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By : ItaNarulover

From knightkat on July 21, 2009
That was an awsome chapter. The interaction between Sasuke and Itachi was well done, glad to see the guilt, but I really hope they suffer more, especially with how broken Naruto is. I really liked the bortherly bonding between kyubi and Naruto. Zabuza/Haku was perfect. I love how they are in, and that it is through Kyubi not Naruto. I really like how you had Tobi as curious. I really hope he does some research, cause I really think that when Kyubi hears the truth behind the breakup he is gonna want blood and so will his brothers... Can't wait for more. EG
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From AlysiaStorms on July 21, 2009
Me very patient...

*Dragging her little brother out who is a big fan as well and smiles. I make him go buy me food 8D

But YAY! An update on this story brightened my day which until now kind of sucked. And nope no questions yet. I just going to happily fantasize about what is coming up. (Am a judge for a Narutoyaoi festival on Livejournal. Here's the link http://community.livejournal.com/naruyaoi_fest)

Other then that...Im gonna go read again....I like this story. And I adore Kyuubi...tee hee. Reminds me of me...
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From ANON - animelover on July 21, 2009
YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *huge GLOMP!!!* your timing is absolutely perfect. i just got rejected for a potential job ... the fourth one... and found your fic. i practically was dancing around the room for a solid 30 seconds. lol!

anyway, loving this chapter and how naru seems to be healing. and the suspense factor *we'll let shisui handle it". OMG! i see the writing on the wall but will keep it to myself. ahahaha! suffer uchiha pigs, 'cause you're gonna have to sweat for it. suffer, suffer, suffer! oh hey, while you're at it, could kyuubi AND zabuza smack itasasu around for good measure? ;-) just kidding!

well, enough gushing for today. This is far and away my favorite fic, and believe me, i've got quite the list. take your time and don't feel like you have to rush or anything to get chapters out. you do quality work ... keep it up!
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From on June 10, 2009
AHHHHH! How could I miss to chapters?! And they were so good :) I hope you�ll update soon *hugs*
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From AlysiaStorms on May 27, 2009
*WAILS

NO DAMNIT! I NEED MORE! I was patient I tell you I was really patient. Sits down with a tent and sleeping bag. I ain't budging I have to know whats going on, I mean I cry my eyes out everytine I read this.
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From Usha on May 26, 2009
Yay, you're back and you updated too! ^_^ I loved the flashbacks cause they were cute, but they made me want to cuddle Naruto at the end since he felt so bad afterward. The whole Akatsuki company has me curious, especially if said founder knows about Naruto and his relationship with Itachi. I can't wait for your next chapter
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From ANON - ghia on May 26, 2009
thank youuuuuuuuuu sooooooooo much for the update!!!!!! it took too long but it was worth it!!!!! i'm getting in love and more in love with this story!!!! please write in itachi or sasuke's pov next time, wanna know what their thoughts, what their plan.. and wanna ask u something, in chapter 5, in itachi's pov, he said he would make naruto understand even if it took him a lifetime... my question is, what did he want naruto to understand??? that he didn't mean it or that he loved sasuke as much as he loved naruto, and their (itachi and sasuke) having sex is nothing for him???? best regards to you!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - animelover on May 26, 2009
OMG!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!! this just totally made my day, especially since it's gross and raining out ... how ironic is that?!

gotta tell you my hear just about flew out of my chest when naru thought he saw itachi. hmmm wonder if toby will make some move on him. ;=) neji loves naru? geez, can't believe i didn't see that one coming. hahaha! and i'm DYING to know what's happening with itasasu right now. maybe they hired a PI or something?

i figure at some point itasasu will show up at kyuubi's door. my only request is that naru doesn't fly back into their open, loving arms. if possible, please have him fall in love with someone else. have had the "cheating" thing done to me, and even though i accepted it, my relationship w/my best friend who kinda stole my boyfriend was forever changed. naru deserves love ... nejinaru anyone?

