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Reviews for Warlord

By : sesshabattousai
  • From mizukiruhoh on December 18, 2008
    poor Iruka. His trust is so easily shaken. Kakashi loves him. He owuld never abandon him for a pleasure slave. Hell what they should do is free Hajime and send him on his way. That way they accepted the gift and gave the presumptuous boy his life back. :D

    Will Naruto be making an appearance?
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 18, 2008
    isn't that Hajime out of line!!!! calling sweel little 'ruka the camp whore. if i were iruka that little punk would have been missing a few teeth lol. no respect hn. great chapter, can't wait to see what becomes of hajime - i would have made him the camp play thing lol. but then you can't blame him i guess that's his duty i guess.
    and iruka just stormed out, he didn't even wait for kashi to say anything, now that is serious miscommunication or lack thereof.
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  • From satterb on December 18, 2008
    What a mess! I love this story...so many twists and turns. Can't wait to see what you write next!
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  • From Shaylilin on December 18, 2008
    I just wanted to say this story is fantastic and I'm always excited for an update.
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  • From satterb on December 17, 2008
    OOOOHH NOOOOO! Maybe Raidou would like him...hmmmm. Thanks for another great update. Love ya!
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  • From RyuEarth on December 15, 2008
    finally! the black cloud of 'things will now begin to not be good' shows up! DX
    But still, thanks for the update! It was a nice twist to have Iruka's uncle being the bad guy! T_T
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  • From sangohoushi on December 15, 2008
    GASP!
    now you reaaly have to update.

    PLEASE

    CHIBI Sango offers the biggest cookies 4 faster uploads...this is getting too good!!!

    update!!!
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  • From RyuEarth on December 14, 2008
    XD Have you read/heard of "Shiine" on ff,net? cause that part with the foot made me think of that big time! XD
    Thanks for the update, this chapter was cute! ^^
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  • From micahn10 on December 14, 2008
    *cackles* I can just see Kurenai having them trussed up in suit and dress waltzing to wedding chimes before either of them can blink. Still loving this story, i wasn't kidding over on LJ when i said reading it was like an addiction. *sigh* I almost died when i had to miss 3days. XD
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  • From satterb on December 14, 2008
    That was so sweet...I love Asuma in this...he really is in love with Kurenai isn't he...
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 14, 2008
    this chapter was fun. both kakashi and asuma are wipped lol.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on December 12, 2008
    sweet chapter! :D
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  • From satterb on December 12, 2008
    Seems Kakashi has a one track mind...Your dialog between Iruka and Kakashi was really well put together. Thanks for the great update!
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  • From satterb on December 11, 2008
    I was out of town for the last 3 updates. It was like Christmas early to come back to all three new chapters. I love this story and can't wait to see more. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From RyuEarth on December 11, 2008
    I still have a bad feeling about what's going to happen, but I loved the way you described Asuma and Kurenai! XD
    I loved them! And I wish Genma all the luck in the world! ^^
    THanks for the update!
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