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Reviews for Safe House

By : dolphina23
  • From Mishamad on April 16, 2010
    Sorry, Just realized my inner vicarious travel nerd went on a tangent, Still loving the story BTW.
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  • From Mishamad on April 16, 2010
    So far I'm enjoying the story, it has a wonderful plot and an interesting idea.

    But I'm not sure if you're trying for a modern era of Japan, or if it's a different Interpretation specifically for the fic, The fic mentioned this "Being gay was still very much a taboo in Japan, though the struggle to appear more westernized in order to better their foreign relations with other countries meant that it was now exposed to the rising acceptance rate of gay relationships, even gay marriage."

    While Gay marriage is not a part of Japanese Customs, Homosexuality is not considered Taboo in Either Modern or Ancient Japan, Often being seen as Pure love, the only time it was made illegal was during 1873, around the first entrance of western society and the restriction only lasted 7 years.

    either way it doesn't detract from the story at all and I'm glad to read such a well written fiction.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on July 06, 2009
    a wonderful and sad story. I love it. I hope you will update soon. ^)^
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  • From on June 04, 2009
    More please. It's frickin' brilliant and by far one of the best stories I have ever read! So PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 31, 2009
    I love this with all of its complexity in the relationships and the situation. I can't wait to see this evolve.
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  • From Ljiljana on January 30, 2009
    hmm. I always have a problem when I want to leave you a (well deserved!) review, because by the time the final version is done, we already discussed it.
    Let's see.

    I like your take on Kurenai. Not only the characterization, but also how you described her office as unpleasant. People often tend to make everything the mention in their fics perfect, as if that would help making the story itself perfect. Also, Kakshi grasping Iruka's wrist to stop him from going too far was very sweet, but in that realistic way you can always pull of very well.

    And the ending of the chapter was just perfect. It made me grin goofily. :P

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  • From RyuEarth on January 30, 2009
    This chapter was so cute and sweet! XD
    Thanks for the update! ^^
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  • From serenagold on January 30, 2009
    =^^= hehe yay!


    Naruto's hopeful excitement at the end made me smile. :D
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 29, 2009
    Very cool beginning. I really like this story so far. What was Sasuke doing on that train (I assume he's around Naruto's age in your fic?) When will Sasuke make a reappearance?
    Keep going!
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  • From mizukiruhoh on January 29, 2009
    I am so happy that this has at long lasst been updated! I love this story! :D
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  • From ANON - pasc55 on January 01, 2009
    waouh i love your story i think AU story ae very good and yours is very interessing.

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  • From mizukiruhoh on December 17, 2008
    well crafted and amazing details and sensitivity to the subjectmatter. I love this story. you're doing such an amazing job. :D
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  • From Kerrisa on December 16, 2008
    Hiyee~! Let me start off first by saying you are kickass at writing summaries. I was browsing, trying to find new material to use for procrastination purposes and was stunned at how awesome this fic sounded. So yes, major props to you.

    I'm not sure if you noticed, but in the second chapter, near the end Naruto asks where Sasuke is by name, but previously Sasuke never introduced himself. I had to go back and re-read their interactions to make sure I hadn't missed it.

    I really really love what you are doing with this fic. Naruto is so precious, i wanna adopt and cuddle him myself! I nearly skipped for joy when i read the first few lines describing the other passenger on the train. I hadn't expected Sasuke to be in this fic, or at least not show up so soon, but it made me estatic! He didn't say much, but how he said some of the things he did leads me to believe he'll be playing a pretty important role in this fic.

    Hugs and kisses to you, you should have far more than only just over 700 hits. You're freaking amazing. I plan on reading any other fics you've got up, but seeing how its alread almost 12am, and i have to work tomorrow AND turn in a short story that i've yet to fully edit... I'll have to delay my fun til later.

    Anywho, I'mma stop chatting off your ear =) I Love this fic and plan on seein it through to the end. Update soon~! XOXOX

    Sincerely Yours,
    ~Kei-Chan
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  • From ANON - lo on December 15, 2008
    This is so wonderfully written. When you speak of his lack of development I feel a tug at my heart. This is just wonderful you are truly making this story speak.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 15, 2008
    Im loving this, please update soon and keep up the good work
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