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By : ItaNarulover

From ANON - Mija on December 27, 2009
You know I should probably be feeling a bit sorry for the Uchiha brothers, but I am not...really I am not I want them to hurt MORE....and no you didnt ruin my love for them in other fics, I still love SasuNaruSau or NaruSasuNaru and sometimes I read the 3some ones with the bros and Naru, but I hold each fic as their own and as I said in this fic I absolutly HATE them, they hurt my poor Naru baby and I want them to HURT so bad for hurting him....and how dare Itachi think he owns Naruto and that Naru owes him anything let alone a face to face break up...pffft....yes as you can see this fic still gets my juices flowing like you can not believe, one minute Ima sniffling and teary and the next Im growling and wanting so bad to just grab those two raven haired bastids and strangle them so bad!......*breath...breath*

ok ok I am so trying to be calm and still praying you wont let Naru go back to the brothers, seriously, as I said I am a SasuNaru shipper they are my fave pairing and I can do ItaSasuNaru fine, but not for this fic I cant, It would kill me to read that, although I would have no choice since it is all up to the lovely authoress to do as she pleases since it is her fabulous story I am obesessing over lol, but I needed to add my two cents....anyhow...ty ty ty ty ty for the updates I LOVED them soooooooooo much and I say them because I seriously dont remember chapter 7 but alas it could be because I tend to be forgetful, I totally hope you update soon once again I cant wait to read more, ty ty ty again for the awesome read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From Fluister on December 26, 2009
heee, I just read the entire fic in one go, and I must say I really like it! I love the way you tell the story, making me understand and feel for both sides. And the way you describe the emotions is so real and vivid, I really love it. I hope you'll update soon, because I really wanna know what happens next!
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From ANON - anonymous791 on December 25, 2009
please DONT let naruto get back together with ita n sasu!I'm begging u,PLEASE!
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From ANON - Rainshi on December 25, 2009
Oh how I enjoy this story. It's not so bam wham thank you man kind of story it has more depth and I love it. I'm not good at this critiue thing, but I love it and I want to read more asap.
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From NarutoVixin on December 24, 2009
of course i will keep reading lol im a bookwyrm after all i just read way to fast and its hard to find stuff to read btw i love this chapter and will be waiting for the next one
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From ANON - animelover on December 24, 2009
This is the best holiday present ever!!! WOOT!! It kinda felt like a filler chappie, and I got a little confused over point of view at first. But as usual, you pulled it together nicely.

You know, I almost see KyuNaru as a way to "counterbalance" the Itasasu, even if it is only to make the uchihas jealous, and I like the way you had sasu pull back from ita thinking he's just a comfort screw.

i can't wait for itanaru to face off, and naruto telling itasasu to take a hike for awhile so he can get his head together. Thank you for sharing this and have a great holiday!
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From NarutoVixin on October 27, 2009
my list of people to keep an eye on is growing and you just got added to it i hope to see more of this tale soon as i happen to love it and the way its layed out your very good and i thank you for sharing your talent with those of use that are not as good
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From ANON - mickii on August 05, 2009
whoa. It's been a while. I had to reread the earlier chapters to refresh my memories and I still dislike Itachi and Sasuke. I've read fics (very well written ones too) where the Uchihas constantly tells Naruto how they can't live without their bright sunshine all the while going at it behind Naruto's back. Then when Naru finds out about their affair or decides to finally bring it up, he joins in for a threesome...-___- It was disappointing. It feels like Naruto is being used even tho in another aspect, it may seem like he's using them. I'd rather him remain a celibate than joining Itachi and Sasuke's twisted & messed up love. Sorry, if it seems like I'm ranting. lol

And am I sensing NejiNaru??? *grins with delight* at the part where Neji revealed his feelings to his friends. Perfect!

I've been hooked to nejinaru ever since I encountered this fic a while ago about where Naruto was in grief being unable to retrieve Sasuke. There was a request about how the ANBUs needed something (lovemaking)to keep them rooted to humanity and bring their mind away from the constant killing. Naruto accepted and didn't realized until later the person that had been doing him all along was Neji. lol. It was truly an awesome fic! I wish I can dig it up to reread again but I don't remember the title.

