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Reviews for Warlord

By : sesshabattousai
  • From ReixDragon on February 18, 2009
    wow, just wow. So it was a happy ending after all. I was shocked that you killed them but that made it all okay. Man, i started this chapter a while ago but have been looking for a chance to finish it. Great work. Really amazing stuff. Anywho, fabulous story. Love how many twists there were. You really did a wonderful job with the mystery and danger elements and of course the smex was mouthwatering as always. Great story.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From killakell on February 15, 2009
    I think the story was really good but the ending was a complete and utter let down. It seemed as if you just didn't know what to write so you just threw in another lemon and called it a day. The chapters before the ending were great and then I get to the last 3 it just seemed to loose it's luster. I didn't like the ending at all but everything else was good.
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  • From Achillona77 on February 14, 2009
    what a great way to spend eternity! resting in each other's arms... waiting to be born again!

    What though the radiance which was once so bright
    Be now for ever taken from my sight,
    Though nothing can bring back the hour
    Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
    We will grieve not, rather find
    Strength in what remains behind...


    thank you for this epic... it was brilliant, funny, poignant and very enjoyable.

    Well done, grasshopper! well done!

    ~anz~

    ps: I guess movie themes abound in this one. "Splendor In The Grass," very appropriate! ~_^!
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  • From Raholea on February 14, 2009
    omg... O_O
    ok, now you have me curious..
    and not so damn sad.

    can't wait to see if you have more planned!
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on February 14, 2009
    a happy ending even thought they're dead. good story anyway!
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 14, 2009
    that was so sweet. even when they are dead lol ^_^ those two really were meant for each other lol. can't wait for your next story ^_^
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  • From killakell on February 13, 2009
    This is a really good story but I don't know whether I am okay with Iruka and Kakashi dying. It just made the story too sad. They were really the only interesting couple in here.
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  • From ReixDragon on February 13, 2009
    Wow, a death fic. I'm impressed. I didn't see it coming until maybe the chapter before. Really excellent stuff. Wow. Awww, poor guys. I'm sure Raidou will step up to the plate now but I just can't help but think that he doesn't have Kakashi's commanding presence. Anywho, excellent chapters. You had be fairly surprised. Didn't think you were a death fic kinda girl.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 13, 2009
    breaking the news to kurenai made me really sad, i almost cried. sad to see it come to an end but it was great.
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  • From Raholea on February 12, 2009
    O_O

    YOU KILLED THEM!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*
    I .... *whines* ... at least you let them die together....

    I have really, really, enjoyed this story, and i have no clue about how much more you're going to write, but damn, i think for me the story ended with Kakashi and Iruka dying. I will continue to read, but I'm gonna have to cry over this one for a while....
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  • From Achillona77 on February 12, 2009
    very sad, but i'm glad asuma's still alive.

    and this new form of government just might work.
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  • From LunakaWren on February 11, 2009
    *Sniff...sniff....* WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Ruka! 'Kashi!! My poor babies! *Snuggles them*

    Wow, this story had me hooked from beginning to end! I loved it!
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  • From Achillona77 on February 11, 2009
    kurenai's gonna kill asuma. i pity him when he gives her the news [unless kashi and ruka went to her in a dream] she'll clean his clock good.

    that little bastard kabuto got exactly what he deserved. itachi too!

    at least they're together in death...

    i wonder about the aftermath... did kashi die in vain? or will true policy and change take place... i know : a statue is erected in their honor! {one can always hope ~ aren't monuments tribbutes, anyway?]
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 11, 2009
    oh my GOSH again!!! i can't believe it. i just can't. both of them are gone. at least they found love before they died.
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 11, 2009
    oh my gosh!! tell me you didn't kill cute little 'ruka. that will be so sad. please don't do it okay. you made my heart stop lol.
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