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Reviews for Stuck in the Between

By : lexjamandme
  • From Leeana69 on December 07, 2008
    I hope your happy. I read this before I left for work and now I have to redo ALL my makeup cause I was bawling.

    :shakes angry fist:

    Beautiful story, not many fics can actually touch my heart of ice cold steeeeel. >.
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  • From ANON - Death-Chan on December 06, 2008
    Sequel please!!! I would so just love seeing them growing up togther and how Sasuke reacts to others trying to get to his "Mine". Also how there pairents would react to Sasuke's new "Mine". This was the best and it made me cry with how sweet it is. I would just like a sequel even if its only a oneshot.

    Loving every word
    D-chan
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  • From digiditz on December 05, 2008
    What an interesting story. It was kind of sad in a way to see how their life could have played out if only they had meet. But the ending was adorable and made up for that brief bitter sweet moment. If I ever get a golden stuffed fox I'm naming it Mine.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on December 05, 2008
    Beautiful....
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  • From ANON - Seras on December 05, 2008
    I love this story of yours, from beginning to end(which I wish wasn't the end XD).

    I love your writing so much. Ahh this story almost had me in tears....seriously. That you can bring out such emotion is so.....I donno, so captivating. >.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2008
    Read this while listening to 'Save me from myself' by Christina Aguilera. It melts into the story.

    This was touching.


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  • From ANON - Rai on December 05, 2008
    This was really beautiful. Thank you for writing this, it actually made me feel better. Thank you so much.
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  • From fuuton on December 04, 2008
    Such a beautiful story. I don't even know how to put how much this moved me into words.
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  • From ANON - Luna on December 04, 2008
    The last part destroyed my brain with cute. =D I really liked how the story developed the characters' relationships. It was sad that they had missed so much in that life, though. At least, that's what I take it to be...what they could have had, but didn't because they had missed each other in that life. But the ending is making my brain slower with all that sugar. So cute!!! I guess Sasuke ended up finding a new "Mine."
    Thanks for this story!
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  • From noezel7 on December 04, 2008
    You just made my day, I hope you're happy! This is one of the most beautiful fanfictions I have ever read. The description of the courthouse was amazing and made me think about the afterlife, what it could possibly be like. The flashbacks were spectacular. They really described what kind of life Naruto and Sasuke should have had very well. It made me cry when I realized they hadn't lived that life yet. The scene of them not eating their last meal also made me tear up. It really showed how much their souls connected and how content they really were. The final straw was Sasuke running up to Naruto, ripping away the fox, and calling Naruto mine. It made me cry so hard core that my room-mate thought I had lost it. Thank you so much for this story. Can't wait to read more from you!!
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  • From demona013 on December 04, 2008
    Holy cow. That was a GREAT story. I really really enjoyed it. I have read many stories here on AFF, and this is the First one that reduced me to tears. If there was a way to favorite this story, I would do so in a heart beat. Is there gonna be a sequel? OH I hope so. I would like to see their outcome as they grow older.
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  • From Jelp on December 04, 2008
    As ridiculous as this sounds, I almost cried at the part where Naruto said he'd never finished reading the last Harry Potter. A good friend of mine who was really into the Harry Potter series died before the last book came out. I always wonder if somehow he got to find out the end.

    Anyway, this was a really, really great story. I was kind of like "Wtf?" at the beginning, but reaching the end I was smiling widely and joyfully. Very interesting touch of Hinduism and Monotheistic beliefs mixed into the story.

    I also loved the part at the end with Sasuke's "Mine!" Hehehe. ^_~

    ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Rachel on December 04, 2008
    Yeah, okay, my review sounds pretty ignorant. I mean, I got the story, I just, hm, it didn't do anything for me? I wanted it too? But, hm, this perplexes me.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on December 04, 2008
    You know, I would probably like this story a lot more if I KNEW WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED. I mean, I get it. Just, I was too confused for the majority of the story to really enjoy it...I think the story would have been better if Sasuke and Naruto dying in real life was first? I don't know?
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  • From Raelyn on December 04, 2008
    I never thought you could so thoroughly outdo yourself, but you did. I'm crying, actually crying from how freaking beautiful that was. I can't even think of all the things I loved about it without just saying 'everything' and I thought I was a tough critic.

    If you ever want to give us toothaches from the sweetness, do a sequel to this. Please. I can just imagine how perturbed their parents would be.

    Thank you for sharing that with us.

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