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By : kodak85
  • From ItaNarulover on February 18, 2009
    This just keeps getting better and better, I'm ecstatic to read more.
    I really like the Sasuke-vamp and I can't wait to see what will happen when Naruto starts to remember.
    Please update soon, I really love this story.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From blugirlami21 on February 18, 2009
    How come you called it chapter six? I was reading this on Ochiba.net as well and I almost got confused but no matter. What a strange but fascinating little story you have going here. Two Sasuke's fighting against each other, I don't know who to root for. I am rooting the most for the human Sasuke because his pain is fresher and I can identify with him better as a reader. However although the vampire Sasuke brought up some valid points about what might be wrong with Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, I also feel it's none of his business, given time their relationship would have grown stronger and got to the level he feels it should be at. He's stealing from himself, he lost his Naruto maybe through no fault of his own but is this what is going to go on forever? Is he going to continue waiting for new Naruto's to be born, grow up, fall in love with his current reincarnation and then steal Naruto away? From vampire Sasuke's answers about the his past, I'm not sure how he got turned into a vampire and not Naruto as well or how he woke up a vampire at all.

    I'm starting to worry that Naruto will never escape because he is starting to fall for vampire Sasuke no matter his denials because Sasuke has the upper hand. Naruto is starting to remember his past life with vampire Sasuke and maybe starting to forget his current one with human Sasuke. I am loving the dichotomy in this story and I have no idea where this is going and that's a good thing.
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  • From StaplersBreak on February 18, 2009
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    The main artery in the neck is the carotid artery which goes directly to the brain. The main vein in the neck is the jugular vein which combines with the the subclavian to form the brachiocephalic which supplies the superior vena cava which then empties into the right atrium of the heart. In other words, the jugular vein goes to the heart, not an artery. Arteries carry blood AWAY from the heart, veins carry blood TO the heart. I think that Sasuke would know this, seeing as he's a vampire and all and needs to know from which vessels to feed. Love your story, by the way. 'S very well written and relatively original. I say 'relatively' because I wouldn't call any vampire story a completely novel experience. Extremeley nice, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From MichiyoInue on February 04, 2009
    I love it. it makes me soo sad. And I hope to whatever power will listen that Naru and HIS sasuke get back together...I love vampires but this time I am on the side of the human....

    Please continue soon!
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  • From Leeana69 on January 12, 2009
    My poor boy. ;_;

    Keep writing. This is so interesting. >.
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  • From Leeana69 on January 12, 2009
    HOLY CRAP. This is so interesting. I'm so glad you're not doing the overly cliched Vampire fic. It's so Intense. O.o
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  • From Leeana69 on January 12, 2009
    OH NOES!!!!! XO

    WHAT'S GOING ON!?!?!?!?!?!?!

    P.S. This is going on my recommended reading. ^-^
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  • From Leeana69 on January 12, 2009
    So...wait...so...This Sasuke is kind of a reincarnation to the "Immortal" Sasuke. Who I'm guessing is a vampire??

    I don't normally read the overly cliched vamp fics, but you've made me curious now.
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  • From Cindyip on January 12, 2009
    Interesting, a little confusing at times but something I want to see more of:)
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  • From Blacrose75 on January 08, 2009
    Curse your awesome writing skills! I saw karma first and then I saw that you had another story and had to read it. Now i'm waiting with baited breath for an update on either. Oh well, atleast I have another awesome story to read while procrastingating doing homework. Holy shit this premise is awesome, though i'm still not sure who I want Naruto to end up with. Part of me wants the humans Sasuke because I just like him more but Vamp!Sasuke is so interesting. I'm looking forward to learning about their past together.
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  • From on January 08, 2009
    Finally I could read it.
    After I saw that you updated two days ago I couldnt wait to read it but i hadnt got any time and so I just read it now and it was as good as expected =)
    Keep the good work and update soon^^
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  • From Halskr on January 08, 2009
    Ok, Vamp Sasuke has to capture and turn human Sasuke so they can have a threesome! Not just because I am a super pervert. I just don't like unhappy endings, and either way this goes someone is going to be unhappy. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From ItaNarulover on January 07, 2009
    OMG!!!! O.O
    This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I'm so hooked.
    This fic is going straight to my profile over recommended fics, damn you're good!
    It's so original for a vampire story, I love it.
    Your writing style, everything is perfect.
    I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Naruto, Sasuke and vamp-Sasuke.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care love. Hugs and kisses
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  • From Jelp on January 06, 2009
    This is an excellent story! I do, however, suggest that you move this from AU/AR - yaoi to the overall yaoi section, and just make sure you have a code stating that it's AU/AR. You might get more traffic for your story there. :D
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  • From on January 06, 2009
    dude I just love your writing style...and the story is just as good as purple, both are so amazing. I hope you update soon *jumps in anticipation*
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