plot! Keep up the work! Looking forward for an update!!!!!!! Thankies! Muchos love!

    ~Sho-Chan~
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