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Reviews for Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!

By : Jelp
  • From Kerrisa on January 23, 2010
    Omg omg! I'm so excited!!! Sasuke came back! Although, how could he not, there's no way he could settle with never seeing his son again, especially with how hard it was with leaving him in the first place. I really loved how this chapter answered all the questions I had when I'd read the first question, namely how in the world Naruto ended up with a baby and house full of baby supplies. I was so sad for Sasuke! He wanted Naruto to stop him,but the big lug was out like a light D=! Now that he's here again I'm sure (or at least I hope) Naruto will convince him to stay and learn about his other son =) Loved this chapter sooooo much! I hope you update again soon! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 23, 2010
    ack!!! well?!! aww man?! what happens?
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  • From spooksies on January 22, 2010
    sqweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another chapppie!!!

    laters!

    miko
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  • From ANON - lryne on January 22, 2010
    thanks for updating its been a long long time, i was really waiting for this fic to upload!!!!

    i can't help but feel happy about the feelings of sasuke to naruto, does it mean that he love naruto already?
    T.T i can't wait for the next chapter!!


    finally, i do hope sasuke and naruto will talk soon and work things out like a complete family..


    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 22, 2010
    It's been a while since you've updated and then you leave us hanging like that??! *tortured gasp*
    Oh well. It was a great chapter and I cannot wait for the next!
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  • From serenagold on January 21, 2010
    Haha.. Sasuke just can't keep away. ^^



    Keep up the great work, Jelp!
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  • From ANON - Kaliu6-san on January 21, 2010
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA you updated!!! Finally!!! This is soooooooo one of my favorite fanfictions! Another great chapter, I hate cliff hangers so you better write the next one quickly!!! OOO i so wanna read what they're gonna talk abou!
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  • From jgoodman on November 26, 2009
    Love this story, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Timber on November 20, 2009
    I Love this story!!! :) MORE PLEASE!!! SQUEEL!!!!

    I thought that was very sweet of Sasuke to give Naruto the baby....I thought he did it as a temporary thing till he was ready to face Naruto....or something like that. But twins I so did not see that comming and am totally excited about it!!! I so can not wait to find out what happens next!!! :)
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  • From ANON - ktt on November 18, 2009
    Ch-ok...

    So I like the plot so far, but I thought I might add a little constructive crit?

    You have pretty much 100% dialogue and thoughts. And then descriptions of the dialogue and thoughts, but you have no descriptions of anything else. It's not a bad idea to hammer through the scenes like you've been doing, but in order to go from good story to excellent writing, I think you've gotta flesh out your work a bit.

    Good luck, and keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Chi on November 17, 2009
    Man, that kicked ass on so many levels
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  • From MarthJakotsu on November 14, 2009
    OMG i know what the brother's name is! OMG I did think sasuke gave Masashi up, because he didn't want him. Let me with a surprise. Lol Update soon! BTW I love your story!
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 13, 2009
    Yay you updated! I had forgotten how much I loved this story (how I managed that I don't know because I check it regularly for updates) until I read this chapter. I love your Sasuke. He is so... and the way he reacts is just... yeah, I'm just gonna say its perfect and call it good. When I read Naruto thinking about using his son to find Sasuke I immediately was pissed beyond belief, but then I absorbed it and realized Naruto probably would do that if he could-not out of malicious intent but because its Sasuke and Sasuke is his son's other father and they should be together. Anyway, I'll quit the rambling, but needless to say I loved the chapter and I like where you are going with this. Can't wait to see another update, whenever it happens. Goodluck!
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  • From serenagold on November 13, 2009
    Aww... I glad to know Sasuke originally intended to keep his child.

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  • From niceladysakura on November 13, 2009
    nice chapter it gets more interesting so please update soon

    i already love this story
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