n-e-way, i'm just so happy to see you and know that whatever happens in this fic, you'll be able to pull it off.

l8r!
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From ANON - princessembrace on May 26, 2009
I hate you! NOT! LOL, O'm in love with NightRain, even got as far as writing my own ItaSasu ItaNaru version, you have certainly influenced me.. You're my inspiration, that dragged me out of the hiatus closet... LOL
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From TheSimi on May 25, 2009
Yay, you�re back! *dances with joy before cradling my laptop close, getting ready to read this new chapter�Yum yum yum*

Poor Naruto, I can only imagine the pain he must be in right now. He has lost his lover, his best friend and his family in one go. It must hurt so much. Every memory that he once treasured must seem like a betrayal now. Reading the memories, they tear at my heart�

I am glad that Naruto and Kyuubi is getting along and that Naruto at least has someone left.

Oh and I squeed a bit when Naruto met Deidara�(maybe it�s all in my dirty mind but I think there could be a spark thereXD)

Poor Neji too, having been in love with Naruto for seven years�Does Naru have any inkling at all about the Hyuuga�s feelings towards him? Could things have been different if he knew? I don�t really think so but you can�t help but wonder can you?

I like Nagato and Yahiko here and I can understand their concern�As Naruto said, if the tables had been turned he would probably have reacted the same way.

Ooooh I wonder who the man at the other table was�You are eeeevil with your cliffies and yet I love them.

Tack s� j�ttemycket f�r detta underbara kapitel. Jag hoppas att allt �r bra med dig.

Tack, tack, tack och TACK!

*kramar*

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From ANON - Drakshah on May 21, 2009
I am loving this story.
Please don't let Naruto forgive them too easily. I want the uchiha brothers to suffer sooooo much coz I am such a huge Naru fan...plus they really deserve loads of comeuppance.
Please update soon :)
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From miski32 on April 11, 2009
Once again great job, I enjoy reading how the Uchihas are suffering emotionally and physically, so keep up the good work. I want to know if Naruto will be able to forget them and move on long enough to really make Itachi and Sasuke feel as if they're slipping into the seventh circle of hell without their sunshine.
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From TheSimi on March 20, 2009
Oh my...This chapter was sooo good, I've been meaning to review this for days but I've been crazy busy (sorry). Anyway this chappie was beyond goodness and I never wanted it to end. I love Naruto and Kyuubi's interaction and the way they're slowly finding their way back to each other as brothers, I look forward to see how the relationship between them will develop. Oh and Gaara is just amazing, I love his and his slightly psycotic side and I just wanna cuddle him and take him home (can I keep him please, please *puppydog eyes*). I believe that our manical redhed delivering the ring back to the Uchiha's finally triggered Itachi into realizing what he and Sasuke have done to Naruto and that there is a big chance that they'll never get the blond back.

Thank you so much for an amazing and enchanting chapter. Every detail and description are so great and makes the story feal real and alive, it was a joy to read and as I said I didn't want it to end. Now I'm on the edge if my seat just longing to read more!

Wow vad mer kan jag s�ga? S� otroligt bra...Helt enkelt fantastiskt! Hundra kramar till dig och jag hoppas att allt �r bra!

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From ANON - ghia on March 17, 2009
i'll repeat my earlier comment, this story is worth the wait.. i loveeeee iiittttt!!!!!!!! oh shit, i can't imagine itachi's expression when he accepted the ring!! you are genious!! i love you, i love yor story!!! keep up the good work.. i hope naru will get the best in the end...
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From ANON - shinigami on March 16, 2009
I freaken love this fic!! I was laughing and smiling the whole day when I read in ch. 4 when Gaara was carring the ax. I was laughing so hard. I can just see it in my mind, so good. Then in ch. 5 when he trashed their kitchen I was balling with tears rolling down my face, just thinking about it now makes me smile. I think they deserve everything they get, leaving Naruto out like that. Anyway good story, good plot, just good everything. Please keep up the awesome work. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
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