I love how Kyuubi is so protective of Naruto. so sweet =)
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From TheSimi on July 26, 2009
*squee�s and flails excitedly* Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter. You write this with so much emotion that it just jumps out of the screen and slaps you in the face (in a good way). Itachi�s breakdown was fantastic and in my view it really showed him as a human being. He�s weak and he�s flawed and I think it�s wonderful. The flashback of Itachi�s proposal and Naruto�s response was truly heartbreaking and it makes me wonder just what the Uchiha�s was thinking when they betrayed Naruto like that�.for years. Sasuke is human too and he even realized his own selfishness in worrying about himself and his relationship with Itachi when they have driven Naruto away. I can�t wait to find out the result of their conversation with Shisui�

You have the perfect mixture of angst, drama and humor here. Poor little Naru, being tackled and manhandled by Zabuza in the middle of the living room but it had me chuckling. Through the teasing and the rivalry it shows what a strong friendship Kyuubi and Zabuza has�Oh and Haku was just precious!

This is an absolutely wonderful story and each and every chapter is well worth the wait. I can�t wait to find out what will happen next. Will Naruto ever feel comfortable to tell Kyuubi about his sexual preference and will there be more DeiNaru interaction? (the latter is just a personal wish of mine XD ).

Tack s� mycket f�r ett helt otroligt kapitel�Jag hoppas att allt �r bra med dig. �n en g�ng tack och jag l�ngtar efter att f� l�sa mer! *stora kramar!!!!*

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From Mija on July 26, 2009
Oh....my.......God.....I would have usually taken about an hour or so to read the seven chapters since this is the first time I have actually come across this fic, which is sad I know, I dont know how I could of not seen it, but I have to tell you it has taken me at least five hours, I had to walk away from the computer to catch my breath and calm down at least eight times now, I could feel my heart breaking, LITERALLY, and although I have read fics where Sasu and or Itachi hurt Naru, and I hated them for it, I never HATED them like I hate them right at this moment, it has totally put me off of any lovey dovey feelings or need to read a romanctic fic about Naru with either of them...I know it sounds stupid it really does, but God the way you wrote this broke my heart and pissed me off, I have never felt my heart hurt or feel as heave as it does now I swear, I want to comfort Naruto and beat the living daylights out of the brothers, I GET that they love him in their own twisted little ways, but seriously if you love someone like they claim to then they would not have been as selfish as they were, a betrayl in itself is heartwrenching but a sexual betrayal is far worse I think or a mind one anyway....alas I want to see how this ends and I do want Naru to confront the brothers but I would so want to kick his ass if he forgives them and goes back to them, they need to be beaten silly, seriously, one hit by Kakashi was not enough, and a broken kitchen?? still not enough, they need to HURT....wish they cold looose each other as well as Naruto then they MIGHT know how it feels to hurt like Naru did.....ok ok I am done venting, wonderful heartbreaking story that I sooo need to continue reading, I hope to read another update soon, I have to have some kind of closure to this, odd that huh??? I thank you greatly for the wonderful writing that could envoke such emotions in me, not many can, but this had me balling I swear.....ty ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From FallingDemon on July 25, 2009
This is a great story! I like your portrayal of all the different characters and this is a unique idea I haven't seen before. I look forward to upcoming chapters. Keep up the great work, you've done an amazing job so far. :)
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From ZeroZoey on July 24, 2009
Glad Itachi and Sasuke are not at it like bunnies still, maybe they do care for Naruto maybe. Hope you update soon, glad you wrote about the brothers hope to hear more about Sasuke feelings for Naruto if he truly loves him or not. Well make sure to give the brothers hell and I mean alllllllllllllllllot please please please. And I hope you keep them from other activities until after Naruto is back or if he comes back to them. Well anyway keep up the great work and as I said before make them ( the brothers ) miserable.
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From inuspike on July 22, 2009
Another wonderful chapter. Poor Naruto, tackled by a scary man in the middle of the living room. Honestly, though, he shouldn't have been sleeping in an area with such easy access. lol Could have much more dangerous for him. I like how you're switching between the characters in focus, but it got a little confusing when Sasuke was in focus then you changed scenes and he was still the one we were working with (alliteration heehee).

Poor Itachi though, so emotionally retarded. I wonder how you're going to have Shisui react to finding out his cousin had hurt the odd little blonde he saw hanging out with his employees. I'm sure it will be beyond interesting to see how he handles the news.

Well, I do just love this story and I hope to see you updating it again sooner (hopefully much sooner than my slow self ^^).
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From snnj11220 on July 22, 2009
Instead of feeling sympathy for the brothers, I seem to hate them even more as time goes by in this fic. They are such assholes and are still being selfish by trying to force themselves back on Naruto with their whole we are going to get him back attitude. Never minding what Naruto may want/need. The are so selfish.

And don't get me started on this whole we will apologize and explain it to him attitude because there is truly no excuse for their deception. They are idiots.

As much as I love these three, I hope Naruto doesn't get back together with anyone of them again relationship-wise.
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From ANON - Yukiko3 on July 22, 2009
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
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