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Reviews for Backwoods

By : Ljiljana
  • From LadyWolf on December 18, 2008
    The plot thickens!!

    CAn't wait to read more...
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  • From dolphina23 on December 17, 2008
    Ah! Ahhhh! Oh. My. God. There's setting description, and it's . . . beautiful! This is so much of an improvement on the settings, and even building descriptions, than anyhting else I've read, I think. Oh, I could die now. I want more, though, so I can't do that. I'm sending you a private mail though, bexcause I have a question I don't want to ask here for fear of getting your readers mad at any spoilers. I loved it, in case you couldn't tell. And, you're beta did wonderfully. There was only one run-on, maybe two. Like here, 'This girl, Sakura, wasn’t hiding her tears, she was obviously happy to see him, and this guy, this nice pleasant guy with a gorgeous dog and a nice pick-up, they knew him.'

    Aside from that, almost NO grammar or word choice problems and you're sentence strucutre is perfect, even the length. This chapter is grand and if you keep this up, publishing in english is not going to be all that hard to achieve. Sorry, I'm gushing, I'll stop now. :-)
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  • From blugirlami21 on December 17, 2008
    You totally met my expectations. I don't know what I was expecting but I didn't expect anyone to know Naruto, isn't that weird. I wonder if Kakashi and Ino also suspected that Naruto was Naruto? He remembered something after seeing Sasuke so hopefully Sasuke is the key to unlocking his past. Why was Sakura so bitter? Does Sasuke remember Naruto at all? I hope so, I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From Mija on December 08, 2008
    aaacck, this is soooo teasing, how can you leave it there, so far this is like got my interest big time, I love horror and mystery and the way you wrote the first chapter was well written and totally drew you in, I cant wait to read more, I hope you update soon, I cant wait to findout more, maybe see who left him that note, is Konoha a ghost town now?? or do people actually live there?? cant wait to see, thanks for the read, hugggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From dolphina23 on December 03, 2008
    Hey you! I don't care that it's short, or that you haven't finished your others yet. I like this beginning! It's gravitating and intriguing. I'm filled with many questions about this version of Naruto, his past, the nightmares and whoever sent the picture and why they waited so long to give him so little about himself. The last bit, with 'the butterflies that had grown teeth' was a chilling picture. I can't wait for more on this one.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 03, 2008
    Intriguing beginning. Continue!
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