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  • From lara5170 on September 29, 2015
    I'm a bit confused, did I miss something? Was it a 1 time thing or was it going to continue?
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on November 24, 2010
    Oh my gosh a shark...LOL...hehehe that was sooooo Naruto and too funny as to be expected!!!
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  • From frijoles on May 13, 2009
    Naruto killed me how he confessed to Ita in typical Naruto fashion, I squealed and was happy to see he was the one who confessed first, poor guy had it in there for so long and no indication how Ita felt! I loved that Itachi felt the same way and been giving it much thought and not wanted it to be just physical, that he was able to speak of naruto these feelings made me so happy, I adore that, too that it was made clear on both end that sex wasn't going to be the way of repaying their debts to one another!

    Their coupling was HOT and Naru was impatient as expected and Itachi was a sweetheart complying, not like he was able to hold to going slow for long anyway, can't blame them. And you're welcome Ita & Naruto, hehe that such a surprise there, thank you Dominate! Having Itachi looking upon Naruto's form as he slept was justthe sweetest and most beautiful way on end this fantastic story I'm so bloody grateful that you wrote. I can cry now its over and say it was a joy to read increasing with every installment, more than well done!! -bows to you-

    -huggles and thanks dearly-!!! ~Cascarras


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  • From frijoles on February 23, 2009
    Aww, I just love having seen Itachi look out for Naruto again! He was so persistent in not letting Naru experience the horrors of being locked in with inmates, even if it meant contacting his family to pull a few strings. He really grew to like him, it shows! [I'm glad he made it to the station in one piece though]

    It just felt so natural for Ita to hold him and ask about his well being after being released and the dialogue that followed afterwards between the two:
    "“I'm not doing this just so that you can owe me; I'm doing it 'cause I want to." That was my favourite line!!

    I could cry, okie maybe I did, Itachi tutoring Naruto is a dream come through, it's no wonder Naruto aces those classes, beside his determination and all, I'm so happy for him having turned his life around, he's doing so well. Iruka no longer has to worry now. Itachi really is his saviour, isn't he!

    I can't wait to see what Itachi has in store for Naruto! And as always I enjoy every instalment and this brilliant chappie especially filled me with joy, made my month!

    Thank you so very much Dominate -hugggggggles-

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  • From frijoles on January 22, 2009

    It was a surprise to have seen Sakura & Ino again, I wasn't expecting to see them again, I see Ino's still down about Itachi's supposed marriage and on top of that to be crushed by the anvil of him turning out to be gay, she really has no chance does she poor girl, though that was pretty funny!

    Aha, so Sasuke doesn't know his brother as well and seemed jealous to know his brother and Naru slept in a shelter(of all places) together, hehe that reaction was classic, I visualised it all! It's lovely to see he's concerned for Naruto and helped in the past like Iruka had.

    Awww, I feel pretty bad for Iruka, he was this close to seeing Naruto this time around and was so excited too, I hope that if this situation with the police is cleared that they can reunite. His concern is just touching.

    Now! I'm dying to know what is this realisation that Naruto had! He seemed pretty confident about it! Damn police, they have bad timing, it was heartbreaking to be taken away by them infront of Itachi, he didn't even get any words out when he appeared...his eyes said it all....

    Thanks to Iruka, Itachi has learned a little bit more of Naruto and my sentiments, I too would want to know how Naruto got even with me, if I wasn't saved yet!
    It would take a lot for such a collected man like Itachi to shout, and we can see why in that scene because they take Naruto away...I'm dying to know what was on his mind then and what he will do next! I feel so awful for them both.

    As always I can't wait for the next installment!! I enjoyed this chappie so much, stirring up so many emotions in my heart
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  • From animeamy89 on January 21, 2009
    Ooooooo I am totally loving this story! The plot is very different from what I am use to reading with Naruto fics. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!! ^_^ Keep up with your kick ass writing!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on January 20, 2009
    OMG!!! I hope itachi or iruka are able to do something to help naruto again!!!!
    Also I am really curius as to why he wants to be on the street!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on January 13, 2009
    OMGOMGOMG!! this story is getting more interesting by the minute! I can't wait to find out mooore!
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  • From nekogirl1 on January 06, 2009
    hehe, good so far.
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  • From frijoles on January 05, 2009


    Foremost, I'm so glad you have gotten a Beta! - squeals & thanks ItaNaruLover-

    I really enjoyed the banter and the comebacks between the two, Naruto is witty and such a cute rebel!

    We got get some insights as to why Itachi doesn't like his family, can't blame him!

    There is no wonder why Naruto didn't like the shelters, it had a depressing atmosphere indeed but being in each other's company made it bearable, and Naruto considered Itachi a friend all ready =D

    I love the subtleties - Itachi not wanting to wake Naruto even though he was drooling on shirt and the hair ruffling was such an affectionate way of waking! I like it, no I adore it! He trust's him enough to take him to a friend's house!

    Short memory Naruto..you did the head thing you promised not too! -grins-

    Kudos, for all the ItaNaru goodness, Dominate, thank you!

    ~Cas
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  • From frijoles on January 05, 2009


    My goodness, Naruto sure is a hard person to track down when he runs away and I just love how persistent Itachi was in finding him.

    I really can't blame Ino's reaction for being dazed by Itachi's beauty when he visted the Sshelter, and it was a nice line he used to let her down. Hmm, Sakura was oddly protective of her, that is interesting.

    For a second, I was becoming really scared of who Naruto ran into and I'm relieved its just Sasuke and who would've tought Ita would have called his brother there then and there! Naruto's been found out there and then...I could just imagine his face!

    Now I really look forward to the confrontations, reactions and the whys and the trio's part, especially on Itachi's and Naruto's part!

    As always a wonderful job you have done, Dominate, I can't wait for your next instalment!

    -hugggggles-
    ~Cas
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  • From serenagold on January 05, 2009
    Ahh!!! Small world full of awesomeness!! ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on January 03, 2009
    Wow! Itachi was hard on naruto!! I hope he doesn't do anything crazy because he is hurt, or that if he does itachi can save him in time!
    I can't wait to find out what will happen!!!!
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  • From ANON - masako on January 03, 2009
    This is a really cute story so far and a bit different from most of the plots that i have read. I like this...i'm glad i did the random clicking thing today. Happy Writing!!!
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  • From serenagold on December 30, 2008
    Haha.. awesome. ^^

    Naruto always gives people wacky nicknames. My all time favorite, by far, was when he dubbed Zetsu from Akatsuke "Aloe Vera." ^^
    Keep up the good work!
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