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Reviews for Warlord

By : sesshabattousai
  • From Bookworm51485 on December 11, 2008
    ...*blink blink blink*.... *blink*.... wow..... well that was.... wow... I was kind of thinking that would turn into a dream... wow.... interesting :)
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 11, 2008
    O.O oh my gosh i plead temporary insanity on behalf of rai lmao that was ridiculously thrilling to read. i was like oh my gosh!!!!! i hope kashi forgives him.

    it's nice that iruka will be free. i hope their relationship gets stronger. and iruka isn't used like a pawn against kashi.

    these last few chapters were real exciting ^_^
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  • From RyuEarth on December 11, 2008
    yes, i really feel like something bad is going to happen, but, I really loved Genma in chapter 12! He was so cute and so sneaky! XD
    Chapter 13 was hot as well! ^^
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From shinobilover23 on December 11, 2008
    love this story. First a kind I think and I really like how you build up the plot and story line. of course the smex is always good I really enjoy this story and wanted to say keep up the good work. ^_^
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  • From Achillona77 on December 10, 2008
    this story is awesome! such passion! Rai is lost in passion... he doesn't realize what he's done in the heat of the moment. i just hope that his and kashi's relationship is repairable... it won't ever be the same again, but i hope the trust can be restored...

    but that kiss... all his feelings? frustration? emotion? how he felt was conveyed in that kiss... Ruka has a serious rival in him... he [Rai] won't be forgetting Kashi so easily...

    all of this turmoil? raw emotion? transpiring in the middle of a hostile takeover... they still have no idea who the co-conspirators are...

    the only thing i can say is thank kami for ruka and genma, their cooler heads will prevail, they've got rai's and kashi's backs.
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  • From Gingitsune32 on December 09, 2008
    OMG! I had been following this story but didn't review cause I'm a lazy ass but this chapter had been worked up. WTF!!!! You can't just stick your dick in someone just cause! I hope Kakashi punishes him for this!!! Afterall Ibiki did die for inciting the rape on Iruka. No punishment for Rai is just crappy! *pouts*

    Thanks for being so diligent in updating. You keep me semi-sane in the madness around in me RL now. Ciao~
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  • From Prism0467 on December 09, 2008
    Uh...Raidou has lost his damn mind!
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  • From LadyLuck87 on December 09, 2008
    wow this last chapter was so intense. they really need to learn how to knock before walk into one another's tents! i was practically squirming during the sex scene... i was like "JUST WALK OUT RAI! DON'T DO IT! DON'T DO IT!" whoa... but he did. you're a really fantastic writer.
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  • From sangohoushi on December 09, 2008
    omf that was so effin hot!

    wow.... *DROOLS*


    but how dare raidou do that to kakashi!!!

    what will be his punishment sesshou-san?

    and is there gonna b somethin deeper with genma and raidou --assuming that raidou gets to live after what he did to kakashi....

    please update

    *gives ookies*
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  • From sangohoushi on December 09, 2008
    wooooo
    that was hot!!

    gooo iruka...
    yay kakashi

    please update more
    more
    more
    MOTTO!!


    um.... i mean....

    *gives cookies*
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  • From satterb on December 09, 2008
    Damn!!! That was Hawt! Doesn't seem to me that the story got away from you at all!
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  • From RyuEarth on December 09, 2008
    Yay! I love Genma so much like that lol, I hope that he will be able to take care of Raidou!
    But I've got a feeling that something bad is going to happen T_T
    Thanks for the update! XD
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  • From sangohoushi on December 08, 2008
    OMG THAT WAS HOT! and even tho he's uke, iruka can sure be commanding... but raidou thinkin of kakashi while doing genma..not cool man...girl, chick-person-thing...

    um..... ^_^''

    *smiles awkardly and gives cookies as bribe* more please!
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  • From Prism0467 on December 08, 2008
    All right! Kakashi's not a virgin anymore!
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  • From satterb on December 08, 2008
    I just love innocent Kakashi! That was yummy...thanks